Okay guys here we go! Chapter 1 of my first Fanfic! Again, this is my first one, so any feed back and advice that can help with the story and my writing is greatly appreciated! Thanks!
God this is boring, was all that went through Crysis' head as he leaned against the brick building waiting for his target to arrive. The Vale Police Department sheriff hired him to take down some guy name Torchwick, said the pay day was huge. So Crysis' nodded as usual and took the job. Now he was waiting by some shop name "From Dust till Dawn", and was waiting until the target arrived. Boring day, boring job, and probably a boring outcome thought Crysis as he looked up at the night sky.
-An Hour Later-
Crysis woke up to a loud crash and a red hooded girl slowly standing up, bearing a giant red scythe.
"Well? Get her!" was all he heard, and he then knew it was his cue to exit hiding. The girl started to take out the men one by one, and Crysis even broke a little smile, impressed by the girls abilities. Then Torchwick walked out of the shop.
Now's my cue he thought as he brandished Victorias Wrath and began spinning it around, building up the energy he needed to toss it. He then tossed it at Torchwick to gain his attention. Instead it slammed into the guy in front of him, launching him several yards away.
"You were worth every cent, truly you were." said Torchwick as he saw the man lie on the ground in agony. As he turned he looked at the camouflaged person who just took out his last man.
"Wonderful. Two little brats?" He said, as Crysis snatched Victorias Wrath out of the air as it spun back to him. Torchwick looked around and saw he was in a predicament.
"Well this has been quite an eventful evening," said Torchwick as he dropped his cigar and crushed it with his cane,
"But I'm afraid this is were the three of us part ways." as he then raised the cane and a small sight popped up from the front of the stick. He then shot it at the red hooded girl, but Crysis quickly ricocheted it off of his shuriken and the projectile exploded a few feet away, causing him to be blown back a couple feet. Red slowly got up and looked around, as Crysis tapped her shoulder and pointed to an escaping Torchwick, who was climbing up a building.
"Thanks," she said as she turned to the shop owner, "You okay If I go after him?" she asked. The owner nodded his head and she bolted towards the building. Crysis in close pursuit. Shaking his head as he ran, worried he may not get paid.
Once they got to the top, Torchwick was standing there at the edge.
"Persistent…." He whispered as a hover ship rose from his edge. Oh hell no, thats my paycheck, thought Crysis as he morphed Victorias Wrath into a bow, preparing to take a shot. As Torchwick climbed into the ship he turned and pulled out a red crystal.
"End of the line my friends!' He yelled as he tossed the gem at the girls and Crysis' feet. He immediately rose his cane and shot the crystal, and Crysis rose his weapon as a shield to hinder the explosions power, which never came. As he looked he saw a tall, well statured woman with a black and purple cape, blonde hair, lime-green eyes and white and black clothing standing in front of them with a gigantic purple glyph resonating in front of her. She scoffed and red looked at her in awe, Crysis standing there wondering what the hell the giant floating purple thing was. She pushed her glasses up and shot several violet projectiles at the ship, which caused it to start losing balance, and knocking Torchwick around inside. He ran into the cockpit and soon a woman in a red dress appeared.
The ship began to take off and leave, but the woman in white shot a bright purple ball of light above the ship (Crysis still wondering what the hell was going on, and thinking he doesn't get paid enough for this) and several storm clouds began to converge on the ship. The woman quicking lowered her wand, and the clouds began pelting the ship with small spear-like icicles.
Soon the woman in red began to glow and shot them with a fireball, the all jumped back to see the embers on the grounds heat up. Okay really? Fire? thought Crysis as he rolled out of one of the pockets of heat, that soon erupted into a pillar of flame. He looked up to see the ship flying away and the girl in red look at the woman with the magic in glee,
"You're a Huntress...Can I get your autograph!?"
