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A Whole New World
Chapter Two
By Kagome13
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha
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Inuyasha continued to stare at the beautiful goddess that was in front of him. Of course, his mouth got the best of him.
"What are you looking at?''
The girl looked shocked that Inuyasha could speak in English to her.
"Well excuse me, Mister but I'm not the one smelling random people like a dog.'' she remarked.
Now it was Inuyasha turn to be shocked, because most foreigner girls were shy and would run away from him.
"What in the hell are you doing in my forest?'' he asked, as he continue to arguing with the girl.
"You forest, I don't see your name anywhere.''
He didn't make comment, but he did make a weird sound that strange like "Feh"
"Inuyasha!'' Said one of his warrior "We must continued on our journey, if we are to make it to the Wolf Territory by tomorrow. "
"I have changed my mind. We shall not go to the wolf demon tribe tonight.'' Said Inuyasha as he continued to stare at Kagome
"But Inuyasha, what are we going to do with the girl?''
"We shall take her.'' Said Inuyasha grabbed a piece of cloth that had been tied around his wrist and his tied it around Kagome's mouth, using it as a gag.
'What the heck is he doing??' Kagome thought as she fought him as he tried to tie to the cloth around her mouth.
He finally got it around her mouth, and he made sure that it was securely tight around her mouth. He had both her hands, in one of his hand and he commands his men to give him something to tie her up with.
"Gimme a rope.''
One of his men gave him a vine-like rope to tie around her hands.
She fought him, by trying to scar and kick him, but he just dodged her hits and picked her up: throw her over his shoulder.
"Let go home, men.'' He shouted, as he led his men back home.
Kagome beat her tied-hands against his back.
Inuyasha's men were whisper to themselves, about the strange girl that had captured their leader interest.
"Why do you think he is taking her?'' asked on the man to his compains.
"Probably because of her chocolate brown eyes'' Said one
"Or her lovely long wavy raven hair.''
Inuyasha got fed up with all his men's whisper, so he yelled at them to shut up. "Will you all just shut up.''
All men shut up immediately for their leader's wrath was dangerous enough to kill them.
Kagome continued to struggle for her freedom, but she couldn't break out of the vine-like ropes.
Inuyasha and his men arrive at a village. The village was filling with tipis and strange things that Kagome has never seen before. Inuyasha raise his hand to signal his men, that they could return back home for the night.
He then still carried her to farther tipi, which was pretty isolated from the rest of tents.
Inuyasha walked into his tipi and drop her on a buffalo and deer skin bed. She let on a huff, as she hilted the bed, face first. She rolled over on her side and her bound's hand flow to her mouth to untie the cloth from her mouth.
She finally got the clot out her mouth. Kagome started to yell at the strange Native, which had kidnapped her.
"Who the hell do you think you are.'' She shouted at Inuyasha, who had his back to her. He was gain some plants together and putting them in a cup that had water.
"Here'' He said as he put the cup of water to her lips.
"What are you doing? Trying to poison me?'' She said, as she pushed the cup of water away with her bound hands. He ignored to her and again pushed the water back at her. Kagome was in a tire need of something refreshing down her thought. So she decided to take the chance with this strange cup of water.
She was grateful for the cup of water, but when she drinks some of it .She noticed that it had biter taste to it. The native took the cup away from her lips.
"That better not been poison, otherwise I am coming back to kill you.'' She said in a droopy voice, as she close her eyes to fall asleep. Inuyasha untie her hands and the gag around her neck.
Inuyasha tucked her in his bed with the deer skin cover and left to got see his father.
"Father!!'' Inuyasha called to his father, as he stood outside his parent's tipi.
"Come in, my son.'' A strong male voice said from inside the tent.
Inuyasha lift up the flip to his parent's tipi and walked in. Sitting there was an old man with his Inuyasha's hair and eyes. While the man was handsome, the woman at his side was beautiful. She had long black hair that went past her shoulders and unique violent eyes.
"Yes, Inuyasha'' the woman asked
"Um… I have captured a foreigner girl, which was in our forest.'' He told his parents sheepish. He scratched his neck uncomfortable.
"And you did this because?'' His mother asked
"Um, um… because.'' Inuyasha said clueless to his own reasoning.
"Because...What Inuyasha?''
"Because…''
Inuyasha's eyes scanned his parent's tipi and him cursing himself about coming to his parents to tell them. 'Stupid idea'
"Because why! Say it all ready.'' His father yelled at him.
"I want her to be my woman.'' Inuyasha shouted out
"I think half the tribe heard that confusion.''
"Thanks Mom.'' His mother just smiled at him.
"This woman as what?' His father asked, getting them back on topic
"My Woman, My Wife, My MATE!''
"Oh.''
"How do I make her my mate? Father.'' Inuyasha asked them
"You courted her and make her fall in love with you.'' Said Inuyasha's mother
End of chapter
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