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Chapter 1 – The beginnings of change…
"YYYYYYEEEEEEEOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Zeke jumped up in pain. The peroxide hurt bad enough to make him jump while he was still Justimon. Needless to say, it wasn't wise to jump, because he hit his head on the ceiling.
"Honestly Zeke… You take bullets easily, but one drop of peroxide and…" Sonia started.
"Yeah, well the bullets were more like beestings that bled…"
Zeke then finally thought of reverting to his human self. The wounds were still there, but proportionate to what harm they did to Justimon. Now the peroxide wouldn't be put on as many places….
Gary felt a little different when he woke up. Mostly cold, but also energized. That's when he noticed his pajamas weren't on him. They were in his bed, torn and stretched. Only his underwear was still on him, and they were small.
"What happened?"
Gary looked at the time. He was never awake this early. It was 4:00 a.m., and it was still dark out. Gary decided to go to the bathroom while he was up. When he got there, he turned the light on, and looked in the mirror.
"EEP!!!"
He was startled by what he saw. Normally, he was skinny. Now, he was kind of chubby, and his arms and legs matched.
"Huh?"
Gary felt his arms. They were tough and muscular. His legs were too.
"Wow! I must be strong…"
Gary looked down at his belly. It seemed a little odd. Gary felt it, and it was just as tough as the muscles on his arms and legs.
"That's funny…"
Gary slightly noticed that his voice was a little different. He didn't know why, but he didn't seem to mind…
"Gary? Wake up. It's time for school. Gary?"
James was worried when he saw that Gary wasn't in his bed. Then he felt a tap on his shoulder and jumped.
"You're silly…"
"Wha?"
James turned around and saw that Gary was all ready for school. He was about to congratulate him, when he noticed that Gary looked different…
"Gary?"
"Yes?"
"Gary? You look…different…"
"I know. I woke up, and when I looked in the mirror, I looked like this."
James looked over his son. Gary's outfit was a little small, and his pale gut poked out from it. James also noticed something that worried him more than the growth spurt…
"Gary, did you're eyes look different too?"
"My eyes?"
Gary went to look in the mirror again. His eyes where no longer blue, but instead they were an amber color.
"No. They do now, but they didn't then…"
"That clinches it. I'm calling the school and telling them you're sick."
As James went to use the phone, Gary held his arm as if to try to keep him from calling. Strangely enough, James couldn't break free of the hold, or drag Gary along with him to the phone.
"I'm all right…"
James was shocked when he finally noticed his son's voice was different. It sounded kind of like… kind of like Gary was younger than he appeared.
"Please?"
"I… Gary?"
James moved some of Gary's hair over his ears. Just as he thought, they were red, like he had an ear infection. The only difference was that they were only red toward the top.
"Gary, I think you're sick. You don't want the others to get sick, do you?"
"No… I'll stay home…" Gary said sounding depressed.
Gary let go of James' arm, and he could once again go to the phone. Gary was upset. He wanted to meet his friends today. One of them promised she'd give him a rare Guilmon card today.
"Maybe tomorrow…"
Gary sighed. Then he noticed that his hair was getting in his face. He swung his head back to get it out of his face, and uncovering his ears. If James had fully uncovered his ears, he'd have noticed they're also pointy…
James had the day off today, so he used the time to workout in is garage, where he kept his weight set. He was attempting to lift a one hundred and fifty pound barbell when Gary walked in.
"Need help?"
James remembered the times he pretended to need help to make Gary feel strong. He nodded, and Gary went over and took hold of the bar with one hand. James noticed he was treating it like a dumbbell.
"Gary… It's heavier than it looks…"
"Really?"
Then James began to push the barbell up, and Gary was pulling it up. Then Gary heard something…
"The phone is ringing… I'll be right back…"
The moment Gary let go of the barbell; it suddenly felt a lot heavier to James, and he had great difficulty trying to lift it to put it back up.
'Did Gary actually… That's not possible… is it?'
Gary walked back into the garage.
"It's the clinic… They said they need you there now."
"I'll be there as soon as possible."
"… You can't lift it, can you? Hold on…"
Gary then grabbed hold of the barbell and began to help James get it back onto the weight set. James was shocked at how much lighter the barbell seemed to be. Then when he and Gary got the heavy object in place to put it back, James let go, but Gary didn't…
"It 's not heavy… see?"
James couldn't believe his eyes. His son was holding the weight up with one hand like it was a five-pound weight…
"I thought you said I was sick… Aren't you afraid the animals will get sick?"
"Most animals don't get human illnesses to my knowledge…"
"Huh?"
"The animals won't get sick from being with people that are sick…"
"Oh…"
James had to take Gary to the clinic because he was afraid to leave Gary at home alone. He also didn't want Gary out of his sight. The thought of his unusual strength made him worry… When they arrived at the clinic, James quickly rushed off to the operating theatre. Then a secretary led Gary to the area where the animals were kept. Gary had been here before. As the secretary left, she thought Gary seemed a little flushed, like he had sunburn over almost his entire body…
If it takes ANY of you more that one guess as to which Digimon he'll become, you are just as naïve as the Digimon he's turning into.
Chapter 1 – The beginnings of change…
"YYYYYYEEEEEEEOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Zeke jumped up in pain. The peroxide hurt bad enough to make him jump while he was still Justimon. Needless to say, it wasn't wise to jump, because he hit his head on the ceiling.
"Honestly Zeke… You take bullets easily, but one drop of peroxide and…" Sonia started.
"Yeah, well the bullets were more like beestings that bled…"
Zeke then finally thought of reverting to his human self. The wounds were still there, but proportionate to what harm they did to Justimon. Now the peroxide wouldn't be put on as many places….
Gary felt a little different when he woke up. Mostly cold, but also energized. That's when he noticed his pajamas weren't on him. They were in his bed, torn and stretched. Only his underwear was still on him, and they were small.
"What happened?"
Gary looked at the time. He was never awake this early. It was 4:00 a.m., and it was still dark out. Gary decided to go to the bathroom while he was up. When he got there, he turned the light on, and looked in the mirror.
"EEP!!!"
He was startled by what he saw. Normally, he was skinny. Now, he was kind of chubby, and his arms and legs matched.
"Huh?"
Gary felt his arms. They were tough and muscular. His legs were too.
"Wow! I must be strong…"
Gary looked down at his belly. It seemed a little odd. Gary felt it, and it was just as tough as the muscles on his arms and legs.
"That's funny…"
Gary slightly noticed that his voice was a little different. He didn't know why, but he didn't seem to mind…
"Gary? Wake up. It's time for school. Gary?"
James was worried when he saw that Gary wasn't in his bed. Then he felt a tap on his shoulder and jumped.
"You're silly…"
"Wha?"
James turned around and saw that Gary was all ready for school. He was about to congratulate him, when he noticed that Gary looked different…
"Gary?"
"Yes?"
"Gary? You look…different…"
"I know. I woke up, and when I looked in the mirror, I looked like this."
James looked over his son. Gary's outfit was a little small, and his pale gut poked out from it. James also noticed something that worried him more than the growth spurt…
"Gary, did you're eyes look different too?"
"My eyes?"
Gary went to look in the mirror again. His eyes where no longer blue, but instead they were an amber color.
"No. They do now, but they didn't then…"
"That clinches it. I'm calling the school and telling them you're sick."
As James went to use the phone, Gary held his arm as if to try to keep him from calling. Strangely enough, James couldn't break free of the hold, or drag Gary along with him to the phone.
"I'm all right…"
James was shocked when he finally noticed his son's voice was different. It sounded kind of like… kind of like Gary was younger than he appeared.
"Please?"
"I… Gary?"
James moved some of Gary's hair over his ears. Just as he thought, they were red, like he had an ear infection. The only difference was that they were only red toward the top.
"Gary, I think you're sick. You don't want the others to get sick, do you?"
"No… I'll stay home…" Gary said sounding depressed.
Gary let go of James' arm, and he could once again go to the phone. Gary was upset. He wanted to meet his friends today. One of them promised she'd give him a rare Guilmon card today.
"Maybe tomorrow…"
Gary sighed. Then he noticed that his hair was getting in his face. He swung his head back to get it out of his face, and uncovering his ears. If James had fully uncovered his ears, he'd have noticed they're also pointy…
James had the day off today, so he used the time to workout in is garage, where he kept his weight set. He was attempting to lift a one hundred and fifty pound barbell when Gary walked in.
"Need help?"
James remembered the times he pretended to need help to make Gary feel strong. He nodded, and Gary went over and took hold of the bar with one hand. James noticed he was treating it like a dumbbell.
"Gary… It's heavier than it looks…"
"Really?"
Then James began to push the barbell up, and Gary was pulling it up. Then Gary heard something…
"The phone is ringing… I'll be right back…"
The moment Gary let go of the barbell; it suddenly felt a lot heavier to James, and he had great difficulty trying to lift it to put it back up.
'Did Gary actually… That's not possible… is it?'
Gary walked back into the garage.
"It's the clinic… They said they need you there now."
"I'll be there as soon as possible."
"… You can't lift it, can you? Hold on…"
Gary then grabbed hold of the barbell and began to help James get it back onto the weight set. James was shocked at how much lighter the barbell seemed to be. Then when he and Gary got the heavy object in place to put it back, James let go, but Gary didn't…
"It 's not heavy… see?"
James couldn't believe his eyes. His son was holding the weight up with one hand like it was a five-pound weight…
"I thought you said I was sick… Aren't you afraid the animals will get sick?"
"Most animals don't get human illnesses to my knowledge…"
"Huh?"
"The animals won't get sick from being with people that are sick…"
"Oh…"
James had to take Gary to the clinic because he was afraid to leave Gary at home alone. He also didn't want Gary out of his sight. The thought of his unusual strength made him worry… When they arrived at the clinic, James quickly rushed off to the operating theatre. Then a secretary led Gary to the area where the animals were kept. Gary had been here before. As the secretary left, she thought Gary seemed a little flushed, like he had sunburn over almost his entire body…
If it takes ANY of you more that one guess as to which Digimon he'll become, you are just as naïve as the Digimon he's turning into.