AN: Hey guys, I'm sorry for the confusion. Jake is differently looking in this story, he's white instead of black, I didn't really think of that sorry. But whatevs, it makes sense to me. Ha ha. Give me some reviews if you want more.
Chapter 1 : The Amazing Life of Loren Tate
Loren
Loren had been in awe, she had never seen anyone here in person, she had only found the one inscribing in the dirt she now assumed was Eddie's. She couldn't believe she was in standing in front of Eddie Duran in the flesh and blood. She also was suprised at how tall he was, about an inch and a half more than her. She looked up at his face. Replying to his previous statement, with "Than I'm not good enough.." she immediately regreted what she had said. She wished she had confidence in herself, but she didn't. Obviously, if she had been rejected from the contest, she had no talent. If only she knew.. :)
"You are good enough. Your amazing, in fact. That song I just heard you play was better than about 99/100 artists." Eddie said confidently.
"What's the one?" Loren asked confused.
"Me." Eddie said sarcastically.
Loren couldn't help but giggle at his remark.
"Wow, I didn't expect Eddie Duran to be so 'self-indulgent'" Loren said as if she meant it.
"Wow, I didn't expect Loren Madson to be so much like her dad." Eddie mimicked.
Loren lightly punched Eddie on the side.
Pretending to be hurt, "Ouch, what what that for?"
"For you calling me like my dad!"
"What? You don't want to be like a big time music producer with amazing hair?"
(Jake has brown hair, that is amazing. It is combed perfectly back all the time, his race IS white.)
"Are you saying I look like a guy?"
"No, your beautiful."
Loren's cheeks turn bright red. The conversation just got awkward.
"U-uhh I-ii gotta go."
Loren begins to walk away.
"Wait, could I get your number?"
Loren puts her number into Eddie's phone and he does the same for her.
"Hey, could I walk you to your car?"
Loren blushes yet again.
"Uh, sure."
Eddie and Loren walk to her car.
"Goodnight, Loren."
"Goodnight, Eddie."

Loren
Loren goes home after one of the most amazing nights of her life. Not only did she meet Eddie Duran, he had called her beautiful. She laughed at the thought. Only to be suddenly interrupted by the door opening, she expected it to be her dad, but instead it was her ex-boyfriend Cameron.
"What do you want Cam?"
"I want you back Loren. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to."
"How do you not mean to cheat on me with Kim?"
"I uhh..."
"See! Now get out!"
"No, if I can't have you then no one can."
Cameron picks Loren up.
"AHHH! NO put me down!"
Cameron drives her to the only place he could think of. A bar. He needed a place where people wouldn't pay attention to anything. They saw a person carrying someone else they assumed things that weren't true. He goes to MK.
Walking in, carrying Loren.
"AHH! Help someone!"
Eddie
Eddie was so happy he had met Loren. She relieved the burdens off of his shoulders. Chloe, work, everything. He didn't know why, he had just met her. There was just something about her. But he was unsure. He didn't know if he could trust his feelings at this point. He decided to go to MK to talk to his dad.
"Hey, Pops."
"Hey, Ed. How's it going?"
"It's good. I met this girl in my secret spot. She is Jake's daughter!"
"Wow, I didn't even know he had a daughter. Was she nice?"
"Yeah, she was really nice. She made me feel relaxed, away from everything."
"Well, I'm glad you had a good time-"
All the sudden, a blonde hair boy walks into the club carrying some girl.
"AHH! Put me down!"
Eddie didn't know who it was, he just knew he had to do something. He rushed over to where the noise was coming from and desperately tried to pull the girl off of him, the guy wouldn't let go.
"LET go! Noww!" Eddie screamed.
"No, who do you think you are?"
"I THINK I'm a guy trying to save a girl from something she obviously doesn't want to do."
"PLEASE HELP!"
Cameron slaps Loren across the face, leaving a red mark on her face. She winces in pain.
"There's more where that came from. Let's go."
Eddie had just realized it was Loren.
"No, leave her alone."
Eddie punches Cameron in the face, Cam was so shocked that Eddie had a chance to get Loren off. He grabs Loren, she is unconcious from the slap in the face, then calls security for Cameron.
"THIS ISN'T OVER PRETTY BOYYYY" he shouts as he is being carried away.
Eddie takes Loren up to his dad's apartment. He puts a cold wash cloth on her head and lays her on the couch, waiting for her to wake up.
End Chapter 1
AN: I know it's short! And I also know it's kind of odd for Cameron to take her there, but I needed Eddie as a hero in some way! :) Feedback?