Well here's the second chapter and I would like to thank Blackadder117 for his positive review. I also know about biotic implants.

As I walked- completely baffled by the existence of the Citadel- from the ledge Iwan and Alex started to come around. As Iwan stood up, he moaned in pain, glowed a familiar blue and pulled all the chairs in the room towards him. Alex then stood up, moaned and threw all the chairs away.

"No fair you guys get biotics and I don't," I said.
"Wait a second, biotics, doesn't that mean we're in mass effect? " Iwan asked.
"Yup," I answered.
"You've got to be kidding me," Alex said
"I wish I was," I said, "Just look out over that ledge."

Iwan and Alex walked to the ledge and stared over it for about five minutes. Iwan turned to me shaking his head in disbelief.

"Ok, I believe you but Alex has never seen the citadel so-"Iwan started.
"If you two think that we're in the game then I believe you," Alex interrupted, "So shouldn't we try to get out of here?"
"Yeah that would be a good idea," I said.

Then I realised why this room was so familiar it was the Human Embassy!

"Can't," Iwan said, "The doors locked." Just as Iwan spoke the door turned green and Udina flanked by two N7 marines walked in.
"What are you three doing in here?"Udina demanded.
"We...Ur um well," I stuttered.
"Shut it tunnel rats!" Udina shouted, "Kowalski, Brubaker deal with them."
" Are you sure, sir they're only kids?" One marine asked.
"I said deal with them!" Udina screamed.
"Yes sir!" The marine said.

The marines trained their assault rifles on us. Iwan then moaned and the marine came flying towards him. Alex glowed blue and swung a punch at the same marine, which connected with his chest. The punch must have been infused with throw as the marine went flying into the wall and fell to the floor unconscious. The other marine was surprised by this and I used it to my advantage. I sprinted towards him and tackled him to the floor. His assault rifle skidded across the room. I grabbed the pistol from his belt and pointed at his head. When he saw how I was standing he put his hands in front of his face. I spun the gun around and gave it to him.
"Thanks kid I won't forget this," He said.

It's good to be a paragon I thought to myself.

"Udina, what's going on in here?" A voice shouted.

Captain Anderson and a N7 marine walked in.

"Anderson what are you doing here?" Udina asked.
"He asked first." The marine said with an american accent with a hint of canadian.
Udina scowled at him and said: "I was taking care of some tunnel rats."
"That's a lode of bull Udina and you know it, just look at them they're too old to be tunnel rats," Anderson said.
"They still broke into my office, you must take them to C-sec," Udina said.
"Are you sure sir," The marine said, "They have N7 potential."
" Hmm you're right," Anderson said, " Take these two to the hospital to get their implants then get them signed up for N7 training."

As we left the room I heard Udina shouting and then I realised I didn't know the marines name.
"Excuse me but what is your name?" I asked.
The marine turned towards me and said, "My name is Shepard, 1st lieutenant Shepard."

And now the team has met Shepard this is going to be the first of many meetings I promise. And I'm sorry if Udina seemed out of character but I needed a reason for the group to hate him further along.