Reviews that I could not respond through fanfiction. Here are my responses to your reviews.

rayray: Everyone has their own thoughts for a story. Happy that you took the time to read my story, thanks. As for proofreading, I and about eight other people proofread the story. I know my grammar and spelling is not the greatest, but I doubt it was that horrible where others could not understand the wording. English is my first language. As for you asking if english is my second language was very insulting. Really learn how to review and give your thoughts nicely. With this one review, it almost made me not want to write again. Second read the warnings and notes, it stated that the characters would be OOC and that the story is fast paced.

Larrikin: Thanks for the review. Happy to hear you find the story awesome. I will try my best to get a sequel up.

ZenaMegami: Thanks for the review. Glad you love it and want more from me. I will do a sequel since a lot of the reviewers want it. (Blushes) Thanks. I try my hardest with the smex parts.

AN: I want to let the readers know, I will be working on a sequel for this story for those who asked for it. Thank you for all the reviews I got.