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Time skip: A year later.
We did finals in another school, and graduation on Main Street. Now a year after the bombing I'm sitting at home with my boyfriend Zander on our anniversary of a year we just got home from our anniversary lunch, and my parents are in Las Vegas. Right now we're watching a romantic comedy, and cuddling on the couch. I sigh as I remember the last few months, and I think of how lucky we all are, and lean against Zander's chest. He leans down, and kisses the top of my head. I can't help but smile a big goofy grin. I twist around in his lap to look him in the eyes, then, we lean in to kiss each other. But, before he does I put a finger to his lips,
"Not here, on my parents couch."
"Alright," he sighs. I laugh grabbing his hand, and drag him upstairs to my room. I open the door, and he picks me up bridal style, carrying me over to my bed, then hops up on top of me. He starts kissing me, not passionately like the day we started dating but, with more need. Slowly kissing down my neck he hits that spot making me moan. He pulls off my shirt, and his own, them pulls off my bra unhooking it in the back, then sliding it off with his teeth. He throws it into the pile of our forgotten clothing, then attacks my breasts first, grabbing as much as possible in his hands and massaging them, then he takes one in his mouth tormenting it with his mouth, and rubbing the other. When he thinks the one in his mouth has had enough he switches. He slowly continues kissing down to the waist band of my pants he un- buttons them and slides them down and smirks when he see how wet my panties are.
"Excited much?" he whispers seductively in my ear. I had had enough then. I flip us over so I'm on top and un- button his pants but when I un- zip them I press down so he feels the vibration making him moan my name.
"yes, but I'm not the one with a ten inch boner." With that I slowly glide his boxers down and grab his shaft and start to stroke up and down on it. Then I take him in my mouth using my tits rub the rest if his shaft I couldn't fit in. He grabs my head bobbing it up and down while moaning,
"Ba- baby don't st- stop"
Switch POVS: Zander
I want to give her a little something in return for that so before I cum I grab a chunk of her hair and pull her up to my lips again just to push her down on the bed and tear her panties of her and start rubbing her clit and say,
"You're so wet for me, I love it." She tries to say something but can only moan when I slip a finger in her, I add another then another then start to eat her out. She moans my name really loud and I tell her how good she tastes.
"I want you now," She says.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes." So I slip on a condom and line up with her entrance this is only her second time, I know it's going to hurt her but I feel better because I think about how she choose me to be her first. I look up at her to make sure she is sure and she nods. I slowly push into her and she cries out in pain, I kiss her gently because I hate to see her in pain.
"We can stop if you want."
"No, just let me adjust." I continue to kiss her slowly.
"Go." I start to thrust into her and moan at how tight she is.
"Ooh, fuck yeah, fuck me harder." I start to thrust faster because it is such a turn on for me when she cusses. She's screaming my name as she cums and that sends me over the edge I thrust as fast as possible then cum and pull out if her, throw the condom away and fall by her side. I pull her close and buries her face into my chest and we both drift off to sleep.