I understand if you guys don't like my story, but at least tell me what you don't like BEFORE you put it as one of the WORST Inuyasha Fanfics Around. I would please, if it's not too much trouble, like to know what is sooooo horrible about it. I would understand if you hated my other story : An Infatuation : Waiting on Love to Arrive because I myself don't like that one. I would just like some clarification. Please review or send me a message to tell me how you feel about the story so far.
P.S. Thank you Sesshy Rin 4ever for helping me and giving me advice. It means a lot.
Hopefully this chapter will be better for you guys.
At the Takahashi Manor
"INUYASHA WAKE UP!" Miroku and Koga yell. "WAKE UP!" they yell again while hitting him whith gigantic pillows. Inuyasha just takes an even LARGER pillow and throws it at them. "OW!" they chorus. "How can he throw pillows IN HIS SLEEP!?" asked Koga. "I have no idea." replies Miroku. THUMP THUMP THUMP. "Oh no." says a terrified Miroku. "Oh crap, oh crap, oh crap." Koga panics while still trying to wake up Inu. "Inu if you don't wake up RIGHT NOW Sesshomaru's gonna destroy us all!" screams Koga. "DESTORY US ALLLLLL, DESTROY US ALLLLL, DESTROY US ALLLL, DESTRO US-!" BOOM! "SHUT UP!" yells Sesshomaru.
" I- NU- YA- SHA!" bellows Sesshomaru. "AWWWWWWWWWWW SHIT!" whine Koga and Miroku. "Were dead." they sigh. " INUYASHA if you don't get up RIGHT NOW I WILL decapitate you." Sesshy warns. "Mmbbmbbm." Inu mumbles as he waves his hand in a dismissive way. Twitch. Seshy growls. He grabs Inu by his legs and drags him out of bed and into the bathroom. He then proceeds to dump into the bathtub and turn the shower on ICE COLD. "AHHHHHHHHHHH!" Inu screams as he jumps up. "WHAT HE HELL WAS THAT FOR!" he yells at Sesshy. "That was for not getting up when not only I but Miroku and Koga aksed you to. We're tired of having to wake you up in the morning." he replies back calmly. "Well you didn't have throw me in an ICE COLD SHOWER!" Inu bellowed. "I wouldn't have to if you had just gotten UP." Sesshomaru says coldly. "Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" growls Inu. "Just shut up and get ready to go, we only have 15 minutes to get to school ON TIME." says Sesshy.
"And if we don't make it on time." challenges Inu. "You don't want to find out, so don't test my patience and self-control or you just might find yourself short of a couple of limbs. Sesshy threatens as he walks out of the room. "Feh." Miroku and Koga exchange glances. "Bye Inu see ya downstairs.' they chorus as they rush to catch up with Sesshomaru.