Part two is up! I'm really not gonna wait for reviews or any of that, because I wanna get this story up ASAP. And I kind of forgot to mention that Fang may be a bit OOC in this fic… Sorry. But, aside from that, I'm working on chapter 5 of Things With Wings, and my laptop broke a while ago (If you read a while ago that my old computer broke, don't you know that I have such GREAT luck with technology? Lol) so I'm waiting to see if that can be fixed cause I'm pretty damn sure that I already started chapter 2 of Kellyn on Word on that laptop. Meh.
I also want to thank all of my reviewers so far:
Maximumrider99, fleeceinabox, Virls1o1, and BlackxXxFire
Thank you guys, for supporting me. :)
Anywho- PHASE 2~~~
Chapter 2- 50 Reasons
Fang P.O.V.
I watch on my laptop the little hidden cameras I stole from Gazzy for this, to see what Max's reaction is when she reads the first way I'm telling her. As I watch her, I get a bit scared because of one point where she just looked like it was so strange, but then I smile at her face when she reads the last part out loud. She rolls over on her bed and I watch her peacefully fall asleep with the note in her hand. I close my laptop and fall asleep.
*The Next Morning*
"Fang, get up!" I automatically shoot out of bed because of many years of being awoken from Eraser attacks. When I get more control, I notice that it was just Angel and Nudge again.
"Whadayawan?" I ask tiredly. Angel drops my laptop on me.
"Start writing," she commands bluntly.
"Wha?"
She shows me the whiteboard again, and points to the second thing on the list. Holy sh*t.
"Start writing," they both say again. I open my laptop and start on number two on the list of my five ways.
Phase 2- 50 Reasons
*8:00 PM*
Max P.O.V.
Ugh! I am seriously getting so pissed off with Fang lately. Today he basically just sat in his room and did nothing all day. Gosh, I will find out why he's acting like this.
I see Nudge pass by in the kitchen. "Hey Nudge," I greet her.
She looks at me nervously. "Hi, Max…"
"Whatcha doing?" I ask her slowly. She fidgets.
"Oh, nothing. Just bringing these pens up to Fang…" I look at her questioningly. "...He's doing this… application… for a job at… McDonalds!" I raise my eyebrow at her.
"McDonalds? Sorry to be blunt but, what the heck are you guys planning?" I ask her.
"Nothing!" Hmmm…We'll see about that…
I walk to the stairs and see a piece of paper hanging in front of me. I look at what it says carefully.
The 50 Reasons Why I Love My Birdgirl…
That's all that it says… I turn it over.
Check the walls as you go up the stairs…
Huh? As I walk up the stairs to my bedroom, I see little notes taped to the walls. The first one says:
50. I can be myself with you…
49. You love me even with all my faults (Like giant black wings…)
48. You are the best 'mother' that our Flock could have.
As I continue on walking, I see multiple other notes.
47. Even when I'm a 'quiet, unemotional rock', you still like me.
46. You let me be silent and never question me.
45. You're the best smart-ass that I know.
I chuckle a bit at that.
44. When I disappear (literally) you find me.
43. You make me feel like I've never felt before.
42. We can talk about everything and nothing, and it'll still be okay with you.
41. When we hold each other, everything seems perfect, even in our crazy lives.
40. The way you see through my stone-hard expressions.
39. Because you're soooo warm and cuddly (Sarcasm there.)
38. You're beautiful, even when you're covered in dirt and blood.
37. The way you touch me, as if trying not to break me.
36. You're always on my side.
35. When you need to cry, you let me lend you a shoulder.
34. You're so dependable and trustworthy.
33. When we're with each other, the Erasers don't matter.
32. You have the most beautiful smile I've ever seen.
31. You are the light in mine and the Flock's lives.
30. You know how to bring a smile to my face.
29. You're as helpful as therapy - without the charge.
28. You always try to protect everyone without asking for anything in return. Time to return the favour.
27. You have an amazing sense of humor.
26. You're simply irresistible
25. You whack me if I forgot something worth remembering.
24. Every moment spent with each other is a moment treasured.
23. You say we're everything you need in life.
22. Your loving gaze is enough to bring me through a long day of surviving.
21. Your eyes are the lovely color of unbarfed chocolate. (hence, Beautiful)
20. The softness of your voice is like silk on my soul.
19. You've seen me at my worst and you still love me.
18. You know all my secrets and keep them.
Oh. poetic, aren't we, Fang?
17. You have the cutest booty ever… *Smile*
16. You're so hot.
15. Your lips are always soft and warm.
I laugh more at number 17…
14. You're shy with showing your feelings for me (though a bit frustrating sometimes).
13. You listen to me when it's important.
12. I give you one touch and your knees buckle.
11. You got jealous with that girl from Virginia. Lissa, was it?
10. If you shaved your legs, they would be cuter than mine.
09. You move to lie on my chest when we sleep on the ground.
Holy crap… He knew about that little thing in Virginia?
08. You're only mad for a little while when I beat you at brawling.
07. You excite me, delight me, and ignite me.
06. I can't go without you.
05. You taught me what love is…
04. You never get bored of me.
03. You out the Flock before anything else… even saving the world from mad scientists
There is a smaller one pinned on my door…
02. Your intelligence… because you were smart enough to fall in love with me… hehe…
After I read it, I walk into my room and what I saw surprised me.
Fang was standing there holding up the last note. He said out loud:
"You are crazily, deeply, incredibly, joyously, terrifyingly in love with me."
I smile and walk over to hug the stupid jerk.
~~Rosalie Ride~~