Hey everybody so here's chapter 2! Thanks to Stickermans50, The Flash Pirate, and Lightningblade49 there's another chapter for the worlds enjoyment I tried being more detailed about environments this time around and followed some pointers I received from the 3 awesome guys that were named! You should check all three of there stories out. Read and review, and don't forget to follow and favorite!
"thoughts/flashback"
"dialogue"
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Jack was currently in a large open field as green as his eyes filled with chocolate cake as far as the eye could see. Jack had only one question and he decided to ask the world.
"IS THIS HEAVEN!?" Jack could barely hold his excitement. He was skipping through the fields and taking a bite out of some chocolate cake as he went. "Thank you Erza-chan this truly is heaven! May you one day repent your evil view on chocolate cake!" Jack thought until he saw a familiar pink aura in the sky.
"Wake up you good for nothing chocolate cake lover! DEMON BLADE CRIMSON SAKURA!"
Jack then woke up from his coma and jumped right out of bed and... Use his purple flare magic to attach to the ceiling, on all fours. Jack finally realized that he hasn't died and he's in a hospital. Jack hates hospitals. For the one reason they don't let him eat his scrumptious chocolate cake because its not healthy! Jack got down grabbed his clothes and put them on. He then left the completely white room that only had a single sized bed and IV, and went to the front to check out. After he found out that he was in a coma for two whole months decided it was time to pay Erza a visit. He was originally going to pull a harsh prank but decided against that when he saw that she had paid for his hospital bill.
No Jack was going to thank her for that and hopefully become friends who overlook their cake problem. So he started walking towards Fairy Tail. As when he got there he saw a whole bunch of iron pillars embedded in the building. He ran towards the building and was about to enter when he heard our favorite pink haired dragon slayer shouted"DID YOU DO THIS TO OUR GUILD?!" Before he could even reply a flaming fist was already flying to his face. He quickly moved his head to the side, causing Natsu to soar over him. Jack was about to say something to be interrupted again. But this time the voice was familiar with the commanding tone and all. "Natsu this man uses fire magic so he couldn't have done this. Stop being stupid and let him speak because last time I saw him, I had beat him into a coma." Erza stated with a little guilt in her voice.
"Can I talk now?" Jack asked only to receive one of Erza's famous death glares.
"Yes you may." Erza replied with venom in her voice. She probably remembered what he said about her cake.
"Thank you Erza-chan. Now why am I here as your probably wondering is to say this... Thank you for paying my hospital bill." Jack felt good about this thinking he had done well.
"It should be me who's apologizing for using such a powerfully attack to defeat you. Please hit me!"
"Whoa wait up its okay you were angry after all one one should never insult cake no matter what type...not to mention I got a nice view before I went out, they were all I my face... I got to stop being perverted." Jacks said except the last two parts were only thoughts.
"No as punishment for my actions please hit me!" Erza stated in her resolve to be punished.
"Uh ok." Jack put his hand up then lightly patted her head then ruffled her Scarlet hair.
"What was that?" Erza asked obviously confused.
"I make a point not to hurt someone who doesn't deserve it. One things for is that you don't deserve to get hit. I wouldn't have had the money to cover the bill." He replied trying to make Erza feel as though she had helped him enough.
"Well how about we check out the inside of your guild hall." He said as he walked team Natsu in.
Now Jack our favorite strawberry cake hater was in an inn. The inn had all his needs a bed, small kitchen, a fridge and a bathroom. The walls were an ugly mustard yellow with white trims, and occasionally a bug would go across the floor. He would practice some small scale fire magic on the insects so he was alright with them.
"So let's think about today. I apologized to Erza. I also got to meet the guild master but that was...interesting." Jack recalled how the man was really short with an orange outfit and kinda looked like a jester in a play. Not too mention was so drunk he slapped the blonde girls Lucy's ass which he could only think how bad he wanted to do that now. Then the old man ran for his life, but not from Erza or Lucy nnnoooo. He ran from Mirajane the really sweet barmaid with a rocking body that was fully covered by her maroon dress. He found the Master running from the woman strange but when he sensed her anger and felt her eerie aura he finally understood why. He kinda felt bad for the mages of fairy tail because they were literally based in the basement of the guild hall, plus the Master wouldn't allow them to retaliate for the guild damages. He knew that if he was in the guild, he would personally burn down Phantom's guild hall. Then something hit him like a train!
"She never said my name! Which means she forgot it!" Jack couldn't believe it! How had he not picked that up during there conversation? But now he was considering something big.
-flashback-
In the back room of the basement. Jack was currently speaking to the guild master of Fairy Tail.
"Young man, I can feel that you are strong but I have to ask why such a talented mage as yourself is not in a guild?" Makorov asked.
"Well old man I have never really needed to. I travel better alone." Jack replied.
"Boy what's your name?"
"My name is Jack Cakeston!"
"Well Jack do you have any friends?"
"No. Never needed any. Besides someone traveling with me would only slow me down." Jack stated with a sense of pride because who could say they don't need other people to survive.
Makorov just looked at him before shaking his head.
"Jack some prefer solitude but no one can withstand it. How about you join this guild and make friends and also being alone does not make you strong one becomes strong when they have something to protect.
Jack was shocked to say the least. He had always been stubborn about his views and nobody has ever challenged his view and made sense.
"You can come by tomorrow with your answer." And with that Makorov left the room.
-flashback end-
"I'll tell him my answer first thing tomorrow morning...after I eat some chocolate cake!" Jack said to no one in particular. The old man had earned his respect, so who was he to keep him waiting for a response. So he made an attempt to sleep but couldn't because his neighbors were really loud during there night time activities. "Stupid paper thin walls" Jack grumbled as he covered his ears with the pillows.
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