I'm updating! Well, I probably won't get this done in the same day I'm starting this, but I'll try. Also, this will probably as close as you could get to a regular warriors book, which means a lot of meaningless conversation, blah blah blah, and the Elementals thing probably won't start 'till the middle of the book. I'm not sure how long this chapter will last, maybe 1000, maybe 5,000 but still, It will probably be a LOT like the warriors book chapters that have a lot of random usual stuff like hunting and talking, and blah blah blah, but still, I hope that doesn't throw my reviewers far away from me. Okay, speaking of being like warriors, I'm going to have a clan list of cats so I won't have a ton of OCs. Okay VERY long AN so I will not torture you any longer even though you probably skipped this. Oh great I just got halfway done and the computer rebooted. Now I only have like a tenth done again. AAAAHHHH stupid computer.

ALLEGIANCES (for now just for Thunderclan. Remember, this is still a new clan.)(Also, as of beginning of story. No descriptions for now unless you want them.)

Thunderclan

Leader: Tearstar

Deputy: MoonBlaze

Apprentice: Fallenpaw, Eaglepaw

Medicine cat: none as of now

Warriors: none as of now

Queens: Blackhawk

Kits: Firekit, Bearkit

Elders(retired queens and warriors): Dustfang (there are more cats actually but these are all the main ones so there are warriors and a medicine cat but as of now no important ones.)

Cats Outside Of Clans

Rain looked up, there was a mouse directly in front of him. He raced after it and just as he leaped for it, it dashed into a rock and he smacked his head on it. "Mouse dung!" he spat. He started to look for something else to eat, he heard the faint sound of cats talking in the distance, as he moved closer, he drew back in surprise. His father had told him about these cats. "Clan Cats!" he hissed.

There were three cats, two were not much bigger than him. One was a tom, one a she-cat. The third was a full grown tom. The she-cat cat sniffed the air and turned to him. She drew back her lips and snarled. She leapt on Rain, hissing like mad. "Who are you?" she hissed. "Why are you here?"

The older tom turned to the she-cat. "Get off him Fallenpaw," he said. "This cat is a bit young, you should first ask him why he is here, and only attack if he seems like a threat."

"Yes Moonblaze." Fallenpaw snorted and got off of Rain. She still kept a paw on his tail, probably in case he tried to run away, and glared at him fiercely.

Moonblaze to Rain. "What are you here for?" He asked him.

Rain was so taken back that he couldn't find his voice for a while. When he did he started rambling. "I-I-I I'm Rain and I was out looking for some food since I've never actually hunted before because I'm used to finding twoleg food. I didn't catch anything but I heard you guys and came over here because I had never seen clan cats before and I'm used to being alone because since I was a kit I had to scavenge for food and the clan cats are so cool because they get to hunt and fight and everything and I get to do nothing! I hate being a loner!" he wailed. "Please don't hurt me." he added with fear scent starting to seep from him.

"Wait here." Moonblaze said. He left for a minute and came back with a mouse. he dropped it at Rain's paws. "Come with us. I'm taking you to Tearstar." he said as he walked off.

Fallenpaw took her paw off Rain's tail. She frowned and whisked her tail, then headed to camp before the others.

Rain gobbled up the mouse and obediently followed the older cat. As he passed Fallenpaw, she was playing with a kit. He wondered how she could be so aggressive with some but still gentle with others. His whiskers twitched as he passed her. Then as his attention was directed back to Moonblaze. Tearstar must be their leader. He thought. What are they going to do to me? He asked himself.

The she-kit that was playing with Fallenpaw stared up at Rain. Her eyes widened. Then she was hit by another forceful kit. She yelped in surprise. She growled and the two wrestled. Another older she-cat appeared from a place that Rain guessed was a nursery.

Moonblaze entered the camp and peeked his head into Tearstars den. "Tearstar, please come out here," Rai heard him say. "There is a 6 moon old loner cat out here. I leave the decision to you on what to do with him."

Rain's eyes widened. What to do with me? He thought. His fear scent grew stronger.

"Don't worry." Moonblaze said trying to calm him. "We won't hurt you."

A little while later Tearstar appeared from her den looking very dignified. She turned towards Rain. "Young cat, have you been having dreams about cats?" She asked him.

"Well, yes." Rain said shocked that they knew this. "Even before I heard about you cats, I had dreams about cats living in the forest. I only came in the forest because I saw a mouse go in here and a big, orange cat that smelled like the forest told me to try and catch it." He paused, "Is that ok?"

"Wait, wait, wait." said Jayfeather. "Firestar told you to go in the woods?"

"...You interrupted the story." said Rainhead. "But actually, based off of description, I'd say the cat resembles Thunderstar more than Firestar.

"Ok, just clearing that up." said Jayfeather. "Continue."

The she-kit slowly scooted away from the others, who where wrestling each other. She crept up behind Moonblaze and jumped onto the tom's back. She scrambled up onto his head, probably to see everything better. Moonblaze laughed, and the she-cat from the nursery came and rubbed against him.

Rain looked up to see the she-kit staring at him. She might make a friend. She wasn't that much younger than him...Rain suddenly realized that he had nothing to worry about. These cats seem really nice, well except for Fallenpaw. Maybe they might just let him go, or better, let him visit if he wanted to.

The she-kit jumped off Moonblaze and attacked Fallenpaw's tail. Fallenpaw pulled her tail away and padded off looking depressed. The kit walked up to Rain. "I'm Firekit!" she mewed. "Where are you from?" Her green eyes were wide with curiosity.

Rain looked over at the kit. "Well, Firekit, I'm really not sure." he said. "Ever since I can remember I have lived around twolegs but never in their nests. So I guess I was just a loner."

"Same here! Me and mom lived in the forest or around the twoleg's mesh of nests, but never near any cat until last moon. When she moved into the den near Fireclan territory," Firekit mewed her eyes bright with excitement.

Tearstar walked up to rain. "The cats you had a dream of was Starclan. They want you to join the clan." said Tearstar.

Rain's eyes widened in shock. "You-you mean that I'm going to join the clan? Yes I want to!" Rain exclaimed enthusiastically. "So, like, what would I be in the clan cause I dont know how it works." he added realizing he knew almost nothing of clan life.

"For know you will be a kit along with Firekit and Bearkit." said Tearstar. "But as soon as you are old enough you will be an apprentice."

"The she-cat from the nursery stepped forward. "I'll take care of him until he's ready to be an apprentice." she said.

"Very well Blackhawk." said Tearstar. She turned to Rain. "First I need to change your name for you to be part of the clan."

Moonblaze stepped forward. "Tearstar," he said. "This cat is six moons old. He should be able to be an apprentice anyway, and we can spend extra time teaching him the ways of the clan."

Tearstar nodded. She leaped on top a hug rock beside her den and yowled "Let all cats olde enough to catch their own prey gather under the highrock for a clan meeting.

All of the cats that were still in their dens padded out. The kits gathered around too, although they weren't really old enough.

"Today we have quite a few ceremonies." said Tearstar. "Rain. Please come forward. "You are six moons old and Starclan has chosen you to be a part of the clan. From now until you become a warrior, your new name will be Rainpaw. May Starclan continue to guide you until you become a warrior. Moonblaze, you will be Rainpaw's mentor."

Moonblaze stepped forward and touched noses with Rainstar. Rainstar's eyes were wide with excitement.

"I also have a few more ceremonies I understand." said Tearstar. "Fallenpaw, Eaglepaw. Step forward."

The two cats stepped forward looking surprised as if they had not known about this.

"I, Tearstar," started Tearstar, "Call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have tried hard to understand the ways your code and I commend them to you as warriors in their turn. Eaglepaw, Fallenpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your clan, even at the cost of your lives?"

"I do." they both nodded.

Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior names. Eaglepaw, form this moment on you will be known as Eagleheart. Fallenpaw, from this moment on you will be known as Fallenleaf. May Starclan light your paths.

The two warriors nodded and stepped down.

"Also," continued Tearstar. "Firekit, Bearkit, please step forward."

The two kits looked at each other and excitedly leaped forward.

Tearstar continued, "You are both six moons of age and are old enough to become apprentices. Firekit, from this moment on you will be known as Firepaw. Bearkit, from this moment on you will be known as Bearpaw. May Starclan light your paths. Eagleheart, you have been named warrior and I believe you are ready for an apprentice. You will mentor Bearpaw, and I will mentor Firepaw."

Eagleheart stepped forward and touched noses with Bearpaw while Tearstar touched noses with Firepaw. Then they went and sat back down.

"Congratulations." Rainpaw said to Firepaw.

"You too." she mewed back.

"One more thing." said Tearstar. "Blackhawk step forward."

Blackhawk stepped forward looking confused.

"You have recently joined the clan and to show your loyalty to the clan we will change your name." said Tearstar. "From this moment on you will be known as Blackout(which is cannon i know)."

Blackout nodded looking happy to be accepted as a clan member.

The meeting was adjourned and the cats went back to doing what they were doing before except for Fallenleaf and Eagleheart, who sat in the middle of the camp.

"What are they doing?" Rainpaw asked Firepaw.

"They're sitting vigil just like they will all night like every apprentice does when they become a warrior." replied Firepaw.

Rainpaw noticed the setting sun and realized how late it was. He looked around. While he was thinking many of the cats disappeared. He dashed outside and ran into Firepaw, Bearpaw, and a cat that looked like Moonblaze but he knew it wasn't. He had seen this cat before, and had hoped to never see him again.

Bum bum bum! ok hope you guys liked it. That was about 5 pages out of the 60 pages of story i have so again hope you like it.