The Twisted Mind Of Lillian Evans Potter
Chapter Two
Written By: Sneakette 4Ever
Authors Note: Thanks for all the WONDERFUL reviews! Umm, I mention bulemia in it and I'm really not trying to be rude, but it's a bad habit/disease… and Well, yeah… Please don't be offended!!!!
PS ~ Sorry for the delay in updating, I've been kinda having writers block with this fic… Ugh! I have NO idea where it's going yet! Well, I do… but Ahh I dunno! If you have any suggestions or ideas, I'd LOVE to hear them!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter – All rights go to JKR (Or whatever her new last name is) and Warner Bros, and all that junk… Don't sue me – you won't get that much $$$ anyway! And I'm only putting this up in the first chapter but it continues throughout the remainder of the fic – got it? GOOD! FINALLY: On with the story!
"Damn, Lils! What happened to your face?" Shea asked, not so tactfully. Lily grimaced thinking about the previous weeks 'incident' - as she had taken to calling it.
"I – uhh – tripped. Clumsy me," Lily lied, laughing nervously. Shea looked at her skeptically before shrugging, and pulling some chicken onto his plate.
"You're so blonde it's not even funny," Andi Erikson commented. Andi was a stickly girl with pale, nearly translucent, skin and thin blonde hair. She was nice, but a bit superficial. She also had a habit of eating too much, but then throwing it all up. If you even mentioned it in her presence she would bite your head off.
"Excuse me? Does this look blonde?" Lily held out a strand of her auburn hair. "I'm a closet blonde! And damn proud of it!"
Shea rolled his eyes, and gestured to someone standing in the doorway. Looking closer, Lily realized it was Severus Snape. He walked over confidently and sat down beside Shea, who sat across from Lily and Andi.
"Hey Sev," Lily smiled. He merely nodded his greeting. "So how much did you all miss me?"
"Oodles, Lil. Oodles." Orion Stanford, Lily's boyfreind, sat down beside her and kissed her cheek.
"I forgot something in my dorm. Orion, want to help me find it?" Lily asked innocently, knowing how obvious she was being. Orion grinned wickedly.
"Of course." He grabbed her hand and the two raced down the halls to the common room. As soon as they were in the dorm and the door was securly shut, Orion enveloped her with kisses.
"LILY?" Shawnta screamed from the Common Room. The desperateness of the shout was heard all the way up in the girls dormitory. "LILY!"
Lily pulled away from Orion, panting slightly. She stood up and walked to the door. Opening it slightly, she heard another frantic call from Shawnta
"Shawnta?" She called out the door. The curly-haired girl bound up the stairs, sobbing. "Oh, God! Shawnta, what's wrong?" She gathered the hysterical girl in her arms, and led her to the bed. Orion, thankfully, got the hint and left, shutting the door behind him.
"I – can't –" She gasped, sniffling and crying all at once," She – they – gone. Lily! Oh God!" She screamed, then started beating wildly at the pillows.
Lily grabbed the girl's wrists, holding them as Shawnta fought. Finally, she gave up and collapsed on the bed. Her shoulders shook as she fought to regulate her breathing.
"Shh… shh…" Lily stroked Shawnta's hair, watching as the tears slowed. Finally, after what seemed like hours, Shawnta was able to talk.
"She's gone." She whispered, her face a mask.
"Who's gone? What happened?" She replied, gripping her friend's hand tightly. It was obviously not good knews, but…
Shawnta stared straight ahead, not really seeing anything, before answering. "Mum – attacked…"
"Oh, God, Shawnta! Is she okay? When? By who? Is she okay?" Lily gasped. The thought of anything bad befalling Mrs. Findlay was horrible! She had to be the kindest, sweetest, most generous person Lily had ever met. They had treated her like their own, especially after Lily's own parents were killed.
"Muggle - attacked her. For MONEY! For some DAMN MONEY!" Shawnta began to cry freely again, but she didn't stop talking. There was so much anger in her voice it frightened Lily. "A DAMN MUGGLE KILLED MY MUM FOR MONEY!" She screamed.
Lily grabbed her friend's shoulders, pulling her toward her. The girl cried into her shoulder, shaking with anger and loss.
"Shh, Shawnta, shh." She smoothed Shawnta's hair, trying to comfort the Slytherin. She could feel the tears sliding down her own cheeks, but tried to hide them, not wishing to upset Shawnta even more. "Shh."
Authors Note: Sorry for the INCREDIBLY short chapter… I've had writers block for awhile now, and well… I'm sorry if Shawnta's reaction was completely unbeleivable (as I've never lost a parent, let alone have a parent murdered!) Well, please review! And thank you for reviewing everyone!!! Specially, Prongz! Wow THREE times!!! Thanks!!! This chapter's for you!!!
I'll try to get the next chapter out SOON! So sorry for the delay!!! The next chapter will be longer!!!
Chapter Two
Written By: Sneakette 4Ever
Authors Note: Thanks for all the WONDERFUL reviews! Umm, I mention bulemia in it and I'm really not trying to be rude, but it's a bad habit/disease… and Well, yeah… Please don't be offended!!!!
PS ~ Sorry for the delay in updating, I've been kinda having writers block with this fic… Ugh! I have NO idea where it's going yet! Well, I do… but Ahh I dunno! If you have any suggestions or ideas, I'd LOVE to hear them!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter – All rights go to JKR (Or whatever her new last name is) and Warner Bros, and all that junk… Don't sue me – you won't get that much $$$ anyway! And I'm only putting this up in the first chapter but it continues throughout the remainder of the fic – got it? GOOD! FINALLY: On with the story!
"Damn, Lils! What happened to your face?" Shea asked, not so tactfully. Lily grimaced thinking about the previous weeks 'incident' - as she had taken to calling it.
"I – uhh – tripped. Clumsy me," Lily lied, laughing nervously. Shea looked at her skeptically before shrugging, and pulling some chicken onto his plate.
"You're so blonde it's not even funny," Andi Erikson commented. Andi was a stickly girl with pale, nearly translucent, skin and thin blonde hair. She was nice, but a bit superficial. She also had a habit of eating too much, but then throwing it all up. If you even mentioned it in her presence she would bite your head off.
"Excuse me? Does this look blonde?" Lily held out a strand of her auburn hair. "I'm a closet blonde! And damn proud of it!"
Shea rolled his eyes, and gestured to someone standing in the doorway. Looking closer, Lily realized it was Severus Snape. He walked over confidently and sat down beside Shea, who sat across from Lily and Andi.
"Hey Sev," Lily smiled. He merely nodded his greeting. "So how much did you all miss me?"
"Oodles, Lil. Oodles." Orion Stanford, Lily's boyfreind, sat down beside her and kissed her cheek.
"I forgot something in my dorm. Orion, want to help me find it?" Lily asked innocently, knowing how obvious she was being. Orion grinned wickedly.
"Of course." He grabbed her hand and the two raced down the halls to the common room. As soon as they were in the dorm and the door was securly shut, Orion enveloped her with kisses.
"LILY?" Shawnta screamed from the Common Room. The desperateness of the shout was heard all the way up in the girls dormitory. "LILY!"
Lily pulled away from Orion, panting slightly. She stood up and walked to the door. Opening it slightly, she heard another frantic call from Shawnta
"Shawnta?" She called out the door. The curly-haired girl bound up the stairs, sobbing. "Oh, God! Shawnta, what's wrong?" She gathered the hysterical girl in her arms, and led her to the bed. Orion, thankfully, got the hint and left, shutting the door behind him.
"I – can't –" She gasped, sniffling and crying all at once," She – they – gone. Lily! Oh God!" She screamed, then started beating wildly at the pillows.
Lily grabbed the girl's wrists, holding them as Shawnta fought. Finally, she gave up and collapsed on the bed. Her shoulders shook as she fought to regulate her breathing.
"Shh… shh…" Lily stroked Shawnta's hair, watching as the tears slowed. Finally, after what seemed like hours, Shawnta was able to talk.
"She's gone." She whispered, her face a mask.
"Who's gone? What happened?" She replied, gripping her friend's hand tightly. It was obviously not good knews, but…
Shawnta stared straight ahead, not really seeing anything, before answering. "Mum – attacked…"
"Oh, God, Shawnta! Is she okay? When? By who? Is she okay?" Lily gasped. The thought of anything bad befalling Mrs. Findlay was horrible! She had to be the kindest, sweetest, most generous person Lily had ever met. They had treated her like their own, especially after Lily's own parents were killed.
"Muggle - attacked her. For MONEY! For some DAMN MONEY!" Shawnta began to cry freely again, but she didn't stop talking. There was so much anger in her voice it frightened Lily. "A DAMN MUGGLE KILLED MY MUM FOR MONEY!" She screamed.
Lily grabbed her friend's shoulders, pulling her toward her. The girl cried into her shoulder, shaking with anger and loss.
"Shh, Shawnta, shh." She smoothed Shawnta's hair, trying to comfort the Slytherin. She could feel the tears sliding down her own cheeks, but tried to hide them, not wishing to upset Shawnta even more. "Shh."
Authors Note: Sorry for the INCREDIBLY short chapter… I've had writers block for awhile now, and well… I'm sorry if Shawnta's reaction was completely unbeleivable (as I've never lost a parent, let alone have a parent murdered!) Well, please review! And thank you for reviewing everyone!!! Specially, Prongz! Wow THREE times!!! Thanks!!! This chapter's for you!!!
I'll try to get the next chapter out SOON! So sorry for the delay!!! The next chapter will be longer!!!