Chapter 2
I watched the humans faces as they switched through the many emotions of dread. suprise, fear, and finally anger. I myself was in a state of intense curiosity. Why were these humans on Namek, what were they looking for. And why in the world was Vegeta, Prince of the Saya-Jins here. Things were happening quickly. I had just decided to go see Guru when I looked up to see another pod burn its way across the heavens and land not too far from the first.
I glanced down at the humans as the girl collapsed to her knees. I backed away slowly but jerked my head up sharply when i felt the change in power level. As I concentrated I realized that the two humans power levels were dropping. I smiled as I realized how common a technique this was on Namek. I could barely feel the humans ki now. I doubted they could sense me since I had my power level at a minascule four hundred fifty. In any fight, if your foe underestimates you it could change the outcome. These humans were smart it seemed. My thoughts were interrupted when I felt, rather than saw two beings approaching. I looked down to see that the humans had felt it as well. After ten seconds of feeling, I finally saw the two creatures which emitted these power levels. They both felt to be around 1500. They were both dressed in similar attire. Brown striped armor, which I recognized to be Saiya-Jin suits by the charecteristic shoulder flaps. But these were no Saiya-Jins. The first was a mass of blue muscle settled behind an ungodly mess of an orange mustach. The second was purple in color, repulsive in description (A/N I can't remember exactly what this fella looked like, if someone want to tell me feel free).
I listened as they boasted and hazed the small humans. After a particularly snide comment the purple beast lifted what I guessed to be some type of weapon and fired at the ship. The purple glass exploded away along with the front part of the bulkhead. I watched as the two armored creatures laughed heartly, and smiled when I heard the bald human say "C'mon Gohan, its time to do some serious powerin' up!"
I reached out and felt the two power levels begin to rise. Soon they were well over two thousand and still rising. The two men stopped laughing instantly and stared as the two humans, one who I now knew was named Gohan, almost doubled their power levels. The two creatures began to look worried, and then fear replaced the worry when their opponents rose over three thousand.
I heard their nervous voices as they half screamed at the rise. All of a sudden, the two humans vanished from view. Seconds later they reappeared behind the two men, the bald one driving a solid punch to the blue beast' back and Gohan delivering a severe kick to the ribs of the purple one. The two creatures collided and splashed into a nearby lake. Gohan and the bald one shared a high five and settled back to the ground.
I slowly backed off the ledge and began to make my way toward Guru's place. I dared not fly, for that would give off way to much energy but I still traveled at my top speed, running with leaps and bounds. I finally reached the pillar on top of which Guru's house stood, I gave myself just enough of a ki burst to make it to the top and ran toward the door.
Okay so it has folloed the story so far. Please comment and give me your suggestion as what should happen next. I already ahve the next chapter thought up but I am willing to make changes. Please email me at magus432@hotmail.com if you want to give me suggestions.