So hey guys there was this guy in my review to crap my story and all yea u can read his review here r/8720554/ didn't like what he said was mean but heck no am I not going to give up on my fanficiton/ story is my 1st 1 and I'm going to keep it like that but my fav review was Angelical Love review I got it and was funny thanks Angel Love ur the best.
Angelical Love- Thnkx for the inspiration and for ur review I am very thankful for this Thnkx T^T
- Thnkx(not) for the review even thought I hated it. And I won't give up on my fanficiton/story
Rin P.O.V
Right Know im travelling with my ran into the Inu Gang where I went to Kagome And Sango.
"Hey Sango, Hi Kagome" Rin said with a happy smile
"Hello My lady " Kagome And Sango Said
"Plz Call me Rin" Rin Said with a pout on her face(AN:Shes action Shes a very good actor)
"You Know Rin ur a very good actor " Kagome Said With a while sando Agreed with a nod and smile.
"I Know" Rin Said with a smile on her face
"So what are we gona talk about today ?" Kagome Said
"Oh I know Lets Talk about the mens " Rin Said
"OK that's nice who want to start "Sango said
"Me ill start " Kagome Said So they all gather up in a circle
"So I think Inuyasha still oves Kikyo " Kagome said
"UGGGGGG Cant believe he still loves Kikyo Stupid Inuyasha (AN:I love Kikyo but I love her with Naraku but not here is a bashing see I hate Kikyo yet I love her) "Sango Said with Rin pouting and nodding
"I know how u feel u feel Kagome I love Sesshoumaru but I think he loves Kagura "Rin said with a sigh(AN: I sight when I wrote that )
"Same ad me I think Miroku loves Amaterasu" Sango said
"Girls Why are boys so stupid" Rin said with a sigh
"I'm hungry" Sango said
"Well Lets Visit Our Men and tell them with our true form "Rin said with a fake smile (AN: Sessrin:O_O Evil Rin *Evil Laugh* Rin:Im evil here ? Sessrin: U could say that know back to the story XD)
Rin, Sango, and Kagome took off there rosary .Rin hair became longer And Silvery white (Like Inner Mokas ) and here breats became bigger and her hips became curvier, her eys were blody red ( AN: 1 of mt fav color, ithink inner mokas eyes are beutuful I lovre Vampires). Sango Has the same transformation exept is that she exposed her Tailamd winds her nails grow longer when shes want them to ( that look like Kurumu tail, wings ,a nd nails ). Kagome has the sane trans formation she grows black ears (Like Inuyashas ears).
"Lets go ladys" Rin said Going to Stop her for know anyway Rosario+Vampire to learn about the Anime Series or the manga is here wiki/Rosario_%2B_Vampire_Wiki Also to see how there transformation look like here imgres?um=1&hl=en&safe=off&client=firefox-a&tbo=d&rls= :en-US:official&biw=1366&bih=767&tbm=isch&tbnid=tB4TJLHzBjkR8M:&imgrefurl= art/Inner-Moka-and-Tsukune-277600331&docid=_0_Zgvx5NmHt1M&imgurl= download/277600331/inner_moka_and_tsukune_by_ &w=1920&h=1080&ei=iDytUI2UM5Ph0wHSuYD4Dg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=12&vpy=476&dur=519&hovh=166&hovw=297&tx=74&ty=62&sig=115236476514360997216&page=2&tbnh=139&tbnw=257&start=34&ndsp=38&ved=1t:429,r:34,s:0,i:189 TsukunexInner Moka there *dreamy eyes * love Rosario + vampire ending 1 and 2 …. See u next time and review at least 4 reviews or 2 I'm good with that Bye~~~~!
"Director": Nice Know bye guys
And u know what I'm like WTF just happen here O_O