OK. I think chapter 1 was a success except for a few grammatical errors like, did anyone notice part of the story was in the present tense and the other half was in the past tense? Don't worry I will go through this time. Please , please review, favorite and follow!
Chapter 2 Longing for friendship
I strolled down the halls very sadly. It seemed no one liked having me around. At that point, I was desperate to please everyone so they would like me and be my friend. I felt like a loser and no amount of crying would make me feel any better. If only I could have left the kingdom,maybe someone out there would be my friend. I desperately needed someone to talk to,someone to laugh with,someone who understood my feelings and someone who would care for me as I would care for them. I entered my bedroom and sat at the little table in the far corner of the room. I was happy to see that Peppermint Butler had made dinner for me. We barely spoke to each other because he was always working. But I cared for the round , red-striped man very much but I didn't think the feeling was mutual, even though we had some laughs together. I lifted the cover to find that he had prepared my favorite dish. Mashed Carrots glazed in Honey and a glass of Milk. I ate slowly as I cried tears of sadness. I was pathetic!
"Gaaaarrrrrhhhh!", I cried in frustration. I felt like a prisoner in an asylum of emotions that I could not overcome. There were some things about myself that I wish I could change , but I couldn't.
"Maybe if I were smart, people would like me," , I cried in between sobs.
I crawled into bed and cried myself to sleep. No one knew about my self - esteem problem.I hid my emotions so well around others, but when I was alone, my problems would tear me apart. After all , who wanted to hear about dumb, old Cinnamon Bun and his pain. I felt more anger than sadness.
The next morning, I woke up to see the sun shining brightly into my room. It seemed like it was shining on my life. The glow seemed to be saying, "Today is going to be okay!". I had my doubts about this feeling,but I was glad for the change of heart. I walked down the hall to the castle doors greeting everyone on my way. They all seemed so happy and cheerful as if the sun had cleansed them as well.
It was the first time in along while since I had left the castle. I decided it would be best if I went out for some fresh air. After all, this day seemed perfect already and I was really hoping it would get better.
I walked slowly down the candy brittle sidewalk , whistling as I went along. I went to some familiar sights, like the hospital and the bakery. After a few hours I became bored. It was mid day but I decided to return to the castle anyway.
I journeyed to the Princess's lab at the risk of being sent away or hurt again. I didn't really care because the day still seemed perfect and I had faith in the feeling that something great was going to happen today. I entered the lab to see Princess Bubblegum speaking excitedly to Peppermint Butler. Before I could greet them both, they turned to me and smiled.
"Cinnamon Bun,", the Princess said," We've decided you can leave the kingdom for one day as your birthday present.".
I was elated. Word could not have described the joy I was feeling. I jumped up and down and clapped my hands in delight.
The next day was my birthday, and that was the best present in the whole wide world.
Peppermint Butler then put a serious look on his face," There's only one condition,", he said," Finn and Jake have come with you.
They obviously didn't trust me to be on my own. But I wasn't complaining. I was so happy, and that night I slept soundly.
I just couldn't wait for tomorrow!
OK. Well guys , I just couldn't help feeling that the story dragged on a bit so, I have disappointing news. There wont be any updates till maybe October. Maybe I could do it earlier but I'm not so sure. Gonna be busy with school and all so...,you know how it is! I hope you enjoyed it.
Btw, in the next chapter Cinnamon Bun goes on a long, awaited adventure. You must read!