Sooo... here's more of my Into Darkness fanfic! I hope that this is better for those who wanted dialogue and action between characters. So, yeah. As I update this, I will be posting random tidbits of things from my mind. *childish giggle* These don't have anything to do with Into Darkness. Mostly. Mostly they're just between my OC and Chekov. Or my OC and other characters. And by the way, I like to "rewrite" the storyline, so I can squeeze Charlotte in wherever I can.

Again, I DO NOT OWN STAR TREK.

3RD PERSON POV

On the Class M Planet, Nibiru, Jim Kirk, captain of the USS Enterprise was sprinting as fast as he could, away from the race that occupied the planet. In his hand, he clutched a scroll casing. However, he had no idea what it was. Kirk was in disguise, wearing a grey cloak, hood, and face cover, the whole thing was made out of a gauzy fabric. As he ran, he kicked up the red dust behind him. Racing through the red-barked trees, he stopped when a huge creature reared up in front of him and screeched. "AH!" he cried, pulling a handgun out of his cloak and firing at the beast. It screeched, then fell to the ground with a "WHUMP!"

Behind the beast, there was another figure, dressed exactly like Kirk. "Dammit man!" The figure said, casting off his hood and pulling down his face cover. "That was our ride! You just stunned our ride!" He cried angrily. It was the one and only Dr. Leonard McCoy, also known as Bones. His black hair was messy and unkempt, and big, blue-grey eyes that were blazing with anger and frustration stared right at Kirk. Bones' cheeks blushed red with anger, and it was completely clear, despite the dark tanned skin. Kirk pulled down his face cover, revealing big blue eyes, messy dark blonde hair, and Caucasian skin. "Oh, great." He panted.

The indigenous species behind them, the ones that Kirk was running from, came closer. Kirk took a glance behind him, then the both of them took off running again.
"What the hell did you take?!" Bones cried, referring to the scroll casing in Kirk's hand.

"I have no idea but they were bowing to it!"

The two men continued to run, the species behind them. They were completely white, with black paint markings on their bodies, and bright yellow fabric was used as loincloths and face covers. Their eyes were just black orbs. As Kirk and Bones continued running, the species began to throw spears at them, in attempt to kill them.

"They're tryin' to kill us, Jim! They're tryin' to kill us!" Bones yelled, frantic.

Kirk whipped out his communicator, flipped it open, then held it close to his face.

"Kirk to Shuttle One! The locals are out of the kill zone! You're clear, I repeat, get in there and neutralize the volcano, let's get out of here!"

Hidden in the giant ash cloud above the volcano, was the shuttle.

"We have to do this now! I told the Captain the shuttle wasn't built for this kind of heat!" Sulu cried. Hikaru Sulu was a tall, thin, Asian man, with black hair and deep brown eyes. He could be soft at times, but, he was always down to business; no exceptions.

"Captain, did the indigenous life forms see you?" Spock said, standing in the back of the shuttle, suited up in a heat suit. The majority of him was covered, but, you were still able to see his deep brown eyes that showed no feeling, and the neat black bangs on his forehead.

"No, Mr. Spock, they did not!" Kirk said annoyingly into the receiver. He and Bones were still running for their lives.

"The Prime Directive clearly states there can be no interference with the internal development of an alien civilization." Spock pointed out.

"I know what it says, which is why, I'm running through the jungle, wearing a disguise!" Kirk said in between breaths. "Now, drop out your super ice cube, and let's go! Kirk out!" He finished, flipping the communicator closed.

Back on the shuttle, Nyota Uhura finished suiting up Spock. She was short, but slim and fit. Her long black hair was tied into a tight bun, and her copper skin was glistening with sweat.

"You're good." She said, taking a step back.

"If we're gonna do this, we gotta do it now! This ash is killing our coils." Sulu said, sitting back down in the pilot seat.

"Are you sure you don't want me to go instead?" Uhura asked, looking up at Spock.

"That would be highly illogical as I'm already outfitted in the heat resistant-"

"Spock, I was kidding." She stood on her tiptoes and kissed the glass helmet covering Spock's face.

"You got this," she said in a low voice.

"Guys, we have to go! NOW!" Sulu ordered.

"I'll see you in ninety seconds." Uhura said, then climbing back into her seat.

She reached up, and pressed a button that closed the glass doors behind her and Sulu. Spock attached a line to his hip, then nodded at her. She pressed a button, then the door in the floor beneath Spock opened up, and he dropped through.

With one hand, he held the line, gripping it. With the other, he gripped the cold fusion device. He watched through the helmet's glass the bubbling inferno. He swung slightly as the turbulence beneath the shuttle became worse. His eyes scanned the interior, looking for a place to land safely.

Sulu grunted as the turbulence became worse. "I can't hold this position. Spock I gotta pull you back up!" he said.

"Negative!" Spock replied sharply. His eyes stayed trained below him. "This is our only chance to save this species! If this volcano erupts, the planet dies!"

"Pull him back up. Now!" Sulu commanded.

More and more ash began to get sucked into the turbine on the side of the shuttle. The turbine choked and coughed and sputtered.

Uhura reached up to pull the lever to bring Spock back up, but the line beneath caught fire, and they were unaware. The line burned, then snapped. Spock grunted as the heavy line fell then coiled itself around his shoulder, then he fell onto a large rock, the device skittering and bouncing away, then popping open.

"Spock! Are you okay?" Uhura cried. The speaker inside the helmet blared with her voice.

"I am...surprisingly...alive. Standby." He said, then made his way to the device.

"We have to get him back! I'll suit up and go down." Uhura said nervously.

"We have to abandon the shuttle." Sulu said without looking up. Uhra began to unbuckle from her seat and stand up.

"We can't just leave him, Sulu!" she cried angrily.

"We don't have a choice! Uhura, I'm sorry." he said as he unbuckled himself.

"Spock! We're going back to the Enterprise. We'll get you out!" Uhura said, as if it were a goodbye.

"Captain! I'm ditching the shuttle. You'll have to make it to the Enterprise on your own." Sulu said as he began stripping off his black jumpsuit, revealing a silver and yellow skin suit.

Kirk and Bones were still running through the trees. "Wonderful!" he cried sarcastically.

"Uhura, you ready to swim?" Sulu asked. Uhura had also stripped off her jumpsuit, revealing a red and silver skin suit, much like Sulu's.
"I'm ready." she replied, nodding.

Realizing that the shuttle wasn't able to get them, Kirk came up with a plan. It was stupid, crazy, and completely moronic, but it was all he had. He ran straight ahead, faster now, Bones right behind him.

"KIRK! The beach is that way!" Bones cried, pointing to his right.

"We're not going to the beach!" Kirk called back. He ran under a tree, and, as he was running, placed the scroll casing on two small branches, and the scroll inside dropped down.

"Oh, no, no, NO!" Bones complained.

The locals stopped running, then bowed to the scroll, dropping their weapons.

The two men were side by side, and continued to sprint through the trees, heading for a cliff edge.

"I ha-a-ate this!" Bones complained, his voice wavering as he ran.

"I know you do!" Kirk replied.

They reached the cliff, then ran off the edge, screaming, then falling through nothingness. Then they hit the water, and disappeared below the surface with two separate splashes.

Under the water, they stripped off their disguises, revealing silver skin suits. Kirk's was yellow and silver, while Bones' was silver and blue. On their feet were small, propeller-like things that propelled them through the water with ease. Under the water, sitting peacefully and silently on the ocean floor, was the Enterprise herself. The two swam downward, and a small door in the side of the ship opened up, and the two swam in. The door closed. The water that filled the compartment began to lower, the ship pumping it out. The two men gasped for air, and stripped off their goggles. The interior door slid open, revealing a man in his late 20's to his mid 30's, with a short-ish stature, red-brown hair, brown eyes, a round face, and a red Starfleet shirt. The one and only; Montgomery Scott.

"Do you know how ridiculous it is to hid a starship on the bottom of the ocean? We've been down here since last night! The saltwater's gonna ruin-"

"Scotty. Where's Spock?" Kirk cut him off.

"Still in the volcano, Sir." Scotty replied solemnly.

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