Time for chapter two! For all of you who believe the lies posted on my Naruko and Naruto Hyuga stories, how is this story a copy? Itachi and Sasuke are nowhere in the story I supposedly stole from. How is writing a Naruko Hyuga fanfiction a crime? Do you believe that only one author can write this kind of stories? Can only one person write about Shikamaru? Can only one person write about Garaa? Can only one person have Naruto join the Hyuga clan? I am expressing MY ideas, which is what this site is for. Apparently, if you have and idea too similar to someone's it's illegal, even if the characters are not owned by the people. Is this what you believe? If so, you are wrong. Everyone should write how they are inspired to and not be ridiculed. I have every right to write. Now, if you only want to attack others, go away and never read my stories again.
A story with a similar plot is not a copy. Loads of fanfic has similar plots - after all, we're all starting from the same starting point and thinking "what if?" about the same source material. Think very carefully before you accuse someone of plagiarism if all they've done is written a similar story and it's something that is thought of occasionally. The more often the kind of stories show up, the less likely it is that it is stolen.
I've read at least two other stories in my fandom which have the same major life-changing event happen to the main character as mine does - he/she ends up in a new clan. They didn't steal my story and I didn't steal theirs...it's just that when canon has someone risking his life on a weekly basis, or gives the character a traumatic childhood, a serious injury is a plausible thing to have happen to him.
I apologize for the rant. Enjoy the chapter!
Naruko woke up, confused. She was in a comfortable bed, nicer than one she had ever been in before. She looked around at the white room, it seemed to be a hospital room, but not any she had been in. She saw Hiashi Hyuga entered the room.
"Naruko, I'm glad you're okay." He said
"Thanks." she replied. "Are Itachi and Sasuke all right? I would never have survived if they hadn't brought me here."
"Don't worry, they are fine. You'll see them soon." Hiashi told her.
"That's a relief," Naruko sighed.
"First, there are two things I must tell you." Hiashi stated. "You lost your eyes when you were attacked. When I saved you with my medical ninjutsu, I implanted the byakugan of a recently deceased main branch clan member. So not only do you have new eyes, you have a working byakugan. As it is illegal for a non-Hyuga to have the byakugan, and to protect you, I am adopting you. I will file the paperwork at the Hokage's office in the morning. Also, as they cannot return home, Itachi and Sasuke will live in a house on the compound. You will live in my home, as a companion for my daughter, Hinata. The two of you will play and train together. Naruko, you will no longer have to run from those in the village."
With that, Hiashi swept his new daughter into a hug.
Sorry that the chapters so short. I posted it now to attempt to stop all the angry PMs I am getting for no reason.