Yes! i figured how to get up chapter 2 all by myself. yahhh i'm a little slow so it took me a while, hehe!I wanted to thank my first reviewers for their support of this story, so thanks Mrs.EdwardMasenCullen and KaitlynMasenCullen27. i really appreciate you two. it really ment a lot. i ask again for everyone to review my story!
Chapter 1 The Change
BPOV
I hissed slightly as he sunk his teeth into my neck. I was really very happy, finally I was getting what I wanted, what I had been waiting for. I think though I underestimated the pain.
I felt it almost immediately, the venom flowing through my blood, hitting hard my lungs and heart.
Carlisle had given me morphing and I was slightly thankful, though I didn't think it was doing anything to help. I couldn't help but scream I could feel the fire running through my veins, trying to destroy me. I could feel my body breaking down. The second I let out that first scream Edward was immensely concerned.
"Bella, I'm so sorry, please forgive me." I knew if he could cry he would be. I didn't understand though, why would he be sorry, I asked for this.
As if to hear my thoughts he replied, " I'm the one who is causing your pain. I'm killing an angel and I have no right to."
I had my eyes closed shut, HARD. So I couldn't be very convincing but I mouthed, "Edward, it's already begun so please, please for the next three days don't be beating yourself up inside." "Yes, my love."
So now I knew that I couldn't scream 'cause if I did Edward would be ripped apart. This though was not a problem because about three hours later I blacked out. Falling into the darkest recesses of my mind. I couldn't hear anything from the outside world and everything was dark. My voice when I thought was like an echo ringing through a mountain range. I thought only one thing the whole time I was lost in my mind. 'Edward I love you' over and over I would repeat this to myself. That after this was all over I would be able to spend eternity with my saving angel.
After what seemed like years upon years, I finally heard someone screaming my name. Like one who had lost their lover. Soon enough the sound became too much I shot my eyes wide open quickly to reveal amber eyes.
The owner of these amber eyes let out a loud gasp, along with the rest of the people in the room, 7 in all.
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