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Chapter Two

Frisk stood in front of the cute house that was at the end of the ruins, bruised and scraped up from the battles all these monsters had forced her in. Other than that, she still felt determined. Walking over to the pile of leaves, there was a familiar star-like object floating above them. Frisk gingerly cupped her hands under the object, sighing as a prompt popped up in front of her. With her hands full, the prompt allowed her to use her SOUL to choose between save and return options.

Save / Return

Frisk LV1 01:45:10

Ruins-Home

Just like the last time she did this, all of the bruises faded and the cuts disappeared as if they never happened. With her HP restored, she turned to the front door of the house just as Toriel opened the door and popped her head out, looking for Frisk. Spotting her by the leaf pile that Toriel swept thereafter they all fell off the tree that could never keep any left on it. "My child," Toriel called out to her, smiling, "come here. The entrance to my home is this way."

Frisk smiled at the goat monster, standing up from the SAVE POINT as she called it, and headed towards Toriel. The old monster opened the door more for her to let Frisk inside. She felt the warmth inside and frowned inwardly, being reminded of her grandmother's home on the surface. The feeling had caused a stab of homesickness and loneliness. Thankful that Toriel took the lead to show Frisk something, she took this time to shake her head to try to clear her thoughts and force a smile for the monster.

Toriel stopped in front of a door, presumably the room Frisk will stay in while she stays here. "Surprise, your very own room! I hope you like it, young one." Feeling something resting on top of her head suddenly, Frisk glanced up to see Toriel's paw on her head, stroking her hair softly. She suddenly stopped as the smell of something burning wafted into the hall. "I smell something burning. Uh, I'll be right back!" Toriel exclaimed as she held her purple dress up slightly to run into the kitchen, leaving Frisk alone. She moved forward and opened the door, stepping in.

The room was a child's bedroom, having a box full of old toys, shoes of different sizes to the side, a dresser filled with striped sweaters, and a large fluffy bed. Frisk sat on the bed, bouncing on it some to test it. Nodding, she stood and went to see if what Toriel was baking burned. She paused in the living room that had a dining table with chairs, a reading chair that was great for Toriel, a bookcase filled with books, and a fireplace. She tipped toed into the kitchen to glance in, seeing Toriel sighing in relief as she just saved the pie, cutting it into eight pieces. Frisk was spotted as the goal monster turned to go back and inform Frisk about the pie. She smiled at the child and turned to her. "The pie is too hot to eat right now. You can go and play as it cools off, my child."

Frisk nodded, awarded with another pet on her head by Toriel before she went off to 'her' room. She plopped into the bed, laying back over the covers. She closed her eyes and let out a long sigh, thinking back to what happened not that long ago while she was still in the puzzle portion of the ruins…

Frisk glanced at the time on the phone Toriel gave her, only four minutes passed from when she left Frisk to go ahead to get things fixed up. Sighing softly, she exited the room and saw a Froggit sitting next to another room entrance. Ignoring him for the second to inspect the glowing star like object floating above a pile of leaves. Ever so gently, she poked at it. It was warm, and started to spin slowly from her poke. She cupped the bottom of the star with both of her small hands and gasped as a text box popped in front of her, asking her if she wanted to 'Save' or to 'Return'. When she took a hand out from under the star, the box vanished. She thought back to the fight with the other Froggit, the dummy, and Flowey. Placing both hands back under the star, she summoned her SOUL forth to select the 'Save' option.

Save/Return

Frisk LV1 0:15:09

Leaf Pile-Ruins

She blinked in surprise from the second prompt that appeared then disappeared. Shaking her head, she stood and walked over to the Froggit in the room, smiling nervously at him (or was it a her?) and waved at it when it… ribbited? "Ribbit Ribbit Ribbit." From that Frisk got out of that was, 'Excuse me, human. I have some advice for you about battling monsters. If you ACT a certain way or FIGHT until you almost defeat them… They might not want to FIGHT you, please… Use some MERCY, human.' It was slightly weird that all of that was conveyed through only three 'ribbits'.

Frisk smiled and nodded at the frog monster and went into the room he (or she?) stood next to. She saw a large bowl filled with candy sitting on a pillar. Her stomach growled at her, reminding her long trip up the mountain and a long trip with monsters in between her and Miss. Toriel's home. As she went to grab a hand full, she noted the metal plate on the pillar. It read, 'Please Take One', so, begrudgingly, she took only one monster candy. Looking it over, she took a sniff of the candy, it smells like normal candy, and nothing with licorice. Frisk hated licorice so she will save it for later.

An hour of complementing Froggits, SPARING Whimsuns, falling through floors, laying on the floor with Moldsmals, encouraging a ghost, buying things from spiders, and sudden calls from Toriel, Frisk was low on health, being on 10/20 HP. She was about to pop in the Monster Candy when a new monster appeared out of nowhere and engaged a FIGHT. The prompt showed that it's a Loox, so Frisk had to CHECK it. It had 6 AT and 6 DEF and the description was Don't pick on him. Family name: Eyewalker. After she did that, the Loox took his turn, saying, "Please don't pick on me!". The Loox's attack was like bubbles, coming from her left and right. As she jumped out of the path of one, another hit her in the back, causing her to fall forward, hitting the ground with 4/20 HP.

Wincing, she got back up and saw it was her turn again. She tapped the ACT button then hovered her hand between the two options, Pick On and Don't Pick On. She frowned, having forgot what the earlier text said, so she hit the second option. "Finally, someone gets it!" Loox exclaimed as he took his turn, sending more bubbles, but this time with a trail behind them of more bubbles. She didn't see the trail until it was too late to get out of the way. Once hit, she watched in horror as her HP dropped down to zero. Dropping to her knees, she watched as her SOUL shook and shattered. She could barely feel as her body fell down onto the ground….

Opening her eyes, she saw that she stood in darkness with only a prompt in front of her, giving off light. So she read over the prompt closely.

Frisk LV1 1:00:27

Ruins-Mouse Hole

Load/Reset

Frisk's eyes widen at the 'Reset' option, she felt her heart tighten at just looking at it. For some reason, the thought of even touching the button made her fill with sadness. Ignoring the 'Reset', she moved her hand over 'Load' when a static like sound filled her ears. Turning around sharply, she saw something white in the darkness behind her. It was an oval of white that was about 6 feet high off the ground, with five black lines in the oval, two on each side and one in the middle. Suddenly, two of the lines widen into a small circle and an half circle, the half circle holding a small white dot while the full one held a bright orange one. Underneath the face, she noticed movement that was like cloth in the wind, inside the cloth, two hands, holes cut out of the palms, moved to her eye level and started to sign as more static is heard.

INTERESTING

A HUMAN IN THE VOID

I WONDER

CAN YOU UNDERSTAND ME?

Frisk stared at the monster in front of her, her hands shaking some with fear as she answered with sign language herself. "Yes, I can understand you." The monster seemed to smile as he moved forward some, she noticed what looked to be red glitches around his back.

THEN YOU WILL GIVE ME YOUR SOUL TO GO BACK?

The monster reached towards her quickly. She shut her eyes tightly, only opening then when her hand moved back, hitting a panel. She looked at her hand to see two ghostly ones over it, pressing her hand on the Load. She followed the hands to the body of a child, roughly about her age, clad in a green and yellow striped sweater and shorts. He had her same haircut and pale skin, they looked very similar, other than the sweater, he had red, sad eyes to her bright green ones and he was about an inch taller. The only name that came to mind for him was the one she heard all her life. She choked out the name.

"C-Ch-Chara?"

He smiled at her as light flooded her vision as she was sent back to the SAVE POINT.

Frisk jolted awake, having fallen asleep. She sat up quickly, noting she was tucked under the covers and her shoes were taken off. She looked for them, spotting a plate with a slice of Butterscotch-Cinnamon Pie.

Author's Note: And there you go! I hope you love this, and if you have played Skyrim, then you should read the fiction I uploaded called Expert Level. Please review with suggestions and follow this so you won't miss any chapters!