The Revenge

by maxieface4

Toby and his Friend Shane, Team up to get revenge for murder of Toby's Girlfriend Sarah. Very dark story and will feature moderate language, a few swear words. the question is, would you risk it all for a chance at revenge? If you would, then take a look at this story.

2. Chapter 1

The Revenge

Chapter 1

Toby arrived at the Hospital to see Sarah's Family in the waiting room, her brother Kevin, came up to him instantly.

Kevin: I knew something like would happen, with her hanging around with you all the time, your bad news.

Toby: Kevin, this wasn't my fault, I don't know where the bullet came from.

Kevin: If it wasn't for you, my sister might still be alive.

Kevin then hits Toby in the face sending him down to the floor.

Sarah's sister Susan then helps Toby back up.

Susan: Kevin, what the hell, it's not his fault.

Kevin: yes it is, just go Toby nobody wants you here.

Toby: I'll go but I want to know what's going on.

Susan: I'll call you once I find out what the Doctor's said.

Toby then storms out of the Hospital, heading for somewhere quiet to try and calm down.

Once Toby finds a bench to sit down on, his phone goes off.

Shane (message): Hey Buddy, how did it go, she say yes?

Toby (message): Hey man, somethings happened, can I come over?

Shane (message): Yeah sure, just come in through the window alright, my parents are sleeping.

Toby (message): ok, I'm on my way.

A/N: Sorry about the ending and the chapter in general, it was sort of a filler but the next chapter will be much better, I will put it up sometime next week, also sorry about the long gap between the chapters, I was having a bit of writers block and I'm still trying to get past it, so please review this story and if you haven't already please check out my other story Changing Times.