Hello and welcome to chapter 2 and I updated chapter one so it makes a little more sense on who the narrator is I need comment's to see if you want to have a basic outline for the characters. Well here is the second chapter.
"In the grand village of Konohagakure our first scene is set. Two servants of the mighty clan Hyuga make their way through the village market."
"Doesn't it feel good to get out of those forsaken Clan hall's Urite."
"Hai, does Tante. How fair's your life? I haven't seen you sense you have been back from you mission."
"I've done good, not only have I been promoted to Jonin by Hokage-sama for my deed's against Otokagakure. Ahh one more thing to rub in the face of those Uchiha's." He say's his master's rival name as if it were poison.
"Yes brother those Damned uchinga's steal our glory and our honor has been spit upon more than once by that clan. We may be men for our master in his war but we fight for our honor
as well as our master's."
"Stead fast good brother here comes two of the Clan Uchiha. Ready your weapon O great brother I'll back you."
"Will you do so then run like always?"
"No I will not run like always. Insult them as you will and let them take it as they will."
"Fine I will play along with your game for now but just so you know I will turn you in."
"It's a fair deal Urite. Hurry sneer at them as they walk by."
"and so it begins"
sorry this is so short but I will work on making them longer
and if you didn't see it before the bold print is Kyubi