Hi this is Morningfoot. I would like to thank clearfight for her review. Sorry for all the errors. I have to remind you that this is my first story and I am not very good at writing. So any review will be great. Oh yay from now on the story will be from Greykit's view.


I am so bored! My sister won't open her eyes and I want to go outside. I could sneak out but Heathertail would be very mad. I do not want that. I feel like I will be in here forever. Maybe if I try to play with her, she will open her eyes. So I jumped on her. "don't jump on her" said Heathertail in an angered voice.

"Sorry, I just thought that if I tried to play with her, she would open eyes." I said " well she did she" asked Heathertail. "no" I said looking over at my crying sister. After that my mom wiped around to comfort Brownkit. She was saying something to her, I strained to hear her.

"It's going to be alright, you can open your eyes in your own time" said Heathertail in comforting whisper. Just then she opened her eyes to see our mother. I jumped up with excitement. "WE CAN GO OUTSIDE NOW"I screamed.

" Greykit, don't scream" said Heathertail in a scolding voice. I looked down at my paws. Just then Brownkit jumped on me. "That's for jumping on me" said Brownkit. "Wow, the nursery is big" she said with astonishment. " Well the camps a lot bigger" I said trying to get her to come outside. "Lets go outside then" said Brownkit with amazement

" Not so fast Greykit" said Heathertail. I stopped in my tracks, to look up to her Blue eyes. "Why can't I go out side?" I said. " You have been very disruptive" she said. " but, but," I looked at the ground. "Don't be so harsh Heathertail, she was just try to pass the time." said Whitetail. I looked up at her happily.

"Plus, this only happens once" says Whitetail. Me and Brownkit give Heathertail our Kit eyes. "Okay, But be back soon so I can groom you for your farther." said Heathertail.

We race out side. You could see excitement in our paws. "Wow the camp is huge !" I thought with au. " Do you want a guide around camp". I whip around to see a white tom with pale brown stripes. "yes" I say with happiness. I start To follow them "This is the apprentice den" I looked to see a big hole in the wall with little dips to make nests. " this is where we'll be in one moon" said the brown tabby she cat. Just then I see a cat three times my size." Hi Flintpaw" Both cats say. "hi" she says.

It hit me, I don't even know these guys names. "Er, I forgot to ask, what's your name" I said in embarrassment. " The names Gorgekit and this is Flowerkit " says Gorgekit. " I am Flintpaw and over there is my sister, Deerpaw. " said The grey she cat.

How was I ever going to get all the names down with the smell. I thought. "Do you want to practice some battle moves" Flintpaw asked. "yes " said Flowerkit and Gorgekit.

I looked over to see my sister going in another hole in the wall, so I followed her. " Hay, What are you doing ?" I said. "I want to look around on my own" she said." Then I will do it with you" I said.

"What are you two doing in here" I turn around to see a pale grey cat. " we were just exploring" Brownkit says. I look down at my paws. " maybe next time you will be more careful" she says. " Okay" we say.

We rush out. In a instant I see her go some where. So I follow her, She falls into some type of cave. "Are you okay" I say "yay" She says. Just then Kestrelfight comes in. you guys aren't supposed to be here." I thought this was a secret place" says Brownkit. "this is Onestar's den." He says. "can I come in" I ask.

" No, Because if one kit comes in Then it looks like an accident but if another one comes in then it looks like you are messing around." says Kestrelfight "okay" I say I hear my mom calling. Me and Brownkit we have to go I say. He gives me a curt nod.

"Have you seen the elders? they really like new kits." asks Heathertail as we walk in. "no, but I got to see some new cats " Brownkit's says. "you well have to see them after I am done grooming you." She says I sit down to get groomed. I can't believe we haven't seen it all! we will have to go around again.


Did you see that I used a bit of Bluekit and Snowkit action. I hoped you like it please review.

- Morningfoot