Chapter Two
Visitations
The Ghost Zone is home to thousands, millions, of ghosts. Those numbers only increased year after year as humans die or left over ectoplasm takes on a human like appearance or a shape that it prefers.
There are thousands that have intelligence to know what was happening around the zone. Many knew instantly when a new ghost formed, when a new plane of the zone appeared, fights against others ghosts occurred, and most importantly when a new portal to the human realm formed.
One of the many ghosts that knew of the human realm and had been there many times held this ability and was eagerly awaiting for another one to form, hopefully soon as well. That ghost just turned out to be a special wish granting genie.
"When is one going to open!?" She shouted as she slammed a green fist onto her table angrily. "I've been waiting for months now for a new one to open since all of Plasmius's portals were closed permanently." She growled as she began to float back and forth, unable to pace as she had no legs, only a ghostly tail. "The Fenton's disappeared a while before that and hasn't been opened since. What in the world is going on?" She asked herself as she crossed her arms over her blue belly dancer top.
Desiree was a powerful ghost in the ghost zone, but that was as long as she could grant wishes, but most ghosts hardly ever wanted to handle the consequences that came with a wish. And with the portals shut down she was unable to leave the Ghost Zone and grant wishes in the mortal realm and increase her power that way. So she had little if any wish granting in the last three months with little power gain with it.
"There has to be a way." She said as she bit at her thumb and continued her floating pace. "There has got to be a way to get out of her and gain more power." She muttered before she stopped, something sparking in the back of her mind that she recognized in an instant.
She smiled evilly as she realized what had just occurred in the ghost zone and she was intent on leaving for it as soon as possible. "By the feel of it, it'll take one human week to get to." She stopped as she began to think and then smirked as she decided on something. "I think everyone should know of this information." She muttered as she raised her hands into the sky and closed her eyes, imagining what she wanted and how it was going to spread the information.
A red mist materialized in front of her and soon took the shape of a large black falcon with red tipped wings. "Now go and tell Skulker, Ember, Technus, Fright Knight, and anyone else you meet that a portal has been opened at the west end of the zone! Now Go!" She ordered and the falcon took off into the ghost zone, intent on delivering its message.
Desiree smiled before she took off, but towards a new destination in mind. "Now, to gather more power." She whispered to herself with a smirk and soon she disappeared into the green of the Ghost Zone.
DannyPhantom
Months of hard work had been put into this and now Danny had just completed it. He smiled for the first time in a long while, an actual smile that wasn't a smirk. He couldn't believe it either, especially since he was a C average student back in Amity Park and now, he could instantly whip up technology that was at least twenty years into the future. It was insane what he could do after the time he had spent with Slade, his Master.
Danny quickly wiped his forehead of the sweat that had built there from working for the last seven hours straight. He glanced at the watch that he wore, it stated that it was midnight. Danny sighed as he stood up, ignoring the cool air that brushed against his bare arms at the moment. He had taken off all of the armor of his normal uniform and had put a high necked tank top on but had kept his normal pants and boots on. "Alright, let's see if this thing works." Danny muttered and moved out of the opening and towards a control panel that he had installed next to the machine.
He quickly typed away at the controls and then checked the cylindrical tube filled with glowing green energy and then back towards the controls. "Looks like everything is set." He muttered before pressing a green button and then walking over to the side where two large mechanical tubes set inches away from each other, both holding bits of metal out of them. "All I have to do now is plug this in and it should work."
Danny quickly picked both ends up and put them together.
A spark appeared inside of the machine and Danny quickly turned around to watch as all of his work came to fruition as the machine activated fully and soon a green swirl began to appear, slowly at first and then faster. Soon the opening was nothing more than a swirl of green energy emanating cold into the warm room.
Danny's eyes glowed a bright neon green, one that hadn't been seen since his life in Amity Park.
TeenTitans
"Do we even know what he took from the research facility?" Robin asked as he rubbed the bridge of his nose, the headache he had received after being knocked out not having gone away after several hours of awakening. "I mean it can't be that hard to figure out what he's building this time around from the components he needed, right?"
The rest of the team were all sat on the couch, each dealing with their headaches in their own ways. BB was laying on the couch with an ice pack against his head, Cyborg was tuning his systems to correct and fix any damages caused from the hit, Raven was simply meditating, and Starfire was drinking a glass of water. All were in various stages of healing but none of them were getting any rest since Robin had been drilling them all about what Phantom and Slade could possibly be building with the equipment stolen.
Cyborg looked up at Robin with a shake of his head. "The things he took Robin, they were just strange. I don't know why he would take a tube of concentrated ectoplasm or wiring of ghost proof power source, let alone a switch for a garage door opener." Cyborg listed off some of the equipment taken. "I just don't know what he could possibly do with any of those things, especially that tube of ectoplasm. You got anything Ray? You're more knowledgeable about the whole ghostly side of this anyways."
Raven looked at Cyborg with blank eyes before closing her eyes and going into deep thought. The room was silent as they waited for Raven's response, Robin's pacing was getting faster and his steps were pounding on the floor as well. "I have a theory." Raven spoke up after twenty minutes of thought, opening her eyes to stare at her curious teammates, Robin having stopped his pacing.
"Well, what is it?" Beast Boy asked as he kept the ice pack to his head but watched her with careful eyes, a gut instinct telling him that he wasn't going to like what she had to say at all.
"Yes friend, what is this theory that you have?" Starfire asked as well, setting the glass of water onto the table and watching her friend with a tilted head.
Cyborg and Robin both stayed quiet and waited for Raven to explain and it was only a minute later that she did. "Azarath is a place of magic and the dead." Raven started off as she closed her eyes again. "We have the ability to sense those who have passed but not cross over."
"So you can sense ghosts, like with Phantom, right?" Beast Boy asked with slight confusion edging his tone.
Raven nodded her head, not at all disturbed by the question. "Yes. The ghosts reside within their own plane of existence though, separate from our own."
"They have their own world?" Cyborg said but it came out as a question.
Raven nodded once again. "Yes, it is parallel to our own. Without one world to balance out the other, neither would exist." Raven continued to explain as her hands suddenly glowed and a picture of black energy appeared in front of her. "Once a human or being of this side of the veil dies," the picture of what the others could only assume was a human seemed to fall to the ground, "they have finished their purpose but if they have any regrets or do not wish to move on, they travel to the other Realm." Black mist leaked from the dead human and then seemed to slide across a line and then reformed into a monstrous shape. "Most of those who die lose who they once were and turn into great beasts without humanity."
"Okay, so what does this have to do with what Phantom stole?" Robin asked as the picture faded, only to bring up a black swirl that just sat there, swirling.
"I tell you this because those from my world have the abilities to open a portal into the other Realm where the ghosts reside." Raven said simply, causing Beast Boy to shiver in fright while the others looked at her in horror. "I have a theory that the equipment that Phantom stole will be used to open up a man-made portal."
Cyborg frowned at that before standing up and walking over towards one of the many computers in the living room area. "Don't you guys remember that time when Masters came in here asking for help?" Cyborg asked as he began to type away at the console.
"Of course, he brought up a lot of information from Phantom's past and on his family, friends, and that teacher." Robin replied as he watched Cyborg suddenly bring all of that information up on the big screen. "What about it?"
Suddenly several of the pictures and files were put away, leaving only two pictures up on the board that had all of the Titans' attention. One a newspaper clipping with no picture and then one that was a picture. "This is what I'm talking about. If Raven says that a portal to this other realm can be opened with magic, then technology has also been able to. This one picture is from a newspaper clipping stating that the Fenton Couple had created a portal to what they called 'The Ghost Zone' and that ghost began to attack the city." Cyborg explained as he centralized the newspaper clipping full view. "Apparently the two Fentons were both paranormal researchers that spent their lives studying ghosts and figuring out a way to open a breach between worlds. Masters explained all of this when he gave us the starting information on Phantom."
Raven and Robin both walked over to stand on either side of the robotic teen. "I remember now, Masters said that Phantom was the one to turn it on though. Still highly impressive." Raven stated as she pushed her hood off to reveal her face.
Robin nodded his head in agreement. "What was that other picture though? Can you bring it up again?" The boy wonder asked.
Cyborg nodded his head and quickly brought up the other picture, this one caught everyone's attention instantly. "Dude! Is that Phantom!?" Beast Boy quickly stood up from his place on the couch and leapt over to the other's sides.
"It does look like The Phantom does it not?" Starfire asked as she flew up to look from the air. "The resemblance is great and one would need to be quite dull not to notice." She stated as she hugged herself.
"It looks like that is Phantom, but is that the portal behind him too?" Robin asked as he looked at the green swirling energy within a hexagonal frame. "Is that it Raven?" Robin turned to look at their resident ghost expert.
Raven looked at the picture before nodding her head. "That is indeed a portal to the Other Realm. It seems that it is possible to make a man-made portal to the Other Realm." She stated before looking at the white haired teen in the picture, that smile on his face much different than the current one they were dealing with.
"The Phantom looks happy." Starfire blurted out as she too looked at the teen in the picture.
The others nodded their heads in agreement. "I wonder if that explosion really affected him like I think it did." Robin muttered to himself. Memories of the time when he had lost his own family bombarded him a moment before he shook them off. "Well he most likely had his family at the time Starfire, anyone would be happy to be with their family." Robin stated before turning to look at Cyborg. "You still got that ghost gear that Masters gave us right?"
Cyborg nodded his head. "Yep, I also went over it and modified them more to our style and to make them less obvious what they are. I think having a surprise for Phantom will give us an edge." He grinned widely at that.
Robin nodded his head in agreement. "Alright, if we're right and he's making a portal, then we'll have more than just our normal villains to deal with. Have any and all ghost gear ready to use at all times." Robin stated as he looked at his entire team. "Cyborg will give us our gear later, but for now, I think it's time we all got some rest. Go to bed Titans." Robin said with a grin.
"Yes! Finally my sweet bed! I hear you calling for me my love!" Beast Boy yelled in excitement as he ran out of the room to his long awaiting bed.
"Good night friends, I shall see you in the morning." Starfire said with a wave and then flew out of the room to go to her own bedroom as well.
Raven just nodded her head and disappeared in a shadow.
Cyborg's grin left his face and turned serious as he looked at his friend. "I'll boot up that ghost shield and leave it on at all times, that way we'll have some protection incase these ghost decide the tower is a perfect target." He said.
Robin nodded his head, just as serious as Cyborg. "Good idea, once you've done that though I want you to go to bed. Everything can wait until tomorrow." Robin said and patted Cyborg on the shoulder as he too walked off to get some sleep. "I'll see you in the morning." He waved behind him and left Cyborg in the living room alone.
Cyborg sighed as he looked around the room before deciding that he should get started on getting the shield up and running. "Then straight to bed." He yawned as he too walked out of the room, leaving it bare.
Batman!
"How many break-ins does this make now Alfred?" A deep and suave voice asked, staring at an older man with white hair but the top of his head was bald, black mustache, and warm onyx eyes; he wore the typical Butler outfit with his hands behind his back.
"That would make the tenth sir. All have been located in Jump City as well." Alfred replied as he looked at the giant screen that his Boss had placed in the cave underneath the mansion. "What will you do Master Bruce?"
Bruce Wayne watched the security footage of the latest break-in, a black haired teen dressed in a uniform that he had never seen before and another that used mechanical legs to move around. "I think it's time I paid Robin a visit." He said as he stood up from his chair and walked over to a display case that had his own equipment. "I'll leave for Jump City within the week." He decided.
"Of course sir." Alfred said as he turned to get everything taken care of. "It will be good to see Master Dick again." With that he disappeared.
Bruce smiled and nodded his head again. "Not to mention I finally get to meet this team of his as well. The Teen Titans, I anticipate our meeting."
TeenTitans
"It's been a week since we last saw him." Robin said to himself as he looked out the window. It was late at night and the moon was high in the sky, shining its light onto the city with an eerie glow. "Where is he? Has he finished the portal? Will we be swarmed by ghosts soon?" He asked himself before shaking his head and walking over to his drawers. "I think I need a walk." He said to himself before removing his Robin outfit and throwing on a pair of black pants, black shirt, and a brown jacket. He threw a red cap onto his head to hide his eyes.
He left the tower soon after that using a nondescript black motorcycle that he kept hidden from the others. It had been a motorcycle that Bruce had given him after he had left Gotham to find his own way and now he was happy that he had taken it.
Once he entered the city and found a place to park his bike, he walked around, keeping his face hidden and just staying out of the way of other people. He wasn't there to get attention but to walk and think without anyone interrupting him.
He had a feeling that something was going to happen soon and he wasn't going to like it very much. Not to mention that a dead weight in his stomach made him nervous since he only had that feeling when Bruce was around and watching him from the shadows. The man had always had a habit of watching Robin before making his presence known. Bruce always wanted to make sure that he would be welcomed and not pushed away, which Robin had done several times before.
Robin approached the park after about ten minutes of walking and deciding it was a good idea to be surrounded by the woodland, he walked in and wondered the park. 'So not only do I have to deal with Slade, Phantom, and most likely a bunch of ghosts coming into my city, but also an overprotective mentor. Great.' Robin thought to himself as a hand ran down his face in exhaustion.
He just couldn't seem to catch a break anywhere and because of that his stress was sky rocketing faster than freaking Flash himself. "What I wouldn't give for a break." Robin muttered as he continued his walk through the park, mind wondering on how he was going to deal with the villain duo and old mentor.
Robin walked for a while longer before he came across a bench and laid himself across it with his head comfortably cushioned on his arms while his legs fell over the edge and touched the ground steadily. He stared up at the stars that one could just barely see due to all the lights of the city and allowed his mind to wonder away from Slade and Phantom at the moment and instead to Bruce and his life back in Gotham.
He hadn't really had a problem living with his old guardian and his butler. He had actually enjoyed it for a long time before the feeling of being underestimated and underappreciated got to him and forced him to leave.
Robin would admit though that he did miss the dark corners and villain infested city where he had been able to leap across rooftops due to how crammed the city had been and how he could entertain himself with stalking a known criminal for hours until said bad guy did something to warrant arrest.
That had been a large part of Robin's childhood after his parents had been killed, not to mention all of the training and studies that Bruce had put the Boy Wonder through to make him not only strong but intelligent to handle any situation that came his way. That Robin was grateful for and he would always appreciate what the older man did for him no matter what anyone said.
It was just that Batman had a tendency to be a little overprotective and had almost caged Robin in with it at one point. Then there was the fact that the Night Avenger also believed that he was smarter than just about anyone, especially when someone even mentioned the Joker or Superman in his hearing range. Robin just couldn't take that anymore and had decided that he was going to try and strike it out on his own for once.
Robin laid there for what seemed like a long time and soon his mind wondered back towards Phantom and Slade. Though this time Robin would admit it was more on Phantom since the boy seemed to be an utter mystery to him at the moment.
Phantom had once been a hero in a town in Illinois, a small town that had been over flooded with ghosts and destruction for about a year before that explosion. Then…all the ghosts disappeared. The town, Amity Park, was left alone entirely and no more sightings of ghosts were stated or reported. Once Phantom had left it seemed as if all the trouble that followed him had disappeared with him and then the boy had brought it to Jump City. Robin wondered if Phantom's luck would follow to the fair city on the west coast.
Robin shook his head as he went back to the main thought of Phantom having once been a hero. The boy apparently knew right from wrong, there was no denying that from Phantom's past. So why Phantom decided that staying by Slade's side and being the man's evil apprentice was a good idea was almost beyond Robin's grasp.
Almost.
Robin hated to admit it but he understood why Robin had decided to stick with Slade. It was the same reason why Robin had decided to stick with Bruce back in Gotham so long ago.
Because they trusted the men that had taken them him and had actually cared about what had happened to them.
Though Slade obviously cared in a sick and twisted why that Robin had no idea how Phantom actually liked it, but Slade did care in his own way. Something Robin believed the Master Mind Villain incapable of doing for a very long time.
And because those two men cared about them, both Phantom and Robin had done everything possible to make their guardians proud of them.
For Robin it had been becoming a helpful sidekick and companion to a lonely and very brutal masked hero and millionaire. Robin learned everything possible from Batman and had taken everything in like a sponge to impress the man even when Robin had left to try and find his own place in the crime fighting world he still tried to make Batman proud.
Phantom had become the long awaited apprentice to Slade who had wanted someone to teach his morals and thoughts to while also teaching them a way of getting what one wants through manipulation and cunning. Phantom had done all of that and had learned Slade's fighting style and methods without even blinking. Phantom was doing everything in his power to keep Slade's attention and pride on him, even turning from Hero to a Villain to keep that pride and care from Slade.
Robin blinked at that as he realized a very important detail that he had obviously ignored for a while now.
Phantom and he were the same.
Obviously they had their differences but they shared so many similarities already that it was frightening.
Both had lost their parents to a tragic end.
Both had been taken in by great minded men. One good and one evil.
Both had experience in fighting and harsh training.
Both were determined to make the men that had taken them in proud.
Both were heroes.
Robin blinked at the core value similarities and shook his head in frustration. He knew that they shared all of those similarities but there were also differences that separated them from what they were now.
Robin had a team of great friends at his side.
Phantom only had minions or pawns at his disposal.
Robin chose to fight for justice after he had lost his family.
Phantom had decided on the side of evil after he had lost his family and escaped Masters.
Robin protected the peace of the Earth
Phantom fought for chaos of the Earth.
So yes, Robin and Phantom both shared similarities but they also had differences that separated them apart. Robin sighed once his thoughts calmed a little bit and looked at the faint twinkling of the stars again.
Though he knew what they appeared similar and how they were different, he couldn't help but wonder what Phantom's thoughts and emotions were at times. How did Phantom make the choices he did and what affected his choices.
"Man, I wish I knew what it was like to be Danny Phantom." Robin spoke aloud as he took his cap off and ran a hand through his hair in frustration.
"So you have wished it so shall it be."
DannyPhantom
Desiree smiled as she looked at the portal in front of her. It was just as she had felt and in the west end of the ghost zone and just like the portals that the Fentons and Masters had had back in Amity and Wisconsin. She couldn't wait to get back into the human world and gain more power.
So without further delay she flew threw and into a room with bright lighting, several tables against all the walls except for where the portal sat, and a door off to her right with a table right next to it. Each table contained some sort of weapon or device on it, most were incomplete while others looked finished.
Desiree looked at one of the tables and recognized instantly one of the devices and picked it up in a well-manicured hand. "I have not seen one of these infernal things in years." She said to herself as she looked at the thermos before ripping it in half in a rage. "It shall not contain me again." She declared and looked at the other tables to see if there were any more thermoses laying around for her to destroy.
She stopped minutes later when the door opened to reveal a teenager wearing a high necked black tank top, black fitting pants, and boots with metal bracing on the outside. The teen blinked emerald green eyes at the wishing ghost while the wishing ghost blinked at him. "I wouldn't touch that if that were you." He said as he walked into the room and over to her, as if she wasn't a ghost at all. "It'll decimate any ghost that touches it and I haven't worked out the bugs in it yet so it could destroy you by accident."
Desiree quickly pulled her hand back from the think belt like object before backing up from the teen. "Why would you care if I was destroyed, for you are the one making such devices are you not?" Desiree asked with narrowed and suspicious eyes.
The teen shrugged his shoulders as he picked up the technology and placed it in a cabinet so no other unwitting ghosts tried to touch it. "The technology I'm making are not meant to be used on non-consequential ghosts. They are for much bigger fish, so to say."
Desiree squawked in indignation at that and glared at the human. "How dare you call me non-consequential! I am a powerful ghost that can cause great harm to your human life!" She claimed with hands on her hips.
The teen looked at her again and smirked smugly. "That's because all it takes is one wish and it'll be all I'll need to trap you in a thermos or in the ghost zone." He stated easily.
Desiree stared at him in horror and surprise, unsure of what to think about the human standing in front of her, until she saw his eyes light up before settling back to a calm emerald. It happened so fast that she was unsure if it had actually happened. "How do you know that!? Who are you human?" She asked in anger.
The teen just shook his head as he turned back towards the inventions and began to put them up one by one, hiding them from the ghost's sight. Only once they were all hidden and out of the way did he press a button on his watch that sat on his wrist, the sound of something activating catching her attention. "Don't worry, it's only a shield on the tables to protect them from any ghosts that might come wondering in from the Ghost Zone." He explained calmly. "As for how I know about your powers and who I am, it's nothing important for you to know."
Desiree scowled at that as she crossed her arms over her chest. "What will you do now? Will you wish me back into the Ghost Zone and stop me from gaining power now?" The Wishing Ghost was sure that this boy would do just that too, stopping her from causing any forms of chaos.
She was pleasantly surprised though when he shook his head and waved his hand in a motion for her to go right ahead and leave. "I have no intentions of stopping you from entering the human world. Know though that if it somehow involves me that you will be sent back into the Ghost Zone." He stated calmly and with serious eyes. "So try not to involve me if you can help it."
Desiree stared at the human in amazement, unsure of what she was to do now that she had free reign over the human realm. "You're not going to stop me?" She questioned hesitantly. "You're just going to allow me to leave and cause mayhem as I please?"
The teen raised an eye and crossed his arms over his chest as he began to think of a way to formulate his reply. "I see no reason to stop you." He started as he looked towards the portal, his eyes seemingly flashing neon once again before settling into a calm emerald. "I may have once thought stopping ghosts from entering the human realm was my duty, but I don't feel like the responsibility is mine anymore, so no, I am not stopping you." He glared at her viciously a moment later though. "As long as you leave me alone and keep me out of your wishes." He stated once more.
Desiree nodded her head. "I cannot say that I'll be able to do that as my powers are to grant any wish that I hear." She explained calmly as she watched him with calculating eyes. "Besides I do not even know what your name is so I wouldn't know if it affected you or not."
The teen glared at her calculatingly before nodding his head. "Just know that if I do get involved somehow than I shall not hesitate to take you down, make you regret involving me, and return you back to where you belong. My name needs not be known by you either. Understood?" He asked as he stood up fully, but arms still crossed.
Desiree nodded her head. "Alright. Then I shall take my leave." Without even looking back at the strange human she left the area and flew into a large city with hustling humans that didn't even see her. "Ah, it seems that I have landed in the most populated place possible." She smiled at that as she looked at the tall buildings and billboards of products, TV shows, and movie stars. "This will be a grand place to gather power." She decided and began to fly around before coming to a park.
She floated along the trees for what seemed forever and soon night had taken over the city, layering it in darkness and quietness that only a park could have. "Where are the humans that wish for something? For a large city like this it is oddly deserted within this park." She stated before coming out onto a walkway with lights and benches lining it. She floated along until the sound of a young male voice caught her attention and her eyes flew towards a young man lying on a park bench.
He seemed to be watching stars, arms tucked underneath his head to pillow it. He wore a red cap and so hid his eyes while he wore a simple brown jacket with a black shirt and jeans. The boy seemed to be thinking about something while watching the stars but that didn't seem to stop him from speaking.
"Man, I wish I knew what it was like to be Danny Phantom." He said with a sigh.
Desiree couldn't believe what he had wished but the smile that graced her lip was victorious. "So you have wished it, so shall it be." She intoned loudly, startling the young man.
The young man quickly sat up and looked at her as he began to be surrounded in green mist. "What? What's going on? Who are you?" He asked quickly as he jumped up and took a fighting stance that quickly sagged as the mist surrounded him.
"Do not worry for your wish shall be granted." Desiree stated happily as the mist engulfed him entirely. "You shall know exactly what to be Danny Phantom."
Desiree watched happily as the mist seeped into the young man before disappearing entirely and leaving him to glow brightly in green. The light slowly left him and soon the young man stood entirely still, his cap on the ground, showing that his eyes were closed at the moment.
"So Phantom? How are you doing?" Desiree asked with a smirk as she watched the eyes open to reveal emerald eyes sparkling with…anger? Desiree frowned at that as she had expected confusion, fear, worry, and maybe some annoyance, but not anger.
The green eyes stared up at her with anger and hatred as a snarl twisted the young man's face suddenly. "I told you that if you involved me in any of your wishes that you would regret it."
Desiree's eyes widened in horror at that statement and realized exactly who the mysterious teen from before really was. Such hate and anger, not to mention calculating cunningness had been something that the halfa had been back in Amity Park. She hadn't thought that the teen from before was the halfa because of those reasons and so now staring into such cold eyes did one question enter her mind. "Danny Phantom what has become of you?"
DannyPhantom
A.N. Alright, what did you guys think of this chapter? I know there wasn't all that much action in it but there was some things that I needed to be said and to get the plot set up properly. I hope you didn't get too bored and to know that some action shall be coming up soon. Please review!
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DemigodPhantom- Thank you for your enthusiastic review. It was entertaining to read.
KuriMaster13 and Kuro-okami13 and Phantom Earth and RoxyConan-Kun- Good job on guessing what he was building. Cookies to you my friends.
Dreblspooky- normally I agree with you and other people one threatening people with dropping the story because I don't get reviews, but there is a flaw in the viewed counter. It tells us who all looked at the story but not if they actually read it. Also I like to hear criticism so I can try and add what one might like to read or to adjust it slightly to make it more interesting. I might not take everything into consideration but I gives ideas not just for this story but others. As for succumbing to peer pressure, I was actually already writing this after I posted the last chapter of the first, I just wanted to know if it was worth it to actually post it. Seems it was.
J158n- I'll see what I can come up with about that. Sorry if it did get repetitive though.
As for everyone else, thanks for reviewing and telling me what you thought, I'm working on making this story just as great as the first. As for the thoughts on Dani, Kindred Spirits was after TUE and I don't actually plan on having her in this story. Sorry about that.