What's Wrong with Goku?

by Chiu-kun

After eating some food from a stranger Goku gets sick and later he slips into coma, during his coma he relives his last day in Heaven before him and the gang were banished.What will happen when he realizes who the Sanzo party actually are? If he tells the group will they even believe him?Will they remember too?(Chapter 1 takes place during his coma. Some Curses and somewhat gore)

2. Chapter 2

Hello there: D it's been a while *cough* five months *coughing seizure*. Sorry for disappearing like that I was quite busy , as well as having major writer's block. Lately I have been having some home problems so I'm typing this at Barnes 'n' Nobles…
Anyway please enjoy 3 (just know that I am putting Kanzeon's speech in italics)

"There he is!" Tenpou exclaimed as he spotted Goku's blood-drenched lithe form." But he's…-"

"Surrounded…and Kanzeon is among them" Konzen finished.

Kanzeon raises her left hand above her head to dismiss the army surrounding Goku, with some hesitance they retreated themselves to the back of the room. Kanzeon stepped slightly forward, and almost instantly Konzen and Kenren sprang in front of Goku; arms poised in a defensive stance. Tenpou hurriedly went to Goku's side to see if he was hurt. Kanzeon lowers her left hand to signal peace for the moment. Konzen and Kenren still do not lower their guard.

"Kanzeon, what are trying to accomplish here?" Konzen gritted through his teeth.

"Simply to make him repent for his actions, he must be punished—"
"He was attacked! What must he repent for?" Kenren interrupted.

"Whatever punishment you plan for him to receive, I wish to receive them in his stead."Konzen demanded. Kanzeon rose her hand to quiet the two interrupting Gods "Fear not my young nephew, I will not cause little Goku here any harm. I am simply going to allow him some rest; he's had quite a long day." She replied calmly.

"Like hell you will!?" Konzen and Kenren yelled out as they sprang forth to attack Kanzeon.

Kanzeon closed her eyes in disappointment and simply deflected their attacks by slapping their fists away, sending them flying towards separate walls on either side of her. As Kanzeon turned around awaiting another attack, Tenpou grabbed Goku and ran towards the Dimension Gate. The army moved swiftly in front of the hall, Tenpou sighed and lowered to his fighting stance as he carried Goku over his shoulder.

(I hope I can explain this right, "GriffinRose" I'm trying to take your advice)

Tenpou searched for an exit through the hoard of soldiers, but to no avail. "Well, I guess I got to just go through." Tenpou sighed.

Random soldier: "If you think you'll ever be forgiven by Heaven, you are all sadly mista—"Tenpou knocked him out with an upward kick to the soldier's chin.
"Now now, who said we wanted to be forgiven by you hellions?"Tenpou smirked as he dodged another soldier and stole his sword in the swift movement. "Come now, surely the heaven's 'all mighty' army can take this mere field marshal." Tenpou taunted. Multiple angered soldiers sprang forth to attack at once. Tenpou spun gracefully with his sword, slashing every soldier who dared to jump at him. Goku's passiveness soon vanished due to all the movement and jumped off Tenpou's shoulder. Seiten Taisei's mentally had returned and was ready to spill some blood. Tenpou stood in place much like the other soldiers frozen in fear. The killing intent emanating from Seiten Taisei's body was enough to make some soldiers try to flee, but their running was in vain for Seiten Taisei leaped into the air over them to block their passage. Many soldiers, who seemed to have death wishes, tried to attack but to avail for Seiten Taisei was too fast and sliced their arms and heads off with his razor-sharp nails. Tenpou watched in disbelief as his 'sweet little Goku' fought with such blood-lust.

"No…Goku please, just come back…" Tenpou silently begged as he readied his body into a fighting stance. Realizing they weren't going to get out of this alive the soldiers separated to fight both Tenpou and Seiten Taisei, to die trying.

So…I feel like I've made you all wait long enough. My writers block is a total beeyotch and cannot be tamed. Thank you for being so patient. I didn't make a long chapter because my internet at home has been quite slow (even though my other chapter wasn't that long either :P)and quite frankly I think I've bought too much tea here(I gotta go home now). Yeah, so if you can, please review and give meh the critiques. It would really help, I still would love for some of my readers to pm me things that they would like to see in my stories. 3 Meh, I've talked for too long ~Stay Gorgeously Golden