Thank you mystmoon92 for reviewing! =)

Italy with a Portal gun was actually the easiest to write for me…Any other one would sound really awkward - -;

Speaking of which, we get the Portal Gun this update =D

BTW, I tried my best on Italy's dialogue here, but he seems kinda OOC to me, so just a heads up.

I'll shut up now!


Chapter 2- Portal Gun

"Oww…"

Another voice chimed in, saying something about technical difficulties, society and technology failing, etc. But when it finished an orange hole appeared in the wall.

"Is this what the England Orb was talking about?..." He thought about what it had said about a 'gun that makes holes in walls'

Italy nervously stuck his hand through the hole, and was relived that it didn't hurt him. He hopped through it and found himself in a completely different room. In front of him he saw the room he had just been in.

"Veh? What is this?" He poked the hole but nothing happened. He noticed a hallway and decided to run down it, hoping to find a way out.

"Ve! A door!" Italy ran up to the door he saw at the end of the hallway. It opened when he got near it. Just inside he saw a large red button. He tried stepping on it, and the other door in the room opened, but when he stepped off, it closed.

"Why won't it stay open?" He looked around and saw a cube on the floor.

"Maybe this'll work…" Italy grabbed the cube and picked it up

"This is kinda heavy.." He dropped the cube on the switch and the door opened. Italy ran towards the door to get out of the room.

"Yahoo~! I solved it!"


Italy found an elevator behind the door. There was nowhere else to go in the room. He stepped in, the doors closed behind automatically.

"Ve! Wh-What?" The elevator started to descend.

The door opened to an identical room. Italy ran out of the scary elevator and up the nearby stairs.

"Hey! You made it!" It was the England Orb! "The Portal Device is over there!"

"What Portal device?"

"The Gun that makes those holes you saw"

"Ohh.." Italy understood what he meant, and ran around the corner, but he didn't see anything.

"Veh? Nothing's here.."

"It must have fallen off, that's right.. Look around the pedestal, It should be nearby." Italy walked over to the pedestal,

And the ground collapsed beneath him.

"AHHHHH!" Italy screamed as he fell. But it stopped when he hit the water on the ground below.

"Are you Okay?" Italy couldn't see the Orb anywhere. Italy felt tears well up in his closed eyes, he was scared of this place.

"Do you see the Portal Gun anywhere? I'm gonna assume you're still alive and wait for you up ahead.."

Italy got up wiping his eyes, and looked around his new surroundings. It was dark except for the light coming from up above and down the nearby hallway. Italy ran down the hallway until he came across some makeshift stairs. He saw something shiny on top of them.

"Veh? What's this?" He ran up the stairs and found an odd gun like object laying on the ground. "Was this what it was talking about?"

"How do I use this?" Italy picked up the gun and tried poking the glowing lights on the sides of it. Nothing Happened. He looked in side the black part of the gun and saw two buttons. (I honestly have no clue exactly how the Portal Gun works, so I'm making this up as I go along)

"Do I press this?" He reached in and pressed the left one. A pulsing blue orbish thing shot out of it. Italy screamed and dropped the gun. He looked around trying to find another way through the room. He saw a platform, and an orange hole in the wall.

"Is it like earlier?..." Remembering how they had worked, he looked nervously at the Portal gun. "D-Do I have to use this?" He picked up the gun.

"So I have to press one of these switches…" He looked away and pressed the left one again. The gun fired, and to Italy's relief, didn't hurt him. Italy looked in the direction that it had fired and saw a blue hole in the wall. Looking through it, he could see his back.

"Waa~!" He turned around and fired at another wall. A Blue hole appeared in it. He stuck his arm through, still nervous about the holes, or Portals. He jumped through, ending up on the platform he had seen earlier.

"Does this let me teleport!" He looked joyfully at the Portal Gun. He shot at the floor of the platform, but no blue Portals appeared.

"Aww…" He noticed some stairs and ran up, happy about his new found item.


This is much better then the rough draft xD

Sorry if Italy seemed OOC in this…

As I said before, I'm not going over all the puzzles unless I can make them humorous in some way. The late game ones are ridiculous…Freakin huge..

Also, I'm writing a bit ahead, and if anyone can help with ideas for GLaDOS's dialogue, I would send you a hug. I am so lost on that since she's angry cause you killed her. Italy didn't kill her…

I know these updates will eventually slow down, but for now I have chapters pre-written. A few anyway.

Anyway~ Review's would be welcome =D