N.B. I don't own any of the characters and am quite glad I don't at times.
I'll apologise now if the science is a bit off but I was never very good at it and thankfully stopped two years back, hence why I'm very rusty on even the basics.
This is set in series seven and beyond, I know it doesn't fit with what happens in ep 1-2 of series 7, I have an excuse as I haven't watched them still being in the middle of series 6 but I do know what happens. I won't say more other than I don't agree with what happened. Bear with me and I'll try and do an alternative.
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Jonas skidded to a stop outside of the control room before joining Sam, Jack and Teal'c there. He was surprised to notice that Dr Jackson wasn't there,
"Where is Dr Jackson?" Jonas asked Sam
"I have no idea he should be here soon." she said listening to what General Hammond said.
"Do we have an identification?" he was saying
"It's the Kelownans."
"What are they doing here?" Jonas asked not willing to believe that they'd come to demand an answer to the question they'd asked him a few weeks earlier.
"I have no idea. Open the iris" Hammond said.
"May I go down and speak to them sir?" Jonas asked
"By all means go ahead." Hammond said. Jonas hurried down the metal stairs and was waiting form the Kelownans when they got there. There were just three of them and Sam was sure that they were the same ones who'd wished to speak to Jonas several weeks earlier.
"What do you think they want sir?" she asked the colonal who was standing nearby
"I don't know but Jonas isn't giving them the amswer they want anyway." the colonal replied. After maybe five minutes more talk Jonas stormed back up into the control room his usually cheery face showing his anger.
"The Kelownans would like you to dial up their home so they can return they have said all they want to." Jonas said his voice completely calm before walking out the room.
"Jonas wait" Jack called before following him.
"What do you want me to do?" the technician asked
"What Jonas said and send the Kelownans home." Hammond said wondering what had happened.
"Jonas wait up" Jack said hurrying to catch up with the other man.
"What can I do for you colonal?" Jonas asked slowing down.
"What happened back there? I've worked with you for a year now and I have rarely seen you loose your temper that quickly."
"They want me to go home."
"I don't see the problem with that."
"They want me to be an ambasador to the other parts of Kelowna. I don't want to do that. I want to see the Universe. They won't accept the fact that I haven't made up my mind yet and are trying to pressure me into doing so." Jonas said
"Why don't you go back and try it? You aren't currently assigned to one of the SG teams so you could be being useful there." Jack said rather untactfully especially as Jonas swung round to face him his brown eyes flashing
"I know you want me to be gone. I know that you never wanted me here in the first place but I don't want to go there yet and especially not after they lied to us about my friends. I'll go away for good soon enough colonal but if you are so desparate for me to leave why did you bother allowing me on your team in the first place?" Jonas demanded. Jack wasn't often at a loss for words but on this occasion he was especially as the young Kelownans remarks had cut very close to the bone at times.
"Jonas ..." Jack trailed off. Jonas gave him a disgusted look before walking off.
"Well that went well." Daniel said quietly
"What are you doing here Daniel?" Jack asked
"I um forgot the way to the control room when the alarm went off." Daniel said flushing slightly.
"Oh ok" Jack said "It's this way" The two men went back to the control room.
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Jonas' room.
The young Kelownan was pacing the room, he couldn't believe that they had come to ask him again. He'd told them that he'd let them know and that they weren't to contact him, aparantly the situation was getting worse. He didn't want to go there and find out that it wasn't what he wanted to do as he knew the people of his planet well enough to know that once they had hold of someone they didn't like to let them go. That was where his idea would prove to be useful as it would get him away from his people and all responsibilities. He just needed to talk to major Carter and Dr Jackson to see what they though of the idea before he went to confront Genral Hammond. He knew that Colonal O'Neil would be gald for him to be gone especially as Jonas had just shouted at him. He wasn't angry with the colonal though he was just frustrated by events that he had no control over.
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"I do not think that Jonas Quinn is angry with you O'Neil." Teal'c said
"I know that but what he said it was true. I didn't want him here to start off with, I blamed him for Daniel's death and I didn't want him to be on the team until I was preassured into it." Jack told his friend
"Have you tried talking to Jonas?" Carter asked
"Me and him have never really bonded, he's just too young to be here and on the team."
"I was younger than him when I joined" Daniel put in
"Daniel shut up" Jack said not wanting his friend to point out problems with his argument.
"All I'm trying to say is that Jonas is a smart guy and he realised that you didn't want him here. He doesn't want to go but you haven't said that you want him to stay." Daniel said not shutting up.
"He didn't tell us about the Kelownans." Jack pointed out
"No offence sir but none of us asked him what they had wanted. He has been very quiet and preoccupied recently but I didn't think to ask him why." Carter said.
"It can't be easy for him after all. His planet exiled him for doing the right thing, he joins you and travels round the universe then I turn up alive again and just pick up where I left off. He doesn't know where he fits in." Daniel said
"I'll try and talk to him again." Jack promised
"Don't force him into anything sir as you'll only regret it later." Carter warned.
"I know, I know" Jack moaned
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"Jonas are you in there?" Jack asked knocking at his teammates door. There was no answer "Jonas?" he called again. This time there was a sound inside and the door slowly opened.
"Colonal I .. what are you doing here?" Jonas asked slightly worried.
"I think we need to talk."
"If it is about me loosing my temper then I am sorry." Jonas said quickly before the Colonal could say anything.
"That's fine Jonas honestly. Can I come in I don't think you want everyone to listen in on our little chat." Jack said
"Oh sure come on in." Jonas opened the door, he moved a pile of papers out of a chair and dumped them on his bed.
"Why didn't you tell us about the Kelownans visit?" Jack asked
"You had enough to worry about with Dr Jacksons return and the fact that he couldn't remember everything." Jonas said
"You could still have told us we are your team and I'd think after a year you would be able to trust us a bit." Jack said
"It wasn' that I don't trust you but I know you only allowed me on the team to stop a Russian being forced on you. You didn't see me as much other than a replacement for Dr Jackson and now he's back you'd just forget about me." Jonas said with a bitter note to his normally cheerful voice.
"I know I didn't want you on the team to start off with as I saw you as the man who was responsible for Daniels death but you proved me wrong, you saved the planet when Anubis tried to blow it up ..."
"You were the one who flew the plane and could have died." Jonas interupted
"It was your idea in the first place. You also saved our lives on that mothership when you could have just left us there to die." Jack said
"I know what I've done it was something that anyone could have done." Jonas said still sounding bitterly
"Jonas shut up. I may not have wanted you on the team but you changed my mind you were a valued member of the team and if Daniel hadn't come back I would be glad to keep you with us. Hammond only allows there to be four people on a team but if you'd like I could ask if you could be our backup member if any of us got hurt and couldn't go on a mission." Jack offered.
"I haven't made up my mind yet whether I want to stay or not." Jonas pointed out.
"I think you should stay. Your people can find someone else to fill that job. Anyway Teal'c would feel lonely if he was the only alien on the base." Jack said. Jonas gave him a rather feeble smile.
"Thank you colonal." Jonas said
"Try Jack. You aren't an official member of the team and I think we can drop formalities. Shall I go tell General Hammond that you are staying then?"
"Yeah I'll stay." Jonas said with one of his grins which Jack couldn't help but return.
"Good." Jack said honestly clapping the younger man on the shoulder
"Thank you co ... Jack" Jonas said hesitantly.
"Think nothing of it. Just remember next time to talk to us we are your friends Jonas." Jack said with a smile
"I guess this is home then." Jonas said to himself with an even bigger grin than usual.
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There you go part two I'm sorry it took so long but it is very difficult to write about this program for some reason. I have no problems with LXG but oh well. Hopefully the next bit will be up within a week. Please let me know what you think.
I'll apologise now if the science is a bit off but I was never very good at it and thankfully stopped two years back, hence why I'm very rusty on even the basics.
This is set in series seven and beyond, I know it doesn't fit with what happens in ep 1-2 of series 7, I have an excuse as I haven't watched them still being in the middle of series 6 but I do know what happens. I won't say more other than I don't agree with what happened. Bear with me and I'll try and do an alternative.
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Jonas skidded to a stop outside of the control room before joining Sam, Jack and Teal'c there. He was surprised to notice that Dr Jackson wasn't there,
"Where is Dr Jackson?" Jonas asked Sam
"I have no idea he should be here soon." she said listening to what General Hammond said.
"Do we have an identification?" he was saying
"It's the Kelownans."
"What are they doing here?" Jonas asked not willing to believe that they'd come to demand an answer to the question they'd asked him a few weeks earlier.
"I have no idea. Open the iris" Hammond said.
"May I go down and speak to them sir?" Jonas asked
"By all means go ahead." Hammond said. Jonas hurried down the metal stairs and was waiting form the Kelownans when they got there. There were just three of them and Sam was sure that they were the same ones who'd wished to speak to Jonas several weeks earlier.
"What do you think they want sir?" she asked the colonal who was standing nearby
"I don't know but Jonas isn't giving them the amswer they want anyway." the colonal replied. After maybe five minutes more talk Jonas stormed back up into the control room his usually cheery face showing his anger.
"The Kelownans would like you to dial up their home so they can return they have said all they want to." Jonas said his voice completely calm before walking out the room.
"Jonas wait" Jack called before following him.
"What do you want me to do?" the technician asked
"What Jonas said and send the Kelownans home." Hammond said wondering what had happened.
"Jonas wait up" Jack said hurrying to catch up with the other man.
"What can I do for you colonal?" Jonas asked slowing down.
"What happened back there? I've worked with you for a year now and I have rarely seen you loose your temper that quickly."
"They want me to go home."
"I don't see the problem with that."
"They want me to be an ambasador to the other parts of Kelowna. I don't want to do that. I want to see the Universe. They won't accept the fact that I haven't made up my mind yet and are trying to pressure me into doing so." Jonas said
"Why don't you go back and try it? You aren't currently assigned to one of the SG teams so you could be being useful there." Jack said rather untactfully especially as Jonas swung round to face him his brown eyes flashing
"I know you want me to be gone. I know that you never wanted me here in the first place but I don't want to go there yet and especially not after they lied to us about my friends. I'll go away for good soon enough colonal but if you are so desparate for me to leave why did you bother allowing me on your team in the first place?" Jonas demanded. Jack wasn't often at a loss for words but on this occasion he was especially as the young Kelownans remarks had cut very close to the bone at times.
"Jonas ..." Jack trailed off. Jonas gave him a disgusted look before walking off.
"Well that went well." Daniel said quietly
"What are you doing here Daniel?" Jack asked
"I um forgot the way to the control room when the alarm went off." Daniel said flushing slightly.
"Oh ok" Jack said "It's this way" The two men went back to the control room.
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Jonas' room.
The young Kelownan was pacing the room, he couldn't believe that they had come to ask him again. He'd told them that he'd let them know and that they weren't to contact him, aparantly the situation was getting worse. He didn't want to go there and find out that it wasn't what he wanted to do as he knew the people of his planet well enough to know that once they had hold of someone they didn't like to let them go. That was where his idea would prove to be useful as it would get him away from his people and all responsibilities. He just needed to talk to major Carter and Dr Jackson to see what they though of the idea before he went to confront Genral Hammond. He knew that Colonal O'Neil would be gald for him to be gone especially as Jonas had just shouted at him. He wasn't angry with the colonal though he was just frustrated by events that he had no control over.
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"I do not think that Jonas Quinn is angry with you O'Neil." Teal'c said
"I know that but what he said it was true. I didn't want him here to start off with, I blamed him for Daniel's death and I didn't want him to be on the team until I was preassured into it." Jack told his friend
"Have you tried talking to Jonas?" Carter asked
"Me and him have never really bonded, he's just too young to be here and on the team."
"I was younger than him when I joined" Daniel put in
"Daniel shut up" Jack said not wanting his friend to point out problems with his argument.
"All I'm trying to say is that Jonas is a smart guy and he realised that you didn't want him here. He doesn't want to go but you haven't said that you want him to stay." Daniel said not shutting up.
"He didn't tell us about the Kelownans." Jack pointed out
"No offence sir but none of us asked him what they had wanted. He has been very quiet and preoccupied recently but I didn't think to ask him why." Carter said.
"It can't be easy for him after all. His planet exiled him for doing the right thing, he joins you and travels round the universe then I turn up alive again and just pick up where I left off. He doesn't know where he fits in." Daniel said
"I'll try and talk to him again." Jack promised
"Don't force him into anything sir as you'll only regret it later." Carter warned.
"I know, I know" Jack moaned
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"Jonas are you in there?" Jack asked knocking at his teammates door. There was no answer "Jonas?" he called again. This time there was a sound inside and the door slowly opened.
"Colonal I .. what are you doing here?" Jonas asked slightly worried.
"I think we need to talk."
"If it is about me loosing my temper then I am sorry." Jonas said quickly before the Colonal could say anything.
"That's fine Jonas honestly. Can I come in I don't think you want everyone to listen in on our little chat." Jack said
"Oh sure come on in." Jonas opened the door, he moved a pile of papers out of a chair and dumped them on his bed.
"Why didn't you tell us about the Kelownans visit?" Jack asked
"You had enough to worry about with Dr Jacksons return and the fact that he couldn't remember everything." Jonas said
"You could still have told us we are your team and I'd think after a year you would be able to trust us a bit." Jack said
"It wasn' that I don't trust you but I know you only allowed me on the team to stop a Russian being forced on you. You didn't see me as much other than a replacement for Dr Jackson and now he's back you'd just forget about me." Jonas said with a bitter note to his normally cheerful voice.
"I know I didn't want you on the team to start off with as I saw you as the man who was responsible for Daniels death but you proved me wrong, you saved the planet when Anubis tried to blow it up ..."
"You were the one who flew the plane and could have died." Jonas interupted
"It was your idea in the first place. You also saved our lives on that mothership when you could have just left us there to die." Jack said
"I know what I've done it was something that anyone could have done." Jonas said still sounding bitterly
"Jonas shut up. I may not have wanted you on the team but you changed my mind you were a valued member of the team and if Daniel hadn't come back I would be glad to keep you with us. Hammond only allows there to be four people on a team but if you'd like I could ask if you could be our backup member if any of us got hurt and couldn't go on a mission." Jack offered.
"I haven't made up my mind yet whether I want to stay or not." Jonas pointed out.
"I think you should stay. Your people can find someone else to fill that job. Anyway Teal'c would feel lonely if he was the only alien on the base." Jack said. Jonas gave him a rather feeble smile.
"Thank you colonal." Jonas said
"Try Jack. You aren't an official member of the team and I think we can drop formalities. Shall I go tell General Hammond that you are staying then?"
"Yeah I'll stay." Jonas said with one of his grins which Jack couldn't help but return.
"Good." Jack said honestly clapping the younger man on the shoulder
"Thank you co ... Jack" Jonas said hesitantly.
"Think nothing of it. Just remember next time to talk to us we are your friends Jonas." Jack said with a smile
"I guess this is home then." Jonas said to himself with an even bigger grin than usual.
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There you go part two I'm sorry it took so long but it is very difficult to write about this program for some reason. I have no problems with LXG but oh well. Hopefully the next bit will be up within a week. Please let me know what you think.