Please review about the crystal I have some ideas I just want to see if someone has a better idea than me

Please review about the crystal I have some ideas I just want to see if someone has a better idea than me. I do not own Storm Hawks

Now on with the story.

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Water poured from the heavens turning the once dry ground into a slippery mud. Finn stumbled through this squinting and wiping mud off his face from the few times he had fallen.

"Aerrow" Finn shouted after regaining his balance. With no answer he shouted Pipers name with the same results. Where could they be the battle was finished and neither of the two had been seen since the talons left. They'll be fine. He mused continuing to stumble through the mud.

While walking he was suddenly sent flying forward and landed flat on his stomach looking at a secluded part of the battle field. His eyes opened wide as he saw three shadowy figures on the battle field. One stood taller then the others with a blade and a purple crystal that was almost black in the hilt. Finn recognized him it was the Dark Ace.

Listening closely between claps of thunder Finn could hear parts of the conversation.

"What did you do to her" Aerrow shouted

"You'll find out soon enough Aerrow. Oh did I forget to mention something" Dark Ace said thinking

"Just shut up Dark Ace you're a sick person, and to believe we used to call you uncle." Aerrow managed to choke out

"Oh I remember now. She's dieing, your little girlfriend is going to die. And I never was an uncle I was a lowly co-pilot." He said spitting the last part as if it were poison. "And Aerrow, times change". He said before he flew off on his switchblade.

Finn stood up taking a radio out of his pocket. The radio crackled to life as he spoke into it "Hey guys I found them".

"Are they alright?" came Junkos worried reply

"I don't know, I can see them but I haven't talked to them yet."

"What's your position Finn?" Storks said twitching on the Condor "And by the way were doomed!"

"Stork be positive for once" Finn said while making fake choking noises.

"I can't for al I know you could have Core mind worms. They come from under the ground and enter your brain through your ear. Then you go insane and kill your self. No cure."

"Uhh….that's nice Stork" Finn said with weird expression on his face.

"I thought you put tracking devices on us?" Junko asked trying to get Stork off the subject of mind worms.

"I did, I forgot, and were doomed!" he said then took a breath before saying "I'll bring the Condor there" Then his line went dead.

"See you in a bit buddy" Junko said before his line went dead.

"Yeah" Finn told he as he put turned his radio off and headed towards Piper and Aerrow.

Aerrow was trying to wake Piper up his voice filled with worry and his eyes filled with unshed tears. Finn walked up and put his hand on his shoulder. "What happened Aerrow?"

Before Aerrow could answer, a loud horn blasted through the air and the Condor came into site and landed carefully. The other all came running out Radarr leading. Coming up to where Finn stood they had only one thing on their minds.

"What happened" Junko asked breaking the silence and giving voice to every ones thoughts.

Aerrow looked at Radarr who was nuzzling Pipers hand trying to get her to scratch his head. With that not working he let out a howl and curled up next to her. Aerrow then looked up into the eyes of his squad mates and said "Dark Ace hit her with a crystal and now… and now she's dieing"

Hoped you like that chapter. It was kinda hard to keep everyone in character in a sad seen when there never sad on the show. I tried and I hope I did a good job. For the Crystal challenge you have tell next Tuesday or June 23 to submit your idea through reviews. I am going camping this weekend so chapter 3 should be up around the 24. If not it is because I am getting ready to go to summer camp at NAU for a week. From the June 25 – July 1 so I will not be able to update.

Please review. I mean come on I know you wanna hit that blue button down there.

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