So, I completely re-wrote the last half of this freeverse & also made it longer. So hopefully, for those of you who read the other version of it, you can tell me if this one is better. I replaced it with the first chapter so if you don't mind would you go back and read it again?
You guys are all really great & I appreciate all the reviews and every other type of story alert I get.
Love,
TwistedLikeMe