this update consists of 2 parts, first part contains the replies for the reviews I received in previous chapter, and the second part contains the first chapter of the story...
part-I Replies to reviews
Ok guys, to sabse pehle FF pe present sabhi "Gadho" ko meri taraf se hellooo...
no no no..dont mind, ye main nahi bol rahi hu, balki ye kehna hai mere ek 'genius' guest reviwer ka, previous chapter me mujhe ek review mila, jisme is guest ne mujhse kaha ki, "tum sabhi purvi-shreya fans gadhe ho"...and so far as I know , most people on FF whether writers or readers, belong to shreya-purvi fans, so us guest reviewer ke hisab se, hum sab gadhe hi huye na, that's why I said that...
and then that guest addressed shreya as auntie... it clearly shows how immature he/she is...so baby I would like to say that apni pyari shreya 'auntie' ki bate baad me karna pehle mummy ko bolo tumhara diaper change kare, bahut badboo aa rahi hai... aapki pyari shreya 'auntie' ko aapke jaise gande bachhe bilkul pasand nahi hain...hey, have you seen the advertisement of "mammy poco pants", so please use it, seriously...bahut badboo aa rahi hai...
samaira dear I totally agree with you as you said that "being someone else's fan is ok, but to hurt others felings is not a modest act" lekin chodo itni choti si baat un logo ko kya samajh aayegi jinhe apna naam tak likhna nahi aata.
dear aur tumne ye bhi dekha ki, usne kiska fan banne ko suggest kiya , mujhe to naam sunkar hi hasi aa gayi, you know usko padh ke mujhe aisa laga , jaise koi keh raha ho ki, "shahrukh-salman ko chhodkar chunky pandey ke fan ban jao...hahahaha!
another guest review was like "go to hell with your ideas" ...to main us guest ko batana chahungi, ki main 'Hell' mein hi rahti hu...us hell me jaha bade bade devils aur monsters rahte hain...and I am their BOSS, wo meri puja karte hain...so you better not mess with me...stay away, stay safe...
and some people informed me that I am stupid, mad...etc etc...
to main un sab ko bata du, aap logo ko mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai...mujhe pata hai..Yes, I am stupid, mad...mera screw dheela hai...batana hai to mujhe ye batao ki us insan ko kya kahenge jo na sirf ek stupid insan ki post padhta hai balki uspe apna keemti time nikalke review bhi karta hai..
and dear shanaya tumhe mujhpe itni meharbani karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..tumhe mental hospital call karne ki jarurat nahi hai, main mental hospital me hi hu, wahi se type kar rahi hu aur wahi se post kar rahi hu...but I'd like to suggest you to avoid reading my fics or posts on FF...nahi to pata hai mere bagal wala ward khali hai, kahi aisa na ho ki tumhe pakad ke waha rakhna pade...free ki advice hai, leni hai to lo warna mera kya ja raha hai, main to hu hi pagal...
aur dusri baat you suggested me to leave the topic and come with any other new topic, to apne dono kaan kholo aur meri baat suno, ye decide karne ka hak sirf aur sirf mujhe hai, ki main kya likhungi, aur kispe likungi...same is with you, you are free to decide tumhe kya padhna hai, aur kya nahi padhna hai...itna to dimag hoga na tumhare paas, jo cheej nahi pasand ..stay away with that na...ya to phir shayad tumhare parents ne yahi sikhaya hoga ki dusro ke mamle me taang kaise adaate hain...
liza dear ek baat batana, jab daya sir tumhare ghar aaye the tumhe ye batane ki wo us track ke sath comfortable nahi hain, to tumne unhe kya offer kiya tha, tea or coffee...wo car se aaye the ya wahi CID wali quails lekar, akele aaye the ya koi aur bhi tha sath me...anyway lot of questions...just leave it...but han agli baar jab wo tumhe aisi koi secret info dene aaye ...to unse kehna ki wo sabke samne aakar official statements diya kare...is tarah se sirf kuch fans ke kaan me jakar na bola kare...ok!
aur rahi baat unki respect karni ki to...to sabse badi disrespect to unki tum hi log kar rahe ho, unke talent par shak karke, that being an actor...he is uncomfortable in doing acting...he is comfortable in only one genre of acting..acting ke kisi dusre form me wo uncomfortable feel karte hain...jaha tak main janti hu, ek actor ke liye different types ke roles karna, acting ke different forms me kaam karna hi uske liye sabse bada satisfaction hota hai...challanges accept karna actors ko pasand hota hai...but ho sakta hai...daya sir thode anoke insane hain...who is comfortable in only breaking the doors...playing piano in the criminals mouth...cid is considered as a kid show...ab pata nahi ek kid show me unhe aisa kya karne ko bola ja raha tha...jisse wo uncomfortable ho gaye...aur agar aise koi scenes the bhi to I think aise cases me female actor jyada uncomfortable hoti hai...whatever!
aur doosri baat...jo log bolte hain ki...daya sir is track se uncomfortable feel karte the...isliye ye track stop kiya gaya...guys...do you all know that daya sir himself has written the script of the episode "Murder in matheran" in which there was a very sensible dareya scene in it...ok chalo main maan leti hu ki baad me kisi aur ne us script me dareya scenes dale honge...to kya daya sir us waqt itne powerful nahi the ki wo mana kar de ki main ye scene nahi karunga...2 saal tak wo track successfully chala...phir achanak daya sir ko realizw hua ki wo to is track se uncomfortable feel kar rahe hain...aur phir achanak wo itne powerful ho gaye ki unhone show ke director ko bola ki mujhe ye pasand nahi, band karo is track ko..aur director unse dar gaya..aur track ko jaise taise band kar diya...so illogical...kuch to dimag wali baat karo yaar...koi bhi actor ho wo itna powerful nahi hota ki director uske ek baar kehne par apne show ka ek successful track khatam kar dega...everybody is aware of dareya popularity...
dusri baat jab kisi cheej ke peeche 2 kahaniya sunayi jati hain to, to unme se sirf ek hi sach hoti hai...hum sabne tv pe apni aankho se B. sir ko ye kehte huye suna tha ki day sir ki love story isliye successful nahi hoti kyunki is se unki popularity ya fan following kam ho jayegi ( what a nonsense...but whatever...) so it is true..that it is the reason...and definitely the 2nd reason daya sir ke uncomfortable hone ka apne aap galat sabit ho jata hai...it was all just a "Rumour" ...nothing else...
aur maine aisa kab kaha ki mere ye story likhne se dareya wapas aa jayenge...stories likhne se agar dareya wapas aate to FF is flooding with dareya stories...you said that you also like dareya...pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa laga ki jaise kisi ne tumhe gunpoint pe rakh ke ye line likhwayi ho...anyway If you are really dareya fan...then nice to meet you!
liza one more thing you said that...nobody will pay attention to my fic...dear...ye kya bol rahi ho tum...tumne khud kaha ki..tum generally review nahi karti lekin meri post ne tumhe "force" kiya review karne ko...agar ye story kisi ko review karne ke liye force kar sakti hai to tum ye kaise keh sakti ho ki koi ise attention nahi dega...whatever but I'd really like to appreciate your behaviour, you were really humble, tumhe pata hai ki apni baat kisi ke samne kaise rakhi jati hai...wo alag baat hai ki main tumse agree nahi karti...but thanks for your humble response...
DuoLove.M, dareya's lover aka charvi, topaj007, blair.64, nia757, muskaan, shreya, jebagomes1, Anaya, bhumi98 thank you all for your positive response...but only this much dareya fans are around there, dareya fans ki sabse badi problem yahi hai ki jaha pe aapke support ki sabse jyada jarurat hoti hai aap log usi time sleeping mode me chale jate ho...
I received a lot of positive reviews, but guys I am sorry, aap logo se jyada thanks main bashers ko bolna chahungi...because positive reviews just encouraged me, but the negative reviews almost provoked me to continue my this project...main na aisi hi hu, jo nahi karne ko bola jata hai na , wahi karti hu main...so it were the bashers because of them...I decided ki ab to main is fic ko har haal me likhungi ... stop me if you guys can!
mujhe reviews ki kabhi koi parwah nahi rahi hai, main yaha apni marji se aayi hu aur jaungi bhi apni marji se, lekin agar ye bashers aise hi mere har fic pe review karte rahe na to, I promise main yaha se kabhi nahi jaungi...I love you all so much! Really! Wo kya hai na...maine humesha sirf apni tareef suni hai...thak gayi thi itni sari tareefe sun ke, now I am seriously enjoying my bashing...infact mujhe bashing jyada pasand hai...because they make me laugh like anything...maine kisi se pucha nahi tha ki continue karu ya nahi...maine sirf bataya tha ki mere paas ek naya concept hai, aur main uspe likhne ja rahi hu...kyunki mujhe achhi tarah se pata hai ki mujhe kya karna hai, aur wo mujhe kisi se puchne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...
guys I know ye part thoda jyada hi lamba ho gaya but kya karu...jawab dena jaroori tha... now moving to the next part...which contains tha first chapter of this story... I know that...bashers are more eager to read it than the supporters...so here we go...
part-II CHAPTER 1
21st july 2014
a beautiful girl is standing at a bus-stand, she is impatiently waiting for the bus...she is checking the time again and again...
girl: oh God! Ye bus kab aayegi...mujhe ghar jana hai...main aur intejar nahi kar sakti...
meanwhile the bus arrived, people rushed hurriedly to get in pushing each other, that girl also tried to get in...but at the same time...a boy came and he also tried to get in, and their heads crashed with each other...
girl: ouch! Kya kar rahe ho, 2 minute ruk nahi sakte!
Boy: (smile) sorry! Well...ladies first..
and he showed her the way to get in through his hand...
Girl: huhh! I don't believe in ladies first concept...waise to mujhe thodi jaldi hai, but I think pehle tum aaye ho, to pehle tum hi bus me chadhoge...
Conductor: oh, hello...pehle aap...pehle aap ke chakkar me bus nikal jayegi...phir khade rehna bus-stand pe hath hilate huye...
The boy gave him a look and get inside the bus...the girl also followed him..the bus was overcrowded...there was only one seat left unoccupied...they both looked at the seat...
Boy: is seat tak pehle main pahunch hu...ab tumhe seat offer karunga to phir tum bologi ki ..you don't believe in ladies first concept...phir bhi main nahi chahta ki mere samne ek ladki khadi hokar travel kare...tum baith sakti ho...
Girl: no thanks! Main khade hokar travel kar sakti hu...
Boy nodded his head in no...and took the seat...that girl was standing holding the support...in one hand she was carrying some files and she was checking the time again and again...meanwhile the bus took a turn and that girl could not manage herself and one of her file dropped down from her hand...That boy picked it up..
Boy: miss Shreya Deekshit...aapki file..
Shreya: what the...tumhe mera naam kaise pata...
Boy: is file se...
Girl: tumhe kisne kaha uthane ko..main khud utha sakti hu...
Boy: malum hai malum hai, agar pehle pata hota ki ye tumhari file hai..to main choota bhi nahi...but tumhare alawa yaha aur kisi ke hath me file nahi hai, aur tumhi mere sabse kareeb khadi ho , isliye mujhe laga ki ye tumhari file hogi, waise tumhe to kisi ne thanks bolna sikhaya nahi hoga...
meanwhime the passenger next to that boy, got up ...now the seat was empty...that girl immediately took that seat because she was really tired ...
Shreya: thanks!..
Boy: you are welcome...by the way...I am daya...
Shreya gave him a fake smile and started looking outside...suddenly her cellphone beeped...she received the call...
Shreya: ha...maa...han main bus main hu...aapki awaj theek se nahi aa rahi hai...main aapse ghar pahunch ke baat karti hu...han han...interview achha gaya...ok main rakhti hu...bye!
daya: to tum interview dekar aa rahi ho...
Shreya: han...
and she again concentrated looking outside the bus...
daya: by the way...I think tum CID bahut dekhti ho, right?
Shreya looked at him shockingly...
Shreya: ha, par tumhe kaise pata?
daya: hahaha, tum ladkiyan bhi na...actually jab tumne apna call receive kiya to I just noticed your wallpaper...tumne SHIVA aur MEERA ki photo lagayi hui hai na..
(here shiva and meera are denoting daya and shreya , so don't be confuse)
Shreya was so excited now...
Shreya: ha, iska matlab tum bhi CID dekhte ho, main na shiva aur meera ki bahut badi fan hu...I just love this couple so much...infact, main sirf unhi ke liye CID dekhti hu...they are soooo cute...
daya (smirked): huhh! Seriously, tum sirf inke liye CID dekhti ho, I mean baki ke characters...acp pradyuman, inspector abhijeet...dr. salunkhe...etc..sab faltu hain...
shreya: maine aisa kab kaha...mujhe baki ke characters bhi bahut pasand hain, but shiva and meera are my most favourite...
daya: you know what...cid is a crime show...its all about trio...aur tum jaise fans hote hain jo , ye nonsense romantic tracks ki wajah se cid dekhte hain...I cant believe it...
shreya: excuse me! Tum mujhe galat samajh rahe ho...agar shiva aur meera mujhe itne pasand hain ki mujhe unke aage dusre characters nahi dikhte to main kya karu..wo hain hi itne adorable...aur main akeli nahi hu ok...this couple has a huge fan following...
daya: ok, fine...tumne kal ka episode dekha?
Shreya: aaj mera enterview tha..main isme busy thi, isliye maine kal ka episode miss kar diya...but maine promo me dekha tha ki kal koi ladka meera ko dekhne aaya tha, shadi ke liye, pata nahi..kal ke episode me kya hua hoga, mera sara dhyan wahi laga hua tha...jaise taise to maine interview diya...ghar jate hi mujhe wo episode dekhna hai, mujhse to intejar hi nahi ho raha..I just hope ki ab to shiva meera se apne dil ki baat bol de...
Daya: hahaha...you know what...kal ke episode me kya hua...
Shreya: kya hua?
Daya: meera ne us ladke ko ..matlab siddharth ko shadi ke liye han bol diya...aur shiva bhi is baat se khush hai...I think meera is quitting CID..achha hai...I am so happy...main to chahta hu ki wo jald se jald mere shiva ki life se door chali jaye...so finally this track is going to end...
Shreya: aisa nahi ho sakta, meera is not quitting cid...aur tum bas dekhte rehna, wo ek din jaroor ek honge..huhh!
and she angrily got down from the bus...
daya: are are listen...
shreya: tum mujhe follow kyun kar rahe ho?
Daya: I am not at all interested in following a crazy fan of shiva and meera like you...main to apne gahr ja raha hu...mera flat yahi hai...
Shreya: mera flat bhi yahi hai...
Daya ...1 minute...wait...wait ..wait..dad ne mujhe bataya tha humare bagal wale flat me kal koi deekshit family shift hui hai, ...shreya deekshit...oh God! Iska matlab...tum mere bagal wale flat me...
Shreya: ji han...aur agar tumhe shiva ur meera ke fans se itni hi allergy hai na to flat chod do aur kahi aur shift ho jao...kyunki ab to tumhe roj mujhe jhelna hi padega...
Daya: oh no...
And they both gave each other an angry look...parted their way and moved to their flats...
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A/N: so here ends the first chapter of this story... how was it to see daya and shreya themselves arguing upon dareya track indirectly...whatever... the debate over this issue has been started...share your views...and wait for the next chapter...I know that unintentionally I have written the most controversial fic of FF...prabably...so I will not stretch it much...it will have 4-5 chapters maximum...
To ab aage kya hoga...2 cid fans..jinki pasand ekdum alag hai...unki nafrat to shuru ho chuki hai...kya ye pyar me badalegi...kab aur kaise...janne ke liye...wait for the next chapter...
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