Ash kept walkign. He walk for a long tiem. But he just could'nt shake off the sad feeling from abandonign his PIKAchu.
He knew. He knew thagt it had to be done. To progress. Just that whenever he thught of doin it befor, when they travelld, his hart wud hurt. At the thot of abandonign his once-beloved POKEmón. So he did not do it, until he picked up the courage to now.
But that should'nt matter now. He would start over, start over again. After al, this was just his a rival at the region of UNova a few days ago. So he could treat that as his brand new journey and forget about Pikahcu.
He stopt in the midel of his walk. Head bent down in shame at treating his POKEmon like that, for screeming at him, during there last moments.
"No. I half to do this. Ive got to keep going."
And head now looking up, to the distance, he tried to look sirius, with determination. In tge far distans he saw the next town. Lookign bak at his POKEbag, he open it and look inside. He count the POKEball he had left.
5.
This wood be enugh to catch another POKÉ for now in the Forest while he can, before the Nicht. He would find a place to stey after he would catch the mon.
Wait. Maybe he cood go back to lab and ask Juniper for starter there?
...No.
This is my journey.
And this time, I will choose a POKEmon myself. No one can shoes for me.
Filled with Ambition, he set off to serch.
"Farewell, and goodbye, friend..."
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Witers' note::
I did a minor Change in the first chapter. Just adding that PIKA did'nt evolve. Also, title chang.
I got a lot of review, THREE revieww, in my last chapter. This made me really happy and filt me with Determination. I half not receivt a tghat amount before. So I see a lot of supPORT behind the scenes. Thank YOU.
I also got two follow and one fav.
I also believe in TRANSPARENCY. I want people to know that I will NOT lie to NOR DECEIVE anyone in need. I have responded to the reviews, and I will show you what I said. Because TRUST is very important. (Edit: this part spell chek as u can see,)
Here are the exact same worded review response in my pm to them the three people with the review as of the publishing of chapter:
To DarkNight55
Hello,
I'm glad. That you said The Story has promise. I know, about your concerns, and I also belief this is out of his charakter to act like that, but umm, um, in later chapter, also like you suggestet, I will also tell the readers more on that. Also, if you read the chapter two, which I will post in about a few minutes, you will get to see what ash actually thinks about this whole think.
Thank you! I really liked how you support, it make me really happy. I hope you can read and see what happen.
To Thor94
Yes, the anime has its falts. I agree.
Thank you for redding the story! This is the begining, I hope I wont let ppl daun.
Noté: I did naught respont to Fire4Heaven because she no coment on story. This is a spam? Someone report.
Noté entreé #2: in my fir respons, this actualy didn't take me few min to post chapter #2. So ima sory for lying, but I did not know it wood take so long. So I am not lying.
i hope not to make lying mistake again in future.
please respond, review, feedback,, and like.
