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Brick's POV

like I thought, it was easy for me to get to the Sub-Conscious. I just walked around causally like I belonged there. There was a quiet buzz of conversations. I noticed a very innocent looking couple. They looked like brother and sister. I walked over.

"What did you do?" I asked.

I hear a lot of people ask that question here. They both looked down. But they were holding hands.

"We kinda..." the blonde boy started.

"...Sinned against each other." the blonde girl finished.

Ah, my favorite type of sin. That should have gotton them into hell.

"But we're Christians."

There you go.

"So you guys are sister and brother?" I asked. They solemnly nodded their heads.

"I'm Boomer."

"I'm Bubbles."

Twins. I looked around solemnly. This place was pretty depressing. I didn't know how to break away from the happy couple. I looked around again. When I flashed a glance at the two, they were smiling at me, like I was gonna do something they've been waiting for.

"Uh... when d'ya die?" I asked. I would have caught their smiles fading if I hadn't heard someone shout,

"Get on the train! Get your tickets! Hurry up if you want a spot on the train!"

I whipped around to see a train on a very-hard-to-see clouded train tracks and a bushy mouth man waving a train bell. People started shuffling very quickly towards the train and train tickets. I turned back to the two, who were eyeing me nervously, sort of hopping up and down.

"uh... you're excused?" They practically disappeared as they went to the train. It was filling fast. I took a hint and shoved everyone out of my way, took a ticket and went on the train. The last person who squeezed on and made it on the train was someone I thought belonged in heaven. She had flowing orange hair and beautiful pink eyes but that's all I had time to take in because she snuggled into the crowd. The train was packed full of people, more people then there seemed to be waiting in the Sub-Conscious. But it was easy enough to move around.

I looked around for the two sinful twins. I saw them sitting happily in the back of the train. Surprisingly, unlike the Sub-Conscious, no one on the train was asking "what did you do?" and things like that. Just silence. I guess they're just nervous. I walked up to the two twins.

"Oh, Brick!"

Did I give her my name?

"Is it ok if I come with you? Cause I want a second chance. Not to go back there." She was holding her brother's hand.

"Uh.. sure.."

I was nervous, cause if this girl follows me, she could be naughty. More naughty then she ever was with her brother.

Blossom's POV

When I had gotton to the Sub-Concious, it was surprisingly full. My father truly is merciful. I walked around for a while when I saw him. No, I didn't mean Him, the king of the underworld, I meant his very close assistant. I had seen him before, When daddy and Him fought. He'd just stand around nervously, like he's doing now. His hair was shiny, no doubt from constant exsposure to fire, and had sexually dark green eyes, that would turn any soul on. Oh, man! I'm already thinking sinfully! Maybe it's not too late to turn back!

"Get on the train! Get your tickets! hurry up if you want a spot on the train!"

The TRAIN OF TOMORROW! I have to get on it to get to Earth! I came this far, I can't turn back now! I quickly rushed forward, accidently bumping into a cute blonde couple, grabbed tickets and sprinted for the train of tomorrow after shuffling around the milling crowd. The train whistle blew for it to take off. With one strong leap, I was on and it was off.

I snuggled my way to a handelbar, to kep hold of the rackety train. Even though the Sub-Concious was noisy, It was quiet in here. But even so, I heard small converstion.

"...A second chance. Not to go back there."

I waited for the short pause to end.

"Uh... sure."

His voice was heavy but light at the same time. It was like... a deciving voice. I snuggled my way to it, and just for a split second our eyes met and locked. It was only a split second but it felt like more. My eyes widened as I looked deep into his red eyes and as his bore into mine. I felt myself be filled with temptations, But I quickly turned away before I took in anymore. I quickly shoved my way back to the handelbar.

Thoughts raced through my mind. The temptations and sins poured into my head stuck, and things I never thought before came rushing in like unexpected and unwanted visitors. I read my thoughts and thankful that none of them read lust. One of the worst sins of the 7 deadly. I sighed in relief. How could one person put so much thought of sin into one's mind? How did he get a second chance?

I turned to see the young assintant shuffling nervously by the train doors. What was he doing here?

Brick's POV

I was sitting at the end of the bench, realizing there were no windows in this place. So I decided to scan the crowds. My eyes lazily looked around, when I met the eyes of two pink pearls. My insides tingled, and I felt myself glowing, even though I knew I wasn't really glowing. I sat up straight when she turned away. I wonder how long I stared at her. One second? Two? Three?

I looked towards the twins. I met Bubbles' eyes and she threw back flirty ones. I turned away, more nervous now. Maybe it was a mistake telling her she could follow me. Maybe I should tell her she can't follow me anymore. Well, I think it's too late anyway. My insides still tingled with a good feeling and I just squeezed my stomach. Then I hugged myself. Maybe it'll go away when I become human. Will I become human? I turned and looked for my tail. It wasn't there.

I pulled out my book from whatever and it had grown quite lengthy. I guess I shouldn't have let it wait and grow like that.

I cracked it open to read.

tried to make it long but I got too tired and I had declared that it had enough for one chapter! review!

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