So I got the computer all to my self for a while so I'm typing it here instead of my IPod which is why the chapter is already here. (If I did it on my IPod it would of taken forever) So the next chapter is in an initiate's point of view. It will not be a repeat of last chapter (I hate it when people do that) it continues from when the last chapter left off.
Leanne Candor Transfer POV
Once I get our beds we start to set up, the dorms are very plain but that's going to change soon. I plan on going shopping as soon as possible. Tris told us that the Dauntless get a certain amout of points to spend on stuff in the stores. Thinking of Tris I start talking with Sam. "Tris doesn't look qualified to train us." I say, we're from Candor so she's used to me getting strait to the point.
"You're right," she replies, "I mean there's only the one Erudite transfer who is shorter than her, everyone else is a good 2 inches taller, and when the Erudite asked her if she was qualified she completely ignored you. That's cowardly by my standards."
"I thi-" I'm cut off by someone entering the room. It's Tris, I hope she didn't hear us, actually never mind that I hope she did hear us, it's not like she could do anything about it.
Tris POV
I approach the dorms and hear some initiates talking "Tris doesn't look qualified to train us." I hear. Why that little dog (Just FYI I don't swear) I look into the dorms and see that it's 2 Candor girls who are talking about me. I will make their lives hell (No, I don't count that as a swear word review or PM if you want to know why) nobody talks about me like that and gets away with it. I can't wait 'till tomorrow. I step into the room just as one of the Candor girls is about to say something.
"Ok everybody lights out. Make sure to be at training by 7:00 sharp." I announce, and watch them all go to their beds. Then I flick the lights off and head to the training room. I start setting up the guns for tomorrow's training when Four walks in. He comes up behind me.
"What's wrong?" He asks. He knows me so well.
"Just some Candors being stupid." I reply "Oh and havng to train without you."
"How about this tomorrow for the guns and in the after noon for the fighting and after that I'll come for all the fights, it's not like Eric didn't." I shudder at the mention of Eric. At least he's not a leader anymore, too bad they didn't kick him out of Dauntless. I'm glad Four's gonna come help me I'm feeling a little better now.
"Sounds good, I'm going home now, love you Four!" I walk up to him and give him a kiss.
"Love you Tris." he says. I leave smiling, and head back to my apartment. Once I get there I put on my pjs and go to bed. Thinking of tomorrow.
Ok so I know I said it would be just the initiate but there wasn't much to put so I did the rest in Tris's POV. I would love any feed back you can give or if there's a specific character you want me too add. I also need to know if you want short chapters often (4-7 times a week) or long but less often (1-2) times a week. Please review I don't know weather or not to continue. See you next chapter.
OMG! How is this even possible? I posted this chapter ten minutes ago and I got 60 views. The only thing that could make me happier is getting some reviews. Thanks everyone.
