Okay, Chapter one coming atcha!


Chaptero uno!

Max's POV

" Ssh- don't wake her up!"

"I won't! Do you think I'm stupid!"

"Do you seriously want me to answer that?"

I heard a thud and then-" Shut-up freak."

Fang and Iggy. I knew it was them from their voices.

They had been acting really weird lately. Sneaking away from camp bright and early in the morning, and coming back two hours later- with nothing in their hands.

It had started four days ago, after our last run-in with the bad guys. The Erasers had pinned our location-once again. Don't ask me how they do it- they just do. And that's all I know- all I really care to know.

We've been on the run for three years. Ever since we were 11, Fang and I have been the leaders of the others. I guess you could we're like their parents in a way- but in reality, we're just their older siblings. And I like it that way.

Anyway, before our last mishap with the Erasers, we had just barely escaped the Academy for the umpteenth time. I know- we're idiots for continually going back there, but we needed info. And I felt really bad for those kids still stuck there.

We had been them once, but we were freed by our "ally". Chyea right! We found out that our "ally"-our "friend" was really a scum-sucking, back stabbing, piece of-

Whoa, calm it down Max.

I opened my eyes, mumbling as I sat up-" I'll show you calm-"

I looked around our makeshift home- one of many.

Angel and Total were curled up next to the remains of last night's fire, with Gassy not far.

Nudge was- actually I didn't see Nudge anywhere!

I stood up saying her name.

" Nudge?" I called, trying not to wake up the youngest members of the Mix.

I turned around, looking everywhere.

" Nudge, this is not funny! Get out here now!"

I heard a crunch of leaves under someone's boot- and whipped around- to see Nudge come out from behind a tree.

I sighed and stared at her.

" What? Jeeze Max."

I sighed again and sat back down, watching Nudge lay down to go back to sleep.

Iggy and Fang still weren't back, but that wasn't a surprise. They wouldn't be back for another hour or so.

Where do they go anyway?

That's for them to know and you to find out.

Yeah? When? ' cause all this sneaking off is really starting to bug me!

With patience, you'll get very far.

But with impatience, you'll get there faster! Ha!

Silence. I just love it when the almighty Voice doesn't have a comeback!

I laid back down, still wondering where the guys were going- and why they kept it a secret- not a very good one, since I knew about it!

About five minutes later, I drifted off to sleep.

1 hour later:

The next time I woke up- it was by an oddly dark dove landing right next to me.

It started to change- to morph into the familiar figure of Fang.

You could always tell when a certain animal was a certain best friend of mine because it was always slightly darker than it should be.

Fang- now looking like Fang again- stood up and stretched his back.

He turned to me and offered his hand- never saying a word.

"Come on Max- I've got something to show you."

I reached out and took his hand so he could help me up.

"What about the others….."

I trailed- because I realized, they weren't there- they were gone!

I looked back to Fang- who was trying, unsuccessfully, to hide a grin.

I guess I looked pretty stupid-' cause Fang started laughing, making the world a better place.

Ha! You do have feelings for Fang!

No I don't! Shut-up!

" For someone as fast as you- you sure are slow!"

I rolled my eyes and playfully punched his arm- which just made him smile more.

He tugged my hand, pulling me toward the trees.

" Come on slow poke."

He lead me through the trees, never letting go of my hand.

" Fang?"

" Mmhhmm?"

" Where are we going?"

" You'll see…"

I started to worry- 'cause that's what I do- that we were getting too far away from camp.

I mean- I trusted Fang with my life, mainly because he's saved it a few times before.- but he was leading me pretty deep into the forest.

Fang started to walk faster and faster, until we were running.

" Come on Max- keep up!"

I laughed, picking up speed-" Me? Keep up? You forget sometimes that I have super speed sometimes!"

This time he laughed, slowing down to a stop.

He turned me so I was in front of him. He stood behind me, and put his hands over my face- guiding me slowly forward.

Two more feet and we stopped again.

I heard leaves rustling and- water.

" Fang, where are we?"

He pulled his hand away- revealing the most beautiful waterfall I had ever seen.

It flowed down into a deep ravine. The sun shown down on the water, making a rainbow.

I was speechless.

Fang came closer behind me- and whispered in my ears-

" Happy Birthday Maximum Ride"

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAX!"

Iggy, Nudge, Gassy, Angel, and even Total came out of various places surrounding the ravine, each one-except Total- holding a sign that Read happy birthday or throwing confetti.

Each one- except Fang, who stood off in the back. But I could see the smile in his dark eyes.

That's not just a smile Max…

Yeah? Then what is it?

Oh, now that's the question isn't it?

I ignored the Voices annoying comments- just letting myself enjoy my birthday.

To be honest- I had completely forgotten it was my birthday. So this was even more special- because it meant my family had remembered.

" Actually- we forgot too Max, sorry. This was all Fang's idea."

" Angel!" Fang and I both said this- for different reasons though.

I looked over at him and met his eyes. He held my gaze and smiled- only for me to see though.

" Yeah- that's why we've been sneaking off. To get the confetti and find the best place to surprise you. That was all Fang though too."

I heard Iggy say this, but I was still looking at Fang.

" Really?" I said quietly.

For some reason- the idea of Fang doing all this for me, made me feel- weird. But in a good way. I don't know how to explain it- but I like it.

Fang nodded- never moving his eyes.

"Thank you- all of you. I couldn't have asked for a better birthday."

They all smiled-or were about too- because right then our favorite person dropped by-

"Oh, I think you could have Max."

Ari- Happy birthday to me.


This is Chapter 1- the other one was the prologue. Yeah- so...your thoughts?