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Anywho, here is chapter two! hope you all like it! :)


You are now Mal Fallon

You rush into the hospital. There is a woman at the reception desk, who immediately takes notice to you. She looks at you questioningly as you run to the desk.

"May I help you, sir?" she asks.

You're breathing heavy. Because you've been running. You had to go get your car from the bar before you could drive here. But you're also hyperventilating because it feels as if your heart has been sitting at the bottom of your stomach since this morning.

"Natara Williams. Where is she?" you ask.

The receptionist types at her computer. She speaks to you without taking her eyes off the monitor.

"Room 213. There's a small waiting room just down the hall from there. That's where everyone else has been waiting. Go ahead through those doors," she says, pointing behind her, "The doctor will be out soon to update you all."

"Thanks," you mutter as you rush through the doors she pointed out. You follow the hallway down and soon find Blaise, Kai, and Oscar waiting.

Blaise notices you first. "Mal!" She rushes to you. You hug her.

"How is she?" you ask.

"We don't know yet. We were just told to wait here for the doctor."

You nod at her and glance to Oscar. His eyes are watery and he stares only at the floor. A look of guilt sits in his eyes. He looks up at you.

"Mal."

"Oscar," you reply. Just looking at him makes you angry. Not only because you're in love with his fiancé, but because from what you have gathered from Natara's stories. It seems he doesn't appreciate her at all. He doesn't deserve her. You do.

You just hated it so much. You would trade anything for Natara to be okay. Even your own life. That's how much you loved her.

"Were you with her last night?" Oscar asks you through clenched teeth.

You nod. "We were out late. She took a bus home."

"Why didn't you stay with her, asshole? Why didn't you make sure she got home okay? This is your fault, Mal." Oscar stands, sizing you up. You're taller than him, but not by much. "This would have never happened had you made sure she got home okay! You're careless Fallon. No wonder your wife cheated on you."

That crossed the line. You know for a fact Oscar knows nothing of your divorce with Sandra. You get close to him, your face inches from his.

"Look, do you not think I already blame myself enough? Just shut up. I would do anything to go back in time to keep this from happening. And leave Sandra out of this. You have no damn idea what the hell you're talking about. Where were you last night, huh? Why didn't you pick her up? She wouldn't have taken the bus had you just left your friends and got her."

He looks at you, with now confused eyes. "I wasn't with friends last ni…." he trails off. His eyes widen in realization and he looks at you, hoping you didn't hear what he said. You did. He shakes his head and continues, "How was I supposed to know she needed a ride? I only told her not to wait up for me. She should've called me."

"Excuse me? Mr. Santos?" A woman with a long white lab coat walks out from one of the rooms.

Oscar looks at you one last time before turning to the doctor.

"Yes?" he asks.

"You're the fiancé?" Oscar nods. "Okay. Well, it seems Ms. Williams is in a comatose state. We have no idea how long she'll be like this. It could be hours, it could be days, it could be weeks. All of you are welcome to stay a few more hours, but it's very unlikely she'll wake up today. I'd advise you all to go home. None of you are helping her by staying here. It'd be best to just leave and wait for any updates."

You all nod, unsure of what to do.

You are the one to speak first. "Can we see her?"

The doctor nods. "Of course. This way."

You begin to follow her, when Blaise places a hand on your arm.

"I'm gonna head out. I think Kai is too. I'm sorry Mal." She gives you a hug before she walks out.

Kai steps up to you. "Sorry Malligator. Hope Special Agent Hottie Boom Bottie is all right!"

You simply nod at him. A sad look spreads across his face and he glumly follows Blaise out. Oscar stands behind you, planning on going to see Natara with you.

You follow the doctor the rest of the way to the hospital room and see Natara lying down in a bed. Her face is peaceful, unstressed. She seems so serene. There is a chair next to her bed. You sit there before Oscar even has a chance to see it.

The doctor leaves and then it's you, Oscar, and an unconscious Natara alone in a room. This should be good, you think to yourself.

"Don't think I didn't catch what you said earlier, Oscar," you say, referencing his "I wasn't with friends last night."

"What could you possibly mean, Mal?" he asks you.

"Where were you last night?"

His eyes drop to the floor. "With no one."

You chuckle humorlessly to yourself. "I asked where. Not who with."

Oscar glances around, looking at everything except you. "I was just out."

"Oscar. Where. Were. You."

He sighs, before finally locking gazes with you. "Mal, if I tell you, it's sure as hell going to get back to her. I feel terrible about it, already. I need to be the one to break this to her."

You look at him. You have an idea as to where he was. But you don't want to say it out loud. Not because you're afraid you're wrong. But because you're afraid you might say a few things you'll regret.

"You were with someone else…"you finally say. He doesn't deny it.

"You were with another woman," you mutter. Again, no response.

"You bastard!" you yell at him.

"I swear to god Mal, if you tell her, I'll beat your ass. I'll tell her when she wakes up. You have no place telling her. I'm going to fix this, and you're not gonna mess that up."

You jump from your chair. "You don't deserve her! You…jackass! How dare you? She gave you everything! And what do you do for her? You cheat on her!"

He looks at you. "She gave me everything? Is that what you think? Do you wanna know what we talk about? Wanna know what our conversations consist of? What's for dinner, what we did at work, and you. Most of what she tells me is about you, Mal. What else was I supposed to do? She doesn't appreciate me."

You walk up to him, pull back your right fist and let it fly towards his pretty face. He's caught by surprise and he cradles his jaw with his hand. He looks up to you, wide eyed. You scoff at him before you storm out. You didn't want to leave Natara, but you couldn't stand sitting in a room with the cheating, lying bastard.

You leave the hospital. You get in your car and sit for what seems like an eternity. All you can think of is Natara and how hurt she'll be.

But then, you think of Oscar, and how his face will look after you beat him up even more.

No one does that to the love of your life. No one does that to Natara.

You are now Natara Williams

There was flashing lights, screaming…

And pain.

You don't know where you are. Everything's dark. You can't see anything. You can't move. The only thing you notice is the faint sounds of yelling.

Yelling.

People are yelling.

"You bastard!"

"How dare you?"

"She doesn't appreciate me!"

Then silence. You aren't sure what it was…

But surely you're only dreaming.

You must be dreaming.

Right?


And a little end note: if you guys want anything special to happen, let me know and I'll for sure consider it! don't be scared! I already love you all so much! :)