Hey guys so chapter 1 is done yay!, it was only a preview of whats to come, so desperately i need reviews bad, Reviews help me, develop my skills on fanfics so please take the time to write what im doing wrong, and as always your feedback is appreciated.

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Regrets, Depression

Mrs and Mr loud were on their way to the Hospital they didn't bring their daughters with them as they knew that it would be hard to control them if they knew they were gonna lose their brother, They couldn't really think of anything else they were too worried for their only son, They had already told the driver if he could drive a little faster.

Lori was already at the Hospital she trying her hardest to convince the front office to let her see her brother, but they wouldn't let her, the front office told her that they are trying their hardest to save Lincoln, Lori was weeping she didn't know what to do, she just sat there empty minded, until she was being shaken she heard a manly voice "Lori? Lori... LORI!", she snapped out of it and realized she was sitting down in the middle of the floor, she looked up she saw her dad.

Mr Loud tried comforting Lori but she wouldn't stop blaming herself, she also tried explaining what happened but everytime she tried to, she wouldn't finish her sentence, she hugged her dad tightly sobbing on his clothes weeping, trying all her best to speak up all that came out "I-its my fa-fault..., i was ca-careless" a stream of tears continued running down her face,

Mrs Loud tried her best to be calm and spoke to the front office about her son, apparently they were performing everything but no results yet, it might take a long time before results are shown, the front office directed them outside of the ER, Lori couldn't face the ER she knew Lincoln was there, she couldn't face the reality she just wanted all this to be a bad dream.

Meanwhile Luna was still weeping, she was finally noticed by Lynn and Luan at the living room, Lynn asked "Hey Luna whats wrong?"

Luna replied back "It-Its Lincoln h-hes at the hospital" When she said those words she started bawling again

Lynn couldn't reply but simply look at Luna in awe

Luan quietly mumbled "We need to go to the Hospital"

Luna finally stopped crying and thinked fast "Wait guys i can call Chunk to drive all of us there!"

Lynn already ran up upon hearing this to call everyone to the living room, Luna was calling Chunk practically begging him to drive his family to the hospital, Luan was curled up just thinking about alot of things, she was saying to herself "Who will appreciate my jokes?, What if he won't be able to smile for me."

Everyone was already in the living room wondering what has happened, Luna spoke up loud "OK EVERYONE LISTEN UP, We are going to the hospital to visit Lincoln, i do now know any further than this, meaning we have to hear it from Mom and Dad"..

Sometime later in the hospital

Lincoln was in unconscious state of, He can feel himself he started questioning himself.

"Huh i thought i got hit by a truck why do i feel fine?"

A black mysterious figure approached him reached out both of his hands strangling Lincoln and shouting "huh? YOU"RE SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD!"

Lincoln couldn't fight back he saw this black mysterious figure, he saw himself, he heard himself shouting "YOU KILLED US, huh thats funny, AHAHHAA" His dark self laughing out of control, he finally said "Why did you save Lori? huh?, i thought you HATED HER GUTS!"

Lincoln started tearing up in his ears and tried to shake out of his grip but was useless...

Lincoln started to die, he didn't want to, he wanted to see everyone just to say goodbye before he died.

But the doctors couldn't do anything to save him, they were pretty devastated too knowing that they couldn't save an 11 year old boy, The doctor finally went out to break the news to them, the doctor tried his best to make it not as heartbreaking as possible but, all that came out was a fast "Im sorry Louds... we tried out best to save him".

Lori couldn't cry anymore but pleaded to the doctor "Doctor please... this isn't true is it? Doctor?".

Mr loud held her back hitting her with the reality "LORI there's nothing we can do anymore NOTHING... Im sorry Lori" She started crying more and more she couldn't control her emotions anymore, Mrs Loud also couldn't control her emotion but when she saw all the 9 kids down the hallway and approached and hug them repeatedly saying "Im sorry... Im so sorry".

The Loud kids could only hear Lori's loud crying, not long after they saw their family crying the knew what happened, they just couldn't get the right emotion, they were thinking so much how it wouldn't ever be the same without Lincoln.

Lana and Lola were bawling on their mom, they said in unison "Wh-What happened!? is Lincoln dead?", Mrs Loud faintly replied "Yes..." everyone else started crying, Luna and Lynn, Luan were able to control their emotions they were wishing this was only a bad dream, they tried anything, Pinched themselves, slapping themselves, Nothing...

Some time later... that night

They were all in the Vanzilla, no one said a word for awhile in the car ride home, it was awfully quiet than it was usual, some were softly sobbing and some were thinking how it would change their lifes in the Loud house forever, But Lori was different she was guilt driven making her softly sobbing and mumbling...

Mr loud spoke up "Listen everyone... I know its hard for everyone right now, NO one wil discuss about Lincoln until tommorow." Everyone quietly agreed "Yes...", Mr loud continued driving and finally reaching the driveway of their house, Everyone got out and rushed to their rooms respectively, Mr loud and Mrs were on the couch thinking about how Lincoln's death would greatly affect the Loud house.

Authors note: Well chapter 2 done! now onto chapter 3, what do you think of chapter 2? did i do it bad or good?