Chapter 1 rewrite!
Ok guys so after posting the first chapter of this story I got two reviews yay!, That's a start and to be honest more then I expected to begin with. If the two people who reviewed are reading this I would like to thank you for reviewing! Means a lot. I would also like to thank the person who gave me friendly criticism, I've taken no offence to it and have listened to what you have said its really helped me.
I decided to try and start again by using some advice. This is a rewrite of chapter one. Hopefully it will have less mistakes. If I'm still not getting it right Please don't hesitate to tell me I could really use the help as this is my first story and I'm dyslexic which often causes me to miss mistakes. With that said here's chapter 1's rewrite. I also hope to have chapter 2 up later today. Thanks for the support :).
I've left the original first chapter on here so you can hopefully notice a huge improvement. Once again I'd like to thank my critic! Don't forget to review please. Anyway enjoy! :D
Chapter 1
Its late, the room is dark and silent, the only noise filling the quiet room is he's deep evan breathing. I turn over to face him. He shifts slightly in he's sleep to accommodate my movement. He pulls me tighter to him. He's strong arm wrapped around me I sigh as I stare at him. Remembering he's facial features up close. I know this is the last time I'm going to be able to be this close to him. I remember just a few hours ago after we had just made love he had said with a chuckle how I was so passionate it was as if I thought this would be our last time together like it was the end of the world. Little did he know but it was. It was the end of mine anyway. Tomorrow I would be forced to turn my back on him, break he's heart. Watch cm punk destroy him.
Who am I? and who am I with? I hear u ask. Well I'm Amy Dumas known to most wrestling fans as Lita. This gorgeous man sleeping next to me is Jeff Hardy.
I can pretty much feel your confusion right about now so Let me explain. Most of you who have followed wrestling for years will know some of the story from my earlier years. Those who don't fear not I shall give a slight short story anyway. It all started when I teamed up with Matt and Jeff, known as the Hardy Boys after they saved me from Essa Rios. Together the three of us formed team extreme. Me and Matt soon began dating And we were happy together for years. Over time team extreme decided to break up and go our separate ways and me and Matt broke up. A year or so later me and Matt got back together but Kane also showed interest in me. I was forced to sleep with him to protect Matt and got pregnant. The baby turned out to be kanes but I later lost it in an accident. Matt lost he's match against kane causing me and matt to break up again and me to be forced to marry kane. I stayed with kane for awhile. Before getting back with Matt. However I began an affair with Adam aka Edge behind Matts back which Matt soon found out about causing us to break up for the final time. Me and Edge dated for awhile and then Jeff returned. Seeing Jeff again made me have second thoughts about being with Adam and we only lasted a little while longer before we both decided we weren't supposed to be. Me and Jeff rekindled our friendship and grew closer and helped each other through hard times. Such as beth breaking up with Jeff, matt betraying him, the house fire. We grow closer still and I soon began having other feelings for him that I've never felt before. I started to realise how good looking the guy was.
To cut the already long story short I went out with some friends one night got completely drunk and Returned to the hotel room I was sharing with a sober Jeff. He helped me into bed and I drunkenly kissed him and told him how I felt. Nothing else happened that night despite me wanting it to. He obviously didn't want to take advantage of me while I was drunk. And I respect him for that, We didn't speak of what happened between us until a few days later. We had been sitting in our hotel room Laying on the bed together watching finding nemo. My head on he's chest while he played with my hair. ''Amy?'' he asked ''hmm?'' I replied looking up at him. ''About the other night...'' He said ''I ment every word Jeff'' I said. ''Ok'' he nodded ''that's good cause I feel the same''. I smiled and he smiled back before leaning down to claim my lips in a sweet gentle kiss. The kiss soon turned more passionate and led to more, that night was the first time me and Jeff had been together and he was so gentle and considerate going slow and being patient with me knowing it could be a little painful for me being it had been awhile since I slept with anyone. He kept asking if I was ok and if I was sure I wanted this he gave me multiple opportunities to back out making sure I didn't feel pressured into doing this with him. And after he held me close to him I felt so protected and loved.
Since then me and Jeff have been a happy couple, Well since recently. Punk has been forcing me to betray Jeff. He's been blackmailing me and I seriously don't know how much more I can take. He's evan raped me threatening that if I tell anyone he will kill jeff and make it look like an accident.
I remember after punk raped me I went back to mine and Jeffs hotel room. Jeff must still be out drinking with the guys as he's not back yet. I climb into the shower and scrub myself until I'm red and sore getting through a whole bottle of shower gel. I finally got out and got dressed into my pj top and shorts, And climbed into bed. I would not let punk destroy me I refused to Cry I was tough.
Later that night Jeff returned and being a little drunk was horney. I woke with a start when I felt him climb in the bed behind me and wrap he's arms around me before pulling me close to him and burrowing he's face into my neck. Nipping and sucking as he's hand made its way down into the front of my shorts. Had I not been so panicked, had punk not raped me I'd have woken and known straightaway it was Jeff just by he's touch and scent. But I was recently raped and had been having a nightmare of the event so I freaked thinking it was punk in the bed with me I flinched and freaked out, Jeff was startled '' hey hey hey'' he said in a soothing voice also stopping he's actions and turning me to face him. I felt instantly better seeing Jeff and gave him a long tight hug like I hadn't seen him in years before he pulled back I reluctantly let go of him. '' what's up?'' he asked ''bad dream'' I replied. He nodded and kissed me before taking things further. He was slightly rougher in he's love making being he was drunk leaving small bite marks along my neck and chest area, but he's eyes still shone with love. Half way through I couldn't take it anymore I burst into tears, Jeff halted instantly looking down worried. ''Amy what's wrong? Shit did I hurt u?'' he asked concern shining in he's gentle voice and eyes. ''No'' I choked '' then what is it baby?'' he asked starting to pull out to get off of me showing amazing restraint some guys wouldn't have been able to stop themselves in the heat of the moment especially while drunk.'' I thought u was up for it. If u wasn't u only had to say.'' He said reassuringly. ''No Jeff'' I said pulling him to me again.'' Please I need to feel you. Its just me being emotional I just love u so much'' I begged. He hesitated for a moment before nodding and kissing me gently before looking in my eyes searching to make sure I wanted this and continued where we left off.
You ready he asks with a comforting smile. Yeah I say As he turns back around with he's back facing me. '' Jeff'' I say touching he's shoulder he turns back around a warm smile on he's lips ''yeah?'' he asked. I don't answer I just crash my lips to he's giving him a deep loving kiss which he returned. Trying to show him no matter what I loved him if I could I would rip he's clothes off and make love to him then and there one last time. Eventually we had to pull away for air. He raised an eyebrow in question ''what's that for?'' he asked. ''Nothing'' I smile. He turns as he's music starts and we walk out onto the ramp.
As we walk down smiling and smacking the fans hands I just wanna burst in to tears. As we climb into the ring and wait for edge to come out he pulls me into a hug '' u ok?'' He asks into my ear worried. I flinch when edge's music starts and he seems to think I'm worried about what edge is going to do to him. He's right in a way I am worried about edge hurting him but I'm evan more worried about punk. Punks gonna destroy him and not stop until he is completely down and out. ''Don't worry babe'' he gives me a firm squeeze before pulling back ''I will be fine'' he says staring into my eyes and stroking my cheek lovingly. I lean into he's touch and nod. When the match is about to start I give Jeff a quick kiss Our last unknown to him and left the ring. He gave me a wink before the bell went off indicating the start of the match.
The match was pretty much evan Edge and Jeff each getting equal chances at getting the belt. Jeff was down and Edge started climbing. Edge couldn't win. Punk made this very clear to me, Not that Jeff was an easier opponent then edge for him but just because he's plan of destroying jeff wouldn't work otherwise. What Jeff had done to piss punk of so much I don't know. Maybe it was because Jeff was everything punk was against with he's straight edge beliefs. I climbed into the ring the crowed roared knowing I was going to help Jeff out. I pushed the ladder edge was climbing and he fell Landing hard on the floor. I got back out of the ring and cheered for Jeff to get up Which he did and the match continued. After another 10 minutes Jeff finally had Edge trapped in the ladder as he climbed up and grabbed the belt. The bell went indicating the end of the match. The crowed went wild screaming in joy. Jeff clung to the belt and fell by the ropes exhausted.
Punks music suddenly started to play and he walked down the ramp. He gave the ref he's suitcase indicating he was cashing in he's money in the bank. The ref pretty much snatched the belt off of Jeff who was reluctant to part with it. The match began and I closed my eyes as Jeff struggled to stand by himself, Weakened by he's match with edge. The sight was unbearable for me I could tell he was in horrendous pain, And exhaustion had to be setting in. Punk pulled him into the go to sleep and I cringed at the sickening sound of it impacting Jeff. Punk covered him. 1,2 jeff kicked out That's my boy I thought always full of fight and never giving up despite the pain he must be in. Punk couldn't believe it. The fight continued and Jeff got a two pin on punk. Again the fighting continued and Jeff seemed to have the upper hand. Punk clearly underestimated Jeffs ability evan after going through the match with edge and being clearly injured limping around the ring. Jeff tried a swanton from the top of the ropes but punk managed to get he's knees up. Hurting Jeffs already sore back I cringed at the yelp of pain that came from Jeffs mouth knowing how bad Jeffs back pains were getting.
After he's matches there were times when he struggled to walk straight or. Walk and stand without holding he's lower back, a grimace on he's face. He's not so convincing smile as he tried to put a brave face on and tell me he was fine. Times when he couldn't sleep at night the tiniest movement causing him to groan. I used to help him out when a nerve got stuck. I would sit beside him while he laid on he's front and give him a gentle massage that seemed to ease the pain, I'd make sure he only took the right amount of painkillers not too many like he used too, we didn't want him addicted again. I'd put heat and cooling pads on and rub in different numb in gels into he's skin on he's lower back. who was gonna do that for him now?. I shook the thoughts away not wanting to think about it.
They were both currently laying on in the ring gasping to catch their breath. punk glanced at me. This was it he wanted me to finish of Jeff. I climbed into the ring going to Jeff making out I was checking if he was ok, the concern in my Eyes for him wasn't fake. I helped him to he's feet he leaned on me and swayed slightly and just as he got stable I kicked him hard in the stomach before delivering the twist of fate to him. He hit the mat hard And I felt physically sick that I had done that to him. I hurried out of the ring just as punk covered him for the three count. 1,2,3! It was over.
Punk collected the title belt and we walked up the ramp to the fans boos we stopped and turned back to face the ring punk pulled on my arm making me do look at him. I knew what he wanted. He wanted me to kiss him in front of Jeff. I leaned in and closed my eyes as he gave me a rough kiss. I made out I was enjoying it but inside I felt physically sick. we pulled apart and I glanced back down to Jeff who was now sitting up in the ring leaning against the ropes for support. He was Looking confused at what. Had just happened. He's eyes bore into mine. Heartbreak,betrayal and hurt the strongest emotions I felt from him right now. I gave an evil smirk and turned and walked up the rest of the ramp hand in hand with punk.