OML! Story is such Difficult for My Baccha Party…..
Arry Beta, aap Log itna Pareshan kyun ho rahy ho, its Fiction na so just Enjoy….
Khair, regarding Confusion about the matter Scream by Daya Sir and Abhijeet Sir just Shant….
OK, Think if Ill Change the Scenario and wrote that Abhijeet Sir Screaming, Readers will Complaining so much that there Abhijeet Sir was not such Person, He is Very Composed, Calm and all…
Basically, Assume, If any Accident happened against Us, I mean someone Shot in front of Us, what's our Reaction, Obviously We Screamed, Run or sobs, WHY, cz We are Not Shot, No it's a Human Reaction….
I just Portray there that Only Daya Sir knew about Abhijeet Sir Fear so He shout which mean purpose is to Call Out for help from Instructors and till His Speedy Ride, He did not see Any Instructor coming towards Abhijeet Sir, He turned Unconscious…
Second, how He forgot to Ask about that Bandage over Abhijeet Sir hand…. Yes, that's a Big Blunder by Me, but there I just showed kay Rahul and Rajeev already in Hospital told Him that just because of His panic and Scream the Adventure was Ruined so He must think that these are Reminisce of those Panic time, but I Accepted that its My Mistake, aainda aisi Ghalati Nahi hogi…
Third, the Title is PICNIC or PICK AT NICK (Pick at Nick) mean when U do anything at Nick of Time, Last Moment...
Few GUEST's find that Cigarette thing, Unnecessary or Wrong, I Admit My Blunder again and ask All Readers Forgiveness and Yes, a GUEST tells about BIASED, Baccha I already showed Daya Sir as Alcoholic…
Now, coming to again same matter of ABHIJJET Sir Centric Story or OS, One GUEST told Me that I must keep Firm, Guest also gave Me Example of ADITYA RAJAT Writer, I got it Beta, and I was Firm as regarding Posting STANDING ALONE (Sequel) either the Plot Owner RIYA Does not Like it even She Personally Suggested Me Not to Post it but I was Decided to Post it…
Here 2 Problems coming, Look I do not Singly handed that Character ABHIJEET Sir such Classically, Writers of FF Portrayed Him so its Better to Step back rather Ruined Any Character as already I Ruined Daya Sir Character as per Few Guest Readers…
Somehow, I am really Tensed regarding the Harsh Reviews as I Loved Criticism and Obviously Enjoyed it but it does not mean that I Disrespect Writer, U all plz Criticize like the way You all as its Reader Responsibility to Point Out Mistakes and Errors Presented in Story but Plz Beta, Dunt be Harsh, as Your Simpler words has the Same Voice as Your Loud tone just with a Difference that Your Loud and Rash Tones Always Echoing in Writers ear which always gives Him/Her the Fear factor to Post anything Else in Future….
A Big Thank You so much to KRITTIKA, GUEST, MISTIC, PRIYA, GUEST, GUEST, GUEST, GUEST, R, GUEST, D, SK_DUO, PARI, GUEST, SHAINA, GUEST, GUEST, GUEST, ZZZ, SHRUTI, MASOOMA ANSARI, GUEST, DHAKSHA, SUNNY, DA95, LOVE DUO ND PURVI, LIGHTMOONDT, SHIKHA SHARMA, KOCHU, KRISHNA ABHI, RIJA SAMI, DOSTIFAN, GUEST, GUEST, NUSRAT, GUEST, GUEST, DIXA and All Silent Readers….….