Before the story begins however, I'd like to read the reviews for Ch.1
First we have a review from DeMoN'S DaRk AnGeL:
Hey, this is Sarah.
The story seems pretty good so far. Though I have only seen the movie one, I noticed how well you can write the characters.
Now, there are a few grammar mistakes, but I'm not gonna get into that.
SJoR: Thanks Sarah :) And tell Brian to get off his lazy butt and review, and finish that story he said he'd write for my B-Day, it's like two weeks over due.
Next we have Fiore-Silver 45-24:
You did it, you actuslly did it, you awesome person, you!
SJoR: Aww, thanks. :3
Next up, Hexpert!:
HAHAHA! Awesome, bro, I mean it. :) You write TNBC better than TT! Awww. Barrel and the bug rock. Can't wait for the next chaappie. Just here~Hexpert
SJoR: Thank you, my sister from another mister. :)
Last but certainly not least, Pineapplepie:
Hi! I promise you I would like your story if you made a little spae between the lines so I can see who's talking and it would get easier to read. But do continue this story as long there will be LockxShock! I hope you follow my advice!
SJoR: Well, as I said this chapter will have a bit of LockxShock in it, and I know I'm going to sound weird saying this, but your pen name makes me hungry. :P
(11/27/10 Skellington house, Millie's room.)
*knock Knock* I knocked on the door to Millie's room, I wanted to show her how the jacket she and her mother made for me looked. "Come in" her angellic voice called, I opened the door and entered
"What do you think?" I asked smiling, turning so she could see the whole thing. "Two thumbs up, or at least there would be without the straight-jacket." Millie said giggling. I couldn't help but chuckle too. "So, what's up babes?" I asked, trying to start a conversation, "Oh nothing, just listening to music, would you like to join me?" She asked, patting the spot on the bed next to her I was more than happy to oblige
. She popped a CD into her CD player, and soon enough the room was enveloped in music. The first song to play was "Everybody's fool" by Evanescence.
Millie was standing by the window, looking rather disgustedly at a passing group of girls. "Humph, the Creepson sisters. They think they're just the greatest thing in town, just because they're "popular" I'll show 'em a thing or two, just you wait!" As she said this, the lights started flickering, she noticed this and started to get nervous "he he, Zero must've dug up the power cord and now he's trying to nip at it."
I thought this was strange, but immediately discredited it as nothing, The next song to be heard was "Nightmare" By Avenged Sevenfold, Millie again started acting jumpy,
she nervously got up and changed the song, claiming she's heard it too many times and was sick of it. I thought her behavior was very strange, even for her. So I thought I'd talk to her about it.
"You're acting very strange, my future queen. What's wrong?" "Nothing Barrel, I'm fine but I appreciate your concern, my future king." We parted ways with our usual kiss and "Goodbye, I love you"
Immediately after I arrived at the upper level of the tree house I heard Lock and Shock "Oh Lock, Harder!" Shock said completely out of the blue "Umm, guys, I'm home you know" I said,
rather indignantly, they didn't seem to hear me though, because I still heard Shock speaking passionately to Lock.
(Lock and Shock's room. Author's P.O.V.) "Hit him harder Lock" Shock called out half excitedly. The two, mostly Lock were playing Smackdown VS. Raw 2011. Lock, who was playing as The Edge, had just knocked out the computer, which was playing as The undertaker. "Yes!" Lock screamed out "Congratulations" shock said, completely bored out of her mind.
"What do you want to do now?" Lock asked, still bored "wanna make out?" Shock asked, half joking "Do I have a tail?" Lock asked sarcastically, Shock pretended to think for a minute before finally saying "Yes, yes you do." They then joined in a loving embrace.
A/N I apologise if this chapter wasn't as good as the first, but I've had alot going on lately and I just cobbled this together in my free time. Again, sorry if it didn't meet your expectations. Even I think it's not as good as the first, but please review, and I beg of you, no flames.