Soooo i kind of forgot i posted this, and from the sound of the few reviews i have had the response has been either its good or that my grammar is atrocious (my words not theirs) and while i fixed some of it, i do not have the time to actually sit down and turn this in to a story instead of a one shot so if you like the idea and want to continue this story just message me and tell me, mainly because i want this story to continue :) even if i cant do it myself