Disclaimer – Hi readers, well if you've read fan-fiction before you know the drill, this is a Naruto fan fiction, I DON'T OWN NARUTO OR ANY OF ITS CHARACTERS, as much as I would have liked to, it belongs to Masashi Kishimoto and I will not be receiving any money for this, I am doing this because, well simply put I love Naruto and I want to try my hand at creating a Fanfic.
I have always been fascinated with the time travel stories that I read and the Naruto ones especially, I got this idea off two of my absolute favourite stories "Chuunin Exam Day" by Perfect Lionheart and also "Time Braid" by ShaperV.
I originally was uncertain as to which characters I would like to use, although after deep consideration I decided with Hinata Hyuuga, I mean everybody choses either Naruto or Sakura to do a time loop Fanfic about, but nobody uses Hinata as their protagonist in their stories, they only use her as a romantic interest for Naruto or Sakura, and quite honestly I think that Hinata is underappreciated and I would like to change that.
So following these two amazing authors and their stories examples I have decided to use the Chuunin Exams as the starting place for my story and I hope you enjoy it.
I won't lie the first part of my story will be extremely heavy with explanations and translations so that people who have never even seen Naruto before can have a rough understanding of the guiding principle of the Naruto world, but I will be using my own character ideas, so if the characters differ from what you think they should be like, well that I think they should be so meh.
I would also like feedback positive or negative either would be helpful (although don't go too far on the negative), I am looking to learn from my mistakes so if you spot any please tell me.
I am also looking for a beta reader so if you read this and like it then send me a message and well will go from there.
Lord Olrig
If the words are in bold and underlined they are something that will be translated or explained in the first chapter or for Japanese translations, it will be at the end of the chapter. If the words are in italics then that is somebodies thoughts. If the words are in bold then they are being yelled or screamed. Also some of the story may be told in another person's point of view (which is will as of now be referring to as POW) so well….enjoy.
Chapter 2 – Introductions
(From Hinata's POW)
My name is Hinata Hyuga.
I am thirteen years old.
I am a shinobi, genin rank, on team 8 with our sensei a jonin Kurenai Yuhi along with my fellow genin; Shino Aburame and Kiba Inuzuka. I originally thought that we had been placed together because we all have hunting and tracking capabilities, Shino's clan, the Aburame, make a deal with insects, they agree to host the insects in their bodies where the insects live off of the host's chakra and in return the insects act as trackers, hunters and offensive weapons being able to drain an opponent of their chakra, the insects are also able to get rid of poison in their hosts body, making their host immune to some poisons and the clan members are shown to be able to communicate with animals. Kiba's clan, the Inuzuka, are given pet dogs, that they use in hunting and tracking missions, the clan members are given these dogs when they are young so they share a deep bond for one another and would quite literally die for one another, the dogs can be used with the clans special techniques in an extreme offensive capacity due to their excellent teamwork and the clan members are shown to be able to communicate with their dogs. I found out the truth later on, my team consisted of clan heirs, although we were not just clan heirs we come from three of the most powerful clans in all of Konohagakure and the third Hokage thought it would be an excellent idea to have us all on the same team so that he could control the danger levels of our missions more accurately than the other teams, meaning we got the least dangerous missions and we were stuck with little to no experience and no way to gain any other then "genin training" which consists of "teamwork" and other such exercise to make sure that we worked well as a team while other teams got to go on more suitable ninja missions.
I am also the heir to the Hyuga Clan, the oldest, most prestigious and powerful clan in Konohagakure. I belong to a clan that has two sections; the main family and the branch family. The main family consists of the Hyuga clan elders, and their immediate family, their children. The branch family consists of every other Hyuga clan member. I was originally repulsed by this next piece of information, the main family keeps the branch family enslaved with a cursed bird seal which is placed on the body during childhood, this allows the main family to control the branch family because the seal can be used to cause extreme pain, the seal is also used to destroy the Byakugan when a Hyuga clan ninja is killed in battle so that other ninja villages cannot steal the Byakugan or even learn it's secrets and weaknesses by dissecting it.
I possess the kekkai genkai or bloodline limit of the Hyuga clan, the legendary Byakugan a doujutsu, the Byakugan is one of the San Daidojutsu, it allows its user a near 360 degrees of vision, except for a small blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra, also the wielder gains an immediate 50 metre field of vision around themselves when the Byakugan is activated, another ability is the Byakugan can see through solid objects and can use a degree of telescopic sight, the distance and degrees of sight varies from user to user and it can be improved for example my cousin can see only 50 meters and I can see 800 meters, however there are certain barriers that the Byakugan cannot see through, such as certain ninjutsu that are designed to block sight, another and possibly the greatest ability of the Byakugan is its ability to see chakra, chakra flow, the chakra circulation system inside the body with great detail as well as the colour of chakra, it is with this particular ability that the Hyuga clan is able to use their ultimate attack style; Gentle Fist, this style focuses on attacking and causing internal injuries, each strike attacks the chakra circulatory system, when the strike is placed correctly, which is the network that carries chakra. This network is closely intertwined and linked with the functioning of the internal organs of the body and so when the keirakukei take damage, the organs suffer as well. There is no defence against the Gentle Fist style, since one cannot train their internal organs to become stronger; the only possible defence is to avoid the Gentle Fist styles attacks from connecting with your body, the Byakugan can also magnify and zoom in on certain things as well as seeing in infrared spectrum allowing the user to see heat signatures.
I loved my mother, she was kind, gentle and graceful and she loved me in return.
I am not very close to my family, have a younger sister named Hanabi Hyuga, a father named Hiashi Hyuga and a.
I hate my father because he was happy when my mother died, they had an arranged marriage and he never truly loved her, he thought she was weak because she was a female and according to my father, females are softer physically and emotionally then men and as my father has told me many times he despises and hates weakness in all its forms, and to my father there is nobody or nothing that he despises and hates more than having me as his heir and me being a female. I hate him because he favours Hanabi over me, he favours her more than me because she doesn't have to inherit his title I am sure that if she did she wouldn't be the spoilt little princess of the Hyuga clan that she is today but that is not the only reason that father favours Hanabi he also favours her for the horrible fact that she killed my mother, yes that's right, my father favours my sister because she killed my mother during childbirth and got rid of the wife he never wanted.
I hate my little sister, she killed my mother during childbirth, she is everything that I want to be, free to do whatever she wants, because she hasn't had father pushing her until she drops of chakra exhaustion and then making her get back up until she passes out, all the while fighting against somebody with three decades on her since she was six years old, no she has had all the things that she has ever desired all she has to do is go up to father and say "I want that" and he will buy it to her, but when I ask for something I get the same response as always "You won't have time to play with this or time to read that" and I have hated her ever since deep down inside, it has festered from a small seed of anger and the resentment of a little child's soul to a the blackest vilest part of who I am,
I may once have been that shy, stuttering and innocent little girl that hid herself in clothes that were too big to get rid of the hide my hate for them behind a stuttering façade that was only once true but time has changed that as time has changed my perspective on so many things, from the ones I loved, the ones I thought loved me, even the ones I knew nothing about.
I have fought my entire life, whether for the right to lead my family or the right to be able to marry whomever I want but most of all I have fought to the bone to live the life that I want to live, not the life that the Hyuga elder and my father want me to live.
I have learned to love, to truly love somebody from the bottom of my heart, from the bottom of my soul and have had that love returned, nothing can quite top that feeling of happiness of a love return whole heartedly but I have also learned the bitter taste of having my love rejected and being so broken hearted that I would rather die than continue living.
I have learned to hate and the sacrifices that either path may take me down. I have learned that vengeance is never something to be taken lightly, when partaking in the cold icy water of revenge you must remember that you will be killing yourself along with your target for vengeance to truly be successful because if you don't then you will find yourself consumed with thoughts of revenge and nothing else until the day you die even if you are successful.
I am weary of repeating the same days over and over again only for something to change and then I am forced to repeat my life's dull misery time and time again.
I am Hinata Hyuga and this is the tale of how I got caught in a time loop, how I learned that things are and have never been quite as simple as they seem and I have also learned that ignorance truly is bliss.