The Mist Chapter 2, a naruto fanfic

Last chapter was kind rushed, so I thought I would try and make this one go a bit slower. Sry, some people hate it but I am going to use more discription… but not too much.

I don't own naruto, but when my people finish with the legal documents and a couple of assasinations, I will own it…….. you do know I am kidding.

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There was a screich that sounded like an owl/mountin lion that sent chills down everyones pines and shook that house. Then something started to bang on the door. There was a heavy breathing, raspy and faint, like the thing had lived in dust. Bangig was mixed with the soud of splintering wood. What ever was trying to get in had claws.

The teens backed away from the door and ran for the kitchen, which was in the center of the house. With no windows and already lacking light, the kitchen was pitch black, not making anyone feel safer, but the noise was quieter. Then the banding and scraching stopped abrutly. They quickly started up again, but on the other side of the house, and they seemed closer, more desperate to get in.

Sasori stumbled around, looking for a shelf that might a have a match that could light a candel that may be in the kitchen. After much confusion, and stepping on peoples feet, sasori found a match and candle and lit them. The noises still continued.

"what do you think it is?" asked tobi, his voice quivered.

"who knows….. maybe its just a dog …. And its scared and is trying to get in." said konan.

"yea, un. That one kid, kiba, his older sister has dogs twice her size, maybe one of 'em got out…" deidara shuffled his feet, and looked at the kitachen door. "but those dogs are big and don't scare easy, what would make it want to burst into a house…"

The thing out side screamed again, and it moved to roof. The sounds told them it was making much faster progress on the weak shinlges than the brick walls.

"another minute and it will be inside…" said itachi, who looked at the ceiling which was violently, causing the shadows casted by the candle to dance like it was alive.

"why did it have to be this house?!" asked hidan. "there are other houses on the street, why did It choose this one?!"

"maybe it isn't just this one… maybe there are more. One for each house." Sasori started to look through the cabinets. He pulled out another candle and lit it. "but I don't think the …. Things cause the lights to go out, its just a blown fuse. The fuse box is in th basemet, we fix that, we will get more light."

"I am not going down into a dark basement to fix a stupid fuse." Kakuzu folded his arms over his chest.

"I wasn't asking, I will go alone if I have to." Sasori turned to the kitchen door.

"hey wait, no I will go with you." Deidara walked behind his bestfreind. "I mean just incase. Besies, what could happen, if anything its futher away fom the thing outside." With that both boys turnd and left the kitchen.

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"hold the cadle stead deidara, I cant see with the shadows dncing everywhere." Said sasori, he held a wrench in one hand and was working on the fuse box.

"sry, its just really cold, try fixing the heating too." Deidara switched the candle to his other hand, for the other began tp become numb. "how much longer?"

Sasori looked at the fuse box in confusion.

"don't tell me you don't know how to fix it"

"no I do…. But the problem is I can't ix something that isn't broken." Sasori looked at his friend.

Deidara's eyes widened, "what do you mean?'

"I mean…" sasori stood up. "that there never was a blow fuse. No wires were cut, nothing."

Deidara rubbed his forehead, " are you telling me that te mist has speacial power to just make electricity to stop?" he sat down and leaned against the wall.

"maybe… but then I could be that the entire area is out of power, like the nuclear plant had a malfunction or something."

"well either way, we're gonna have a hell of a time trying to explain this everyone." Deidara walked over to the a door that lead to the stairs. "god this is not good… what if it really is the mis-"

He was cut off by a crash, and the sound of broken glass falling and hitting the ground. Both sasori and deidara quickly spun around to face the darkest corner fo the basement. Near the top of the wall was one of the windows you see sitting on the ground that lead into the basement from out side, but the glass was broken.

The mist slowly krept intothe basement, bringing along its stench and chill. A low growl came rom the pitch black of the corner. Two white eyes suddenly appeared, glowing agaisnt the black and grey of the mist. Slowly the outline of the creature came into veiw. It looked like a dog, no wolf, but even then, it wasn't. as it came into the light of the candle the two teens could a full veiw of it.

The thing was indeed a wolf, but its front canines were atleast 5 inches long. Its talons were twice the length of its teeth. The fur couldn't even be considered fur, it looked more like someone had soaked already black yarn in oil and grease and thrown it over the animal. The things tail cold have been as long as 5 feet. And the worst part, was it had wings.

The wings of the beast was just a black as the rest of the body. They looked wet and decaying. Their length was atleast 7 feet, and they were neatly folded into the beast's sides. The wingspan must reach atleast 25 feet.

Sasori stared at the thing in shock, as deidara, not taking his eyes off the beast, slowly reached down to pick up a piece of plumbing on the ground.

The beast took no notice of the plumbing, it just stared into sasori's eyes, as if it were trying to hypnotize him.

"sasori…" deidara's whisper was so low it ould have been mistaken for the murmur of wind. He looked at his friend, but sasori just stared at the beast. "sasori!"

The beast took a step forward. Then another. It slowly made it way up to sasori, deidara watching gripping the rusty pipe he held, his knuckles turning white, but too scared to do anything.

With out thinking, deidara raised the pipe, the beast took no notice.

Squeezing his eyes shut, deidar let the pipe fall with all his might on the things head.

"AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'

The shreik echoed through the house.

Konan snuggled against pein, tears streaming down her face. She couldn't imagine what was happening. First they heard a crash, like the sound o breaking glass. After a few minutes of silence, the same shriek that they heard earlier rom outside happened. Then they heard someone yell, they could onely guess it was sasori from the voice. Then that, the horrible sound of crunching bones. Then they heard what soundd like a pipe hittingthe gound, then the second yell, which must belong t deidara. Now it was only sound of crunching bones.

"we need to get out!" said kisame.

"no way! If we go out, we may be making ouselves victims to more fo whatever is down in the basement." Hidan yelled.

"please don't yell, it might here us!" said konan, her voice wavered, tying ont to let out a sob.

"I think it already knows we'er here." Said itachi. He was hugging, against his will, his little brother who wasn't crying, but by the looks of it was going to definatly need coucilling if the made it out of this.

"that's enough for me, lets leave." Said zetsu. "or atleasst barricade te door to the basement so it will not omeafter is so quickly."

"NO! deidara and sasori are down there!" tobi couldn't bare the thought of his two closet friends being down in the basement alone with that thing.

"tobi... for all we know… deidara and sasor-"

"NO, they are fine. I understand leaving the house, but we are not locking the door so they can't get out!"

"okay, tobi, okay. We'll leave the house, but we wont lock the basement door." Kakuzu stood up.

Hidan looked around, "wait, when did we agree that we would leave thehouse!?!?"

"well would yourather be with your friends out in the open, or all alone in a dark house with a monster." Said pein.

"you know there would be more monsters outside!"

Suddenly there was a bang on the door to the basement.

"scratch that, lets go!"

Everyone ran out of the kitchen and upp the hallway. Itachi was the first to reach the door but he didn't go out.

"come on itach open the door, got to get out!"

"that thing will break down the door any second!"

"ITACHI!!!"

"please itachi, move so we can leave!"

Itachi stared at the handle that was in his hand. Slowly he turned it, slowly openign it into te mist, that was like a wall infront of them.

Everyone took in a breathe, then they ran out, into nothingness, slamming the door behind them, just as the thing broke down the door from the basement.

Well... it doesn't look good…. bangs head on keyboard in every. Single. Stupid. Fan. Fic. Why. Do. I. kill. Deidara. First?!?!!?!? continues to bang head on keyboard