So I got pretty good reviews on my prologue so I decided to continue with it. Here's Chapter 1. Like I said I will rarely use episodes as my structure. Here I'm going to have one small scene from the pilot episode and add my own twist.
Chapter 1 – Real Smile
Rachel stormed out of Glee rehearsal today. 'How can I be in a Glee Club with 4 other kids, the choreography is TERRIBLE! UGH! I'm going to be a star and this is not helping me get there, might as well quit.' Rachel thought as she quickly walked down the hall huffing and puffing. Before she could turn away she ran into the trophy case for the Cheerio's, she stared. There was the big 1st place trophy for Nationals and right next to it was a picture of Quinn and Coach Sue. 'Really? Quinn is the last person I would want to see. She does have a gorgeous smile. That smile isn't real, I remember when she really smiled' Rachel thought to herself.
After Rachel met Quinn at the Lima Bean she decided to hang out there every day until she saw her again. The second day Quinn walked in and she looked as if she was looking for someone. She was eyeing around the coffee shop until she saw the brunette. Quinn smiled wide and tried to play it off, little did she know Rachel saw and got butterflies. Quinn walked up to the cashier and ordered two iced coffee, I mean it was hot out. She waited got the drinks and walked straight up to Rachel Berry, Quinn thought she was the most beautiful girl she's ever seen.
"I thought I might find you here" Quinn said with a big smile handing the drink to Rachel
'Oh my… Quinn Fabray is here…for me' Rachel thought to herself wide eyed and breathless taking the drink out of Quinn's hand.
"Oh, was I too straightforward. I'm sorry" Quinn said watching Rachel's expression.
Rachel remembered how to form words and opened her mouth to speak, "No, I apologize for not speaking, you just caught me off guard. Were you really looking for me?" she said.
"Well, yes. I am new to this town why not let the great Rachel Berry be my first friend here"
'She thinks I'm great….. This girl is killing me with her words' "Oh, thank you for those kind words, sit with me then, I would love to get to know you"
Quinn nodded and sat. Both girls stayed there for hours getting to know each other very well. Both Rachel and Quinn's parents came looking for them because it was so late out. When they got to the Lima Bean they saw Quinn and Rachel sitting side by side Quinn's head on Rachel's shoulder and both were looking at a music book. Leroy and Hiram could hear his daughters beautiful soothing voice singing, they couldn't really put out the words but they knew it must have been one of Rachel's favorites. Judy and Quinn's father watched also, Quinn's father saw carefully and saw between the girl's hands and saw that their hands were interlocked. He felt a rush of anger.
"Quinn, honey" Judy called out seeing her husband's reaction.
Quinn looked up and saw her parents and quickly got off Rachel. The girl's eyes were wide, she looked scared. Her mother smiled at her to let her know it was okay and she calmed down but then she saw her father's reaction. Quinn got really shaky and turned to Rachel with pleading eyes. Rachel quickly got up and walked up to Quinn's parents, "Hello Judy it's nice to see you. I apologize for keeping your daughter late we just ran into each other and she saw my music book and her eyes filled with excitement. I felt like I really needed to show her some of the songs." Judy smiled a comforting smile letting her know it was okay, Rachel turned to Quinn's father and spoke "Hello, I'm Rachel Berry. You must be Quinn's father. She spoke about you, you must be a great man for being Quinn's hero" she said.
Quinn's eyes got wider because she saw her father's face soften and he smiled.
"Thank you for that. I'm Russell." He said simply and shortly but Quinn saw love in her father's eyes and she has never seen that before.
"Daddy, Rachel invited me to spend the night at her house. Is that okay?" Quinn said walking up to the three but eyeing Rachel's fathers behind them.
"I see no problem with that" Judy said with a smile. Russell just simply nodded and began to walk out with his wife.
Rachel turned to her dads, "Dad, Daddy. Can she?"
Her dads looked at each other and chuckled slightly. "Sure Quinn can stay with us for tonight"
Quinn just stayed quiet thinking to herself 'Didn't my dad see Rachel's two dads. I'm surprised he said yes. Maybe he didn't see them'
"Quinn" Rachel said "Let's get going."
Quinn smiled huge and nodded right before they walked out Rachel's dads offered to buy them coffee, both girls looked at each other with disgusted looks. Then they turned to where they were sitting and saw the 12 cup of empty iced coffees, Rachel's dad followed their eyes and began to laugh and started to walk out.
They began to enter the Berry home and Quinn got real nervous; when she walked in she saw and thought it was real nice and home-y. Rachel grabbed her by her wrist and took her up to her room. Quinn's heart began to race faster and faster the closer they got.
Rachel opened the door and motioned her in, Quinn walked in and Rachel closed the door behind them.
"What do you think?" Rachel asked.
"I like your bed" Quinn mumbled.
Rachel couldn't help but laugh at her remark. Quinn realized what she had said and began to stutter.
"uh, I mean…uh…nice room" Quinn said quickly
"Nice save" Rachel giggled, "well what do you want to do?"
"Can you keep showing me those songs?" Quinn said smiling wide.
She likes my voice….. Quinn Fabray likes my voice!' Rachel thought with a huge grin.
They both sat on Rachel's bed and continued where they left off. By the time they were done it was 2 am. Both girls laughed and then looked at each other briefly.
"You have a beautiful voice" Quinn said with a low voice.
Quinn felt a rush along her body, Quinn sounded hot. "Th..thhanks" Rachel stammered trying to contain herself. "Let's get ready for bed. In the guest bathroom there is always an extra toothbrush, I'll go get it for you" Rachel said as she stood up.
'Is it wrong to be strangely attracted to this girl? Rachel Berry and Quinn Fabray. That sounds so right' Quinn thought to herself as she waited for Rachel. When Rachel entered Quinn's heart dropped. She knew she was in 'like' with this girl. Rachel handed her the brush and motioned her to the bathroom.
Rachel shrugged off that memory and at that instant her phone beeped, she opened to see a text from Quinn. It said "It was real"
Rachel began to look around and saw Quinn at the end of the hallway. They shared a brief smile until Santana and Brittany walked up to her and the three headed Rachel's way.
"What are you looking at shrimp?" Santana scoffed. The three continued walking and Quinn turned and met her eye.