Hey, just going to use this chapter here for reviews.
First of all, thanks to everyone who submitted a character. Yes, they will all be used, although I do need to change some of their motives because it doesn't fit with the story. Sorry.
Guest who submitted FrostBite: Unfortunately I need to change this characters name because I already have someone called Frostbite in the story. If you want to suggest a different name you're welcome to, otherwise I'll be going with Frigid.
Venomheart the Dreamer: Thanks for telling me. I'll take this down once I have enough OCs. Just so you know, I'm not getting all the characters from this. Most are made up of my own characters.
Moonshadow: Yes, I agree with you that random motives and personalities aren't going to work in a story, which is why I have to tweak some of them up a bit. Thanks for Paradise, she seems awesome and I can really work with her personality.
Snowwing: Haha, yes Mimic will be so naive. Ah well, should be fun.
Just to point out, I have quite a lot of RainWings, SeaWings and IceWings. I have a few NightWings too, but barely any SandWings, SkyWings or MudWings. So making some more of these characters would be great.
Another thing I need to mention is no jewelry. Its not relevant to the story, and please no Jade Mountain, scrolls, Queens or weapons either. I think that's all.
Thanks to everyone!
~Skystorm
Ok, so I forgot to add a story to this chapter, thanks to The Black-Hearted Angel for reminding me. So just quickly gonna write something here.
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Darksoarer spread his night-black wings, the stars on his wing membranes gleaming in the cold light. An icy plain spread before and behind them, with strangely shaped pinnacles of rock rising from the ground. A chill wind buffeted them, and small flakes of snow were driven into his scales. Behind him, a green and brown dappled dragon shivered.
"How do the IceWings stand it?" she complained, wacking herself with her wings.
The other dragon, a mix of IceWing and SeaWing, shot her an irritated look. "Easily," he responded.
Darksoarer turned his head to glare at the two dragons.
"You have a job," he growled. "That job is not to argue."
The LeafWing dipped her head. "Sorry Darksoarer."
The IceWing/SeaWing turned his glare on Darksoarer, his luminescent blue scales pulsing.
"You don't want to pick a fight with me," Darksoarer warned.
He was quite a bit larger than the other dragon, and could pull off a really intimidating stare when he wanted to. Slush seemed to realise this too, and turned away.
"Good," Darksoarer said.
He scanned the horizon, pinpointing the landmark he wanted- a high shelf that reared above the rest of the plains. That was where he find his dragons. That was where he would take over.
That was the start of his rule.
~o~
Oh and I also need more male dragons. Thanks.
~Skystorm