Description: Write about a cat (most likely an apprentice) crossing the Thunderpath for the first time. Are they scared? Do they turn back? Do they even survive?
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"The cats that will come to the gathering, are," began Silverstar "Ivysong, Paleeye, Goldenmist, Wavecrash, Cinderclaw, Blizzardpaw, Mistpaw, and Frostpaw."
Mistpaw and her sister Frostpaw were practically bouncing with excitement.
"Oh this will be so fun!" Frostpaw said excitedly "I wonder what it will be like!"
"There will probably be a lot of cats there," Mistpaw said, getting a little nervous "I hope it will be fun though."
At that, Blizzardpaw came up to them.
"This will be my second gathering," she said, proudly "I can tell you, there will be lots of cats there, I hope I can see my friend, Lightkit, again."
"This is going to be awesome!" Said Frostpaw.
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Mistpaw and her clanmates were making their way towards the gathering, when she smelled something foul. It was the disgusting stench of the thunderpath. She had seen it once before on a tour of the territory.
Mistpaw's mentor, Wavecrash, looked down at her.
"We're going to cross here," he said "It's the fastest way to get to the gathering."
"We'll cross first," continued Paleeye "So then you can see how it's done."
"Alright," Mistpaw said with a nod
Mistpaw and Frostpaw watched closely as their mentors looked side to side, watching for monsters.
Then suddenly, they both made a break for it.
The rest of the group ran across as well, then it was Mistpaw's turn.
She turned to look. No monsters appeared to be coming at the moment.
She must have done something wrong though. Maybe she had hesitated to much, maybe she forgot to look the other way, or maybe she just wasn't paying attention, because the next thing she knew, something rammed into her and everything went black.
The End.