Fire and Coal makes ash's

by MarcoPerez10

What if Four/Tobias never transferred to dauntless, and died with his dad and mom when they get robbed when he was 12?What if Will did not die? What would life be like? I can only tell you one thing- not even close to the same. Please review :-) you will

2. Getting there, Peters POV

Authors note: please review if you like/dislike and why, and please don't judge based of couples/no Four.

Guest: Thanks for reviewing- but don't judge

Let's start! 8-) (y'all like my new smiley face? I'll be using it alot from now on)

PS. Peter is mostly Abnegation (LOL) 8-)

PPS. I have decided that this story will probably be mostly from Peter's POV, maybe Cristinas too?

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Peter's POV

When we get to the rail road I know what we are doing, jumping into the train. At this point I still really do not care what happens to me, who does? When I jump I almost miss it but two girls pull me up onto the train. "My name's Be..." the burrnete from earlier starts to say "Tris", the other corrects, "And my name's Cris" then Cris starts laughing, Tris lightly giggleing and for some reason I can't help but smile."Those are stupid names." A rather large and super ugly looking girl sneers at them. "Not really..." I say out of instinct and I'm cut off. "How's that?" Cris says, man she's talkative. "Cris is a boy's name and Beatrice is better then Tris, how childish to change it" "What, you prefer old fashioned names?" Cris and Tris retort at the same time "Yeh, my name is Molly for goodness sakes" the girl, Molly, says."Like the American Girl?Tris says tentatively, then picking up speed,"is your last name the same as hers too" then I add in "you know that was popular in like 2009 or something?"This was kind of funny, and I just want to distract myself from the voices inside of my head. "You know she has the same color hair as you and is fat too so it would make sense" Cris laughs. I notice Tris's and my mood turning around for the better, even if I would still take a bullet for her, Cris or anyone without caring ... but maybe not that Molly girl? Maybe I will find friend's I think... just don't get my hopes up and it might work. But my hopes are up and I know it, my brain just don't want to admit it. But deep inside my heart I know something special has happened. And then I think that I can't be friend with people like that, I'll just let them down. Then I decided I'll hang with the bullys, for the sake of Tris and Cris. Why can't things like this have a good ending?