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Bewares of this chapter: Bad langue and violence
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Chapter 1:
"The fight for justice"
The screaming continued for a while. I had to get this right: I killed an innocent teen, I got struck by lighting and I got turned into TWO persons at once... Could this gay get any stranger?
"I really don't think my foot is meant to sit that way..." The other Daniel suddenly said. I looked down at his foot. It sat the wrong way, pointing backwards. How disturbing!
"Or what do you think?" He continued, "The funny part is that it doesn't hurt..."
"Lucky you! My whole body hurts a lot. Especially my foot!" I said, slightly annoyed. The boy in front of me just smiled.
"Hehe, I get the scratches and YOU get the pain! Awesome for me!"
That... That THING seemed to ENJOY That I was hurting! That little..!
"Yeah, funny. But YOU will be the one who needs to get his foot sitting correctly." I answered to get him silenced.
He looked thoughtful for a second and said: "But if you get the pain..." His smile confused me until I got what he was about to do. "Then what happens if I..." He quickly sat down in the grass and turned his foot around.
There was quiet for a little moment.
"AAAUUUUCHH!" He wailed. "AUCH! FUCK IT HURTS!"
I looked at him feeling a little disgusted. He tried to harm me! "I don't think that was very clever. You tried to make MY foot hurt didn't you?"
"And what if I did?" He said angrily. "It didn't work anyway!" I was right.
He stayed down for a while, rubbing his foot. I felt disgusted. He was clearly acting evil, but I would let the doubt save him for this time. The Dan-looking boy suddenly looked up at me again, looking angry.
"What?" He snarled. I looked thoughtfully down at him a moment more, before I answered his question.
"You're not Dan..." I said.
"Um no, as I already told you!" He hissed. He clearly didn't like me.
"And you don't look like my former body..." I continued thoughtfully.
"Hey, not YOUR body!" He said angrily. "It was mine too, remember?"
I ignored him and said: "Then you must be... A demon!"
I chose demon because he actually looked like one. Pointy ears, red eyes, unnatural hair, inhuman blue skin... Not looking like a human at all!
"Oh yeah," He said sounding sarcastic, "then I MUST be a demon. Of course! How did I NOT see that?" He was trying to say something more, but I quickly interrupted him to stop the beginning discussion. "Good, then we're agreeing. Now what?"
"Now we can call you an angel. If I'm a demon, then you're an angel. End of that." He said.
Angel... That actually fits me now, I thought. With me new wings and all... I nodded
"I need to ask you a question," I said calmly, "are you good or evil?"
I had to know it. As a hero I can't attack good ones, but I will bring justice to the evil!
"Um..." He said. That was all the answer I needed.
"I knew it! You got all the evil of my former body! Just listen at yourself! You talk like an evil, your laugh like an evil, you act like an evil, your humor is dark LIKE AN EVIL, holy mother, you even look like an evil!"
"Yeah, because looking evil is clearly a crime!" He said angrily.
"Then prepare yourself!" I declared, lifting up a fist, glowing in light blue energy, the same color as my eyes, a color I actually liked. I swung my fist, punching him down at the grass.
"What the...!" He said, looking shocked. I swung the other hand and hit him again. "I don't want to fig..." He said before I ectoblasted him further away from me. Suddenly he looked just as evil as I guessed he was. He quickly jumped to his feet, hand glowing in red ectoenergy, and shot me in the stomach. I fell backwards, which gave him time to get ready for round two.
The fight continued for a long, long time. We both seemed to be weaker than we were as one person, clearly because of the separation.
In the end, He tried to use his ghostly wail. Idiot, I thought.
All that happened was that he screamed out loud and fell to the ground reverting back to human form. I felt sick. His human half was twisted and wrong, looking more like a vampire than anything else.
I stopped attacking him.
"Even in human form, you look evil," I said. He looked up at me from the ectoblood-covered grass He sat in, looking slain. I continued. "I really thought that you would have figured out, that, because of our separation, we're no longer as strong as before. The ghostly wail has clearly become too much for us to use. You're not only a demon, you're an idiot too. I'm feeling ashamed to have once been the same person as you. And if I ever, let me repeat, EVER see you near Amity again, I will not hold myself back for ending your life. Understood?" I couldn't have him in Amity anymore. He was evil!
He just nodded. He seemly had nothing to add, no annoying comments or attitudes.
"Now, get out of my sight!" I snarled. I really had to hold myself back from just killing him. He turned away from me and walked into the woods, away from Amity Park. My job was done.
Now what? What was I going to do now? I couldn't go back to my parents, but if I was lucky, Amity's townsfolk would accept me again. But what if they didn't? What if they blamed me for Dashiel's death? What then?
"PHANTOM!" A sound behind me called. I turned surprised around.
It was the people of Amity. I looked at them. At the red and green blood in the grass. Back at them.
My mom walked in front. "What..?" She said shocked. I sighed.
"There are a lot of things I need to tell you," I said, "please listen..."
And, here we stops. Cliffhanger? Hehe! Oh well, I'm updating this at last. (about time!) I really hopes you like it! You know it, three reviews = update!
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