Thanks so much for all the reviews!!:
RVG, Jieli, Pockygirl-2002, Shaolin 10, FearOfDying, Hiei Dragon Girl, Master Ruby, Frankie, Pharaoh'sJewel, (asterisk, tilde, apostrophe)Mrs. Ishtar(apostrophe, tilde, asterisk), Disturbedvixen, Seto'sFan, Naphatarie, Demented Insane Spirit, Tikaru, Sorceress Vanessa
I'm very sorry if I spelt your pen name wrong or forgot you completely. It's not intentionally. (for Mrs. Ishtar, as some of you may know, you can no longer put asterisks [the little stars] or the tildes [squiggly lines] in fics because they get erased. That was my creative way of putting them there…sort of)
I guess that even though the whole fic's dedicated to Demented Insane Spirit and Shaolin 10, I shall dedicate this chapter to Master Ruby because she's my friend and this chapter is about Seto (who she happens to like). Anyways, onto the chapter. Please review. Sorry that I take forever to update.
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My Life Is Slowly Fading
M
okuba; my reason to keep going onY
et I think he'd be better off with me goneL
ies and tears, always told, never fallI
can't even remember how I lost it allF
orever misfortune follows me 'roundI
t creeps up behind me, not making a soundS
ometimes the pain, it erases what's realS
o I then cut myself, knowing that it will healL
imb by limb, I am falling apartO
ften more darkness surrounds my heartW
ill I get rid of my past, erase all the hate?L
et me attempt to before it's too lateY
ear after year, I fail once againF
orget all this pain, I just want it to endA
fter feeling the worst, I just want to goD
eath will come soon, and everyone will knowI
can't deny it, my true colors will showN
o turning back, but the future looks bleakG
ripping to fantasy, I can't help but feel weak...----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Just a friendly reminder: Please review. Any suggestions would be very welcome. And the reason the last lines are kinda messed up is because I'm an idiot who can't count and thought the message was 20 letters instead of 19, so I had to have three lines rhyme instead of two at one point. If that made no sense, just forget everything I said.
