Hi, everyone! This is chapter two and I'm trying to figure out how often I should update since this will be a very long story and I'm putting Life is full of Surprises on hold until this is done and I'm just so excited! I think this is a really good idea and I would love to see some reviews and I have a feeling that once time passes this might have a chance to be a really popular story here on Fanfiction. I'll also be working on 18 years with my good friend SimonXJeanette99 on 18 years and we would love reviews on that story as well. Enjoy and please review.
The camera zooms in on the beautiful land and on the Miller's treehouse with Jeanette's theme playing as it introduces the main characters, and foreshadows the big journey later. (Jeanette's theme is a mixture of soft piano and violin kind of like the music that starts off Finding Nemo, only softer and perhaps more high-pitched)
As the camera zooms in, it goes into a bedroom and we see a young female chipmunk. It's Jeanette. Her voice is faint at first, but we see her father trying to sleep.
"First day of school, first day of school! Wake up, wake up! Come on, first day of school!" Jeanette yelled, jumping on her father. It's been three months since the incident, and Jeanette's leg is now scarred badly, but she can use it very well much to her family's surprise.
"Ah, I don't wanna go to school! Five more minutes!" Manny whined. How ironic.
"Not you, Dad! Me! Get up, get up!" Jeanette said, nuzzling Manny and running around.
"Okay. Huh?" Manny said as Jeanette nuzzled him. He got up on his feet and we hear Jeanette yelling "time for school" nonstop in the background. "Okay, I'm up for school." Manny said, half asleep. "Time for school! Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! WHOA!" She yelled falling backwards out the window. Manny snapped awake.
"JEANETTE!"
"First day of school!" Jeanette said, muffled because her head was stuck in a tree stump. Manny gasped. "Jeanette, don't move, don't move! You'll never get out of there yourself. I'll do it." He wrapped his trunk around his daughter and they both strained as Manny tried to pull her out. As soon as Manny pulled her out, he pushed he inside the house.
"Okay, where's the break? You feel a break?" Manny asked, overreactingly freaking out.
"No." Jeanette answered calmly.
"Sometimes you can't tell 'cause fluid's rushing through the area. Now, any rushing fluids?" Manny asked.
"No." Jeanette said, starting to get annoyed.
"Are you woozy?" Manny asked, holding his daughter upside down.
"No."
"How many toes do I have?" Manny asked, holding up his foot.
"I'm fine." Jeanette muttered.
"Answer the toe question!" Manny yelled.
"Three."
"NO! See, something's wrong with you! I have one... two, three. That's all I have?" Manny started calming down. "Oh. You're okay. How's the lucky foot?" Manny asked.
"Lucky." Jeanette answered, lifting her leg up.
"Let's see. Jump." Manny instructed. With difficulty, Jeanette jumped up to give her father a high five. "Now sweetie, are you sure you wanna go to school this year? There's no problem if you don't. You could wait nine or ten years." Manny said, being absolutely over-protective. Jeanette rolled her eyes.
"Come on, Dad! It's time for school." Jeanette pulled her father's trunk impatiently.
"Ah, ah, ah! Forgot to do camouflage practice." Manny said. "Oh." Jeanette groaned in annoyance, rolling her eyes. "Do you want a hungry predator to get you?" Manny asked, reminding her why he set up this procedure.
"Yes."
"No, you don't. In the bush!" Manny pointed. Jeanette sighed and jumped in the bush. After a few minutes, the bushes rustled and Jeanette came out.
"Okay, I'm done!" Manny grabbed her playfully. "Uh-uh! A hungry bear got you!" Jeanette laughed loudly as her father tickled her and growled playfully as if he was a bear.
Okay guys, please review. I'll be back to update in a couple days.
