Dont steal or i will eat you!

"Lets do this I am tired of being in this stupid small house, Gothel is not even my real mom. So why would I care for the woman who took me from my real family?", she said in front of her mirror, while gripping her heir with rage for the old women. She gripped her hair waist length, with one hand, scissors in the other hand. She took a deep breath.

"On three." She said as she closed her eyes and took the scissors to her hair.

"One."

She raised her arm were she was gripping her hair.

"Two"

This time it was only a few inches a way.

"Three", and with that she saw her hair fall from were she was gripping her hair from.

It became brown which was new to her, she looked in the mirror-her brown hair looked better on her then it did blonde. She felt relieved it looked good, but did Gothel die in a market? Or the forest? Because Rapunzel was her life source, and who knows how old Gothel was.

She still needed to leave, she went to the seller, she saw the door that Gothel would leave from, it was just a seller door but in that moment it was a door to her freedom. As she tried to kick it open for what seemed for years, but finally she got it open, and got out of her prison, she smelled the outside-it was freedom at that moment trees and grass were a symbol of freedom to her.

She ran back to her prison and got a basket that Gothel would use, but this time Gothel didn't take it. She put as many things she possibly can. She made herself a cloak, when she asked Gothel once to leave the tower and see the lanterns, that was when she was going to escape, but she didn't end up going, Gothel refused to let her see the lanterns, and that was when she made the cloak, especially for this. Repunzel new one day, she'd escape, and that day is today. It was a dark purple cloak. Very warm, for the cold temperatures in the night, and big to cover her face if she comes in contact with trouble.

Walking around in the forest, Rapunzel didn't now, so she just wandered around looking at every single little thing from rocks to the vain of aunts on trees, her big green eyes were filled with wonder.

She was only a couple of miles from the prison, but as she walked and walked, she could start to pick up sounds, sounds of people, as she got closer, there was a pond but it was frozen over, her bare feet started to get cold, she stepped back, falling and landing on snow covered grass, only to hear laughing, she looked up to see a small figure, it was a girl, she had brown shoulder length hair, with a brown dress with things on her feet. Rapunzel had never seen things like that, the little girl was looking and giggling at someone. Rapunzel directed her gaze to were the little girl was looking at, it was a boy, he looked to be Rapunzel's age. He had brown hair with a white long sleeved shirt and brown ripped pants, she got a glimpse of his eyes they were a chocolate brown and he was wearing the same thing the little girl was on his feet. She couldn't help but to think the boy was handsome. From the books she's read, theirs a thing that goes "Love at first sight", and Repunzel might have experienced just that... or he's the first male she's ever seen her life. She asked herself, "Are they all as handsome as him?"

She left from behind the bush she was hiding from. Those were the first people she;s ever seen, other than Gothel, before she can be discoverd, she leaves the two be. Walking away, she was determined to start her life, where will she start? Ever since Gothel found out that Rapunzel found out about her parents, they moved (more like threaten to kill her parents if she wouldn't go) to a small house in the middle of a forest, but she didn't no what to do. First this was not the forest in Corona, it smelled different the grass wasn't as wet as the grass in Corona, but that didn't stop her, she needed to see how far from home she was.

Rapunzel didn't now but she strated daydreaming about the boy from the pond, what was his name? She took another step and it was a hole she screamed as she fell on her back with a thud, but she also heard someone else scream, that's when the blue from the top of the hole went blank and so did her mind.

So my first chapter please comment like all that good stuff and i will try to update when i can.
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