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Chapter 2:
Tris POV:
Four jumps on her before she can shoot at anyone else. I look at Ricardo and Honesty that she missed, just like usual. I let out a sigh of relief. I turn to see Honesty pined on the ground with Four on top of her. He looks at me and says, "Go get Tori, Zeke, or Lauren."
I run to Tori's office and she that she isn't in there. I go to Lauren's office and realize that she wouldn't be there because she was training the dauntless born initiates. I go to Zeke's office and knock on the door.
"Come in," he says. I open the door and walk in.
"Wassup Tris?" he asks.
"We have a problem with one of the initiates," I tell him.
"What kind of problem?" he asks.
"She shot at another one of the initiates," I say.
"Okay, let's go sort this out. We better go find Tori," he tells me.
"We should start at the tattoo parlor," I suggest and we leave. Tori is, indeed, at the tattoo parlor drawing a sketch.
"Tori, there is a problem with one of the initiates," Zeke says as Tori looks up.
"Let's go," Tori grumbles not wanting to be taken away from her work. We go to where Lauren is training the initiates and bring her, and the dauntless born initiates, to where Four and I are training the transfers.
"What's the problem," Lauren asks.
"One of the initiates decided that it would be a good idea to shoot at another initiate," Four says.
"Oh dear, did the other initiate get hurt?" Tori asks.
"Luckily not," I say.
"Let's go get your things packed," Zeke says and grabs Honesty's shirt, "the next train is in 20 minutes."
"What?" Honesty asks.
"There is to be no harming of another initiate except while fighting during initiation," Lauren recites the rules.
"I didn't know," Honesty defends herself.
"Maybe if you were paying attention at the chasm you would remember me saying this," Four says.
"Let's go," Zeke says pulling Honesty out of the room. I turn to the rest of the initiates who are just standing there watching us.
"Get back to work!" Lauren yells and they all turn back and start shooting again. Lauren takes her initiates and goes back to their training. In twenty minutes all the initiates can hit the middle. I look at my watch and see that it is ten to twelve.
"Lunch," Four beats me to it.
Temperance POV:
At lunch I am the first someone to sit down. I have macaroni and cheese. It looks really good. Makenna comes and sits across from me. Followed by her is Axel, Sam, and Penelope. They seem nice. I haven't really talked to anyone yet, but I heard all of them talking last night while I was trying to sleep. I can tell a lot about them now.
Makenna has short red curly hair and brown eyes. Her personality is sweet and she loves helping other people. I wouldn't be surprised if she has an aptitude for Amity because she is a very peaceful person. She is dating Sam, another transfer initiate from Candor, and I wouldn't be surprised if he is the reason she came to dauntless.
Sam has blonde hair and brown eyes. He has a mouth on him. He talks loudly and he mostly uses curse words. He seems really into his relationship and I truly believe that he and Makenna will be together forever. He is also really good with a gun. Sam was not the first person to hit the target, but he was the first to hit the middle.
Tyrell has black hair and dark brown eyes. His skin is dark and he is really skinny. Tyrell told the other transfers that he goes by Ty so nobody calls him Tyrell. He is very tall I would say about 6 foot 3. I don't really know anything else about him.
Ross has dark brown hair and light blue eyes. He has tones muscles and I wouldn't be surprised if he had a six-pack. He is a total player I heard him flirting with all the girls except Makenna, Lucille, and myself. I think he is dating an erudite girl, Dani, but something tells me that won't last long.
Wyatt has sandy blonde hair that is chin length. He has hazel eyes. I've known him my whole life but we have never been close. He never struck me as a dauntless but I never thought I would be dauntless either and look where I am now. Back to Wyatt. He is a buff guy and he is the son of the Amity representative Johanna Reyes.
Sierra is this little girl with black hair down to the bottom of her butt and dark brown eyes that are so dark you can barely see her pupil. Her skin is darker than mine, but lighter than Ty's. (I don't know how to say it without using the word Asian. She is Asian). She seems really gentle. I don't think she can hurt a fly.
Bev has dirty blonde hair and grey eyes. She is really smart and likes to tell all of us about everything. She is really intimidating. Not as intimidating as Four, but the most intimidating out of all of the girls. I am completely afraid of her. I would not want to fight her.
The most intimidating boy in this year of transfer initiates is Cole. He is well built and is tall. He could probably kill me with one punch. His hair is black and his eyes are green. I don't know what he is like because I'm far too afraid to get near him. I always glaring at everyone like he holds a grudge against all of them.
Dani is probably the dumbest ex-erudite you will never meet. She is a stereotypical blonde with blue eyes. She is really flexible though. She is also a total slut she would sleep with anything that walks. Like Ross. I'm pretty sure that it already happened in the girl's bathroom.
Ricardo has shoulder length dark hair he is quiet and likes to read. Yesterday after Tris and Four had left us alone he went straight to the bookstore and bought seven books. He doesn't have any tolerance and is incredibly impatient. While everyone was talking he wanted quiet for his reading and he started yelling at everyone and they told him they would be quiet soon but he couldn't wait and drive his fist straight through the wall.
Penelope is the loudest person in the world she loves to just scream. Not at people and not for any reason she just screams. Last night she sat in her bed and just screamed. She doesn't say anything else she just screams. She has abnegation length hair that she dyed pink last night.
Axel has dark brown hair and piercing blue eyes. He loves to say the words "dude" and "like".
"Dude like you must totally bang that abnegation girl she is sexy like I'm serious dude". I can't say he is the most annoying initiate in my initiation, but he comes pretty close. His eyes are beautiful to stare into though. I could look at them all day.
Raven is the most annoying initiate. She thinks everyone loves her and like Dani she is a slut. I can't stand people like that and she also is really tough. She has curly black hair that is waist length and hazel eyes.
Lucille is the quiet abnegation girl, but I like her. Her quietness is a buffer from the annoying and loud people in the dorm rooms. She was the only person who tried sleeping last night. She has light brown hair and hazel eyes. I really think we could be great friends.
I see Makenna snapping in front of my face and she says, "Hey, Temperance, where did you go for the last five minutes? I thought you spontaneously died just now."
"Just deep in thought," I tell her.
"Well then get out of thought because we are going to get tattoos," she says.
"Let's go!" I say excitedly. I can't wait to pick out a tattoo. When we get to the tattoo parlor Makenna goes to a book with sculls, Sam goes to a book of planets, and Axel goes to a book of weapons. I start looking into the first book I see. I look through the first couple pages have nothing meaningful. I reach a page that has exactly what I want. I look over to the tattoo artist.
"I'll take one of these," I say and hold up the book and point to the one I want.
"Okay, where do you want it?" the lady asks.
"I want the rope to go up my back and down my stomach. Like a sash," I tell her. I know my mother would love the gesture I am making to not forget her.
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